Date: 02/26/09 04:27 pm Title: One After the Other
LOVED IT!! :D I'm so glad she got away from Tom. I was hoping she wouldn't give in to what he wanted. lol Kêep up the awesome writing :P :)
Author's Response: indeed. if she stayed, some shizz would go down. haha =P lol i'll try not to suddenly screw everything up!!
Date: 02/25/09 05:22 pm Title: One After the Other
:O:O:O::O:O:O!! TOM!!!!! :O moree
Author's Response: ya ya! there will be more!
Date: 02/25/09 03:52 pm Title: Shady and Troublesome Past
and btw what's wrong with you you can always talk with Tomi you know right :)
Author's Response: haha of course tomi!!! i could never stop talking to u ;]
Date: 02/25/09 03:38 pm Title: One After the Other
Love it! LOVE IT! But poor Mara. Tom is such a jerk against her. Bill is nice though, but I feel like he have som hidden intentions, anyway I'm still not sure...
But keep it up! I really like this! :D
Author's Response: haha well anything's possible. ^_^ (that's my not-giving-anything-away face). THANKIES!
Date: 02/25/09 09:10 am Title: One After the Other
Now first of all do you even remember me for god's sake how long has it been? two months kind of thing... I mean I started to think that you forgot about the story or something... And btw a bit rough this days ha :D tom almost raping her :) and Bill being diffrent :D write soon I swear I'll swear and won't right anymore
Author's Response: lol of course i remember u! and has it rly been that long? holy shizzles. i would never forget about this story! i kept getting stomach aches coz i was so upset that i couldn't write. haha yeah i changed some things xD NO!! KEEP WRITING!!!
Date: 02/25/09 08:38 am Title: One After the Other
Gah! I waited to long!
Its such a relief for me too.
The crave to read more of this story was killing me. Please continue with more. I cant wait!
Dont torture! && Update SOON!
Author's Response: ok! ok! but first i gotta get to my other story. the ppl that rd that one are probably pissed too V.V i'll try not to be torturous!
Date: 02/24/09 11:29 pm Title: One After the Other
Love the conflict between Bill and Tom. It's really sweet and saddening. Take your time to write if that's what you need. I'm just happy to read =) !
Author's Response: u have no idea how much i appreciate that! lol
Date: 02/24/09 10:55 pm Title: One After the Other
OMG. JUST....OH MY GAH. I MEAN. TOM WAS SERIOUSLY READY TO RAPE HER. FUCKING RAPE! WTF HAPPENED TO HIM????? Aw, sweet moment when Bill looked at her warmly :3 Geez...I hope everything is cleared up soon D:
Author's Response: yepp. he certainly isn't the best of fellas. xD haha it was, and i'm sure i will. probably...^.^
Date: 02/24/09 08:37 pm Title: One After the Other
OMG! YAY! UPDATE! WOO! that was intense! I really loved it! and what a sweetie bill is :) lol :)
Author's Response: i kno!!! i was like, sweating while i was writing it. lol not rly, but still. haha indeed he is. i've had enough of making him look bad.
Date: 02/18/09 07:35 am Title: Why, Hello Again
OMG! I've just read thw whole thing. And I really know how Mara had it in the beginning. I could really relay on her. Not because I've been in a reality show, but my past is haunting me. And I'm also scared of bumping into som spesific persons, and nobody will let me forget this stupid mistake I did half a year ago. And actually an girl with orange hair was a part of this, not me 'cause mine is red/brown, but another girl with really orange hair. It was a bit creepy how alike it all was.
But I love the story, it's totally one of a kind in here. Not many have come up with a plot like this, and I like it. And I LOOOVE the relationship between Mara and Chace. They are so incredibley funny. And the twins piss me of, of course. Bad bad twins... Sharon is also cool, just as hyper as me. I love it.
I love your stories, I think you might know that by now. So just keep up your humorous writing, 'cause I've fallen in love with it! :D
Author's Response: omg every time i get a review like this my hear just goes KABAM!! yes. kabam. it's a unique sort of explody feeling (and yes i realize that's not a real word either). i love that u love my story and i keep up the humor precisely for readers like u x] haha i'm glad u can identify w/ my characters. i make them the way i do exactly for that purpose. thanks for the A-M-A-Z-I-N-G review!!!
Date: 02/04/09 07:34 pm Title: Why, Hello Again
Oh I can't wait to see what happens next. :D Keep up the good work. It's really good :)
Author's Response: =DD thanx. sry it's taking me so long to update. i probably wont get to till the end of the week V.V
Date: 01/29/09 05:49 pm Title: Why, Hello Again
the old times sound pretty yummy=D
she should go for it *naughtythoughts*
hahaxD
ilthis!
Author's Response: lmfaoo that's probably wat i would do, but i'm not so sure about Mara. she's more sophisticated than me V.V
Date: 01/29/09 05:03 pm Title: Why, Hello Again
woot woot :]
amazing ^^
Author's Response: thank u thank u =D
Date: 01/29/09 04:57 pm Title: Why, Hello Again
more please :D
Date: 01/29/09 09:13 am Title: Why, Hello Again
If I was Mara I make him hard and then leave him there to die *evil thoughts* he ruined her life I mean come on only one friend If I have only one friend I would be dead I think :D pleasee :D make Mara make Tom misrable :D (and sorry for awful grammer I don't know where my mind is)
Author's Response: ooooooooooooo me likes that idea!! i hope u found ur mind btw.
Date: 01/29/09 08:19 am Title: Why, Hello Again
Omg! Hell No!
She BETTER not fall that low - with that conceited jerk!
Hasnt she ha enogh?
If she is so smart - she would know better...
More, Please!
Update Soon!
PS.I think Bill would be so much better too....
Author's Response: heyhey! no offending the lovable main character!! haha jk. she IS a smart cookie but u'll have to wait and see. and so will i coz i still don't have anything planned. ugh.
Date: 01/29/09 12:58 am Title: Why, Hello Again
Oh, Tom's so arrogant now!!! I'm kinda hoping that he gets slapped lol.
Can't wait for the next chappie, tho :D
Author's Response: he sure is!! he deserves a good spanking. ooo...-drools- =P
Date: 01/28/09 09:05 pm Title: Why, Hello Again
I am soooo jealous of Mara! lucky bitch. I wish Tom would take me back to his place and ask me to test out the bed! thanks for the update hun!
Author's Response: xDDD i kno rite? haha no prob.
Date: 01/25/09 12:17 pm Title: Nothing 'Driver' About it. You're Just Screwed.
Nice! Write more soon!
Author's Response: =DD i shall
Date: 01/22/09 01:34 am Title: Nothing 'Driver' About it. You're Just Screwed.
Ah! >:O
What the hell is her problem???? D:
Does she get away?
Or does Tom somehow save her...?
Great Update!
More soon???
Please??? :D
Author's Response: those are all very good questions. all i have to say in response is: dun dun DUUUUUN. x]