Date: 05/04/09 01:47 am Title: Alberto Balsalm
OH GOD... so tomi got a past... who doesnt? XD hmm this is gettin interesting n ben n todd! who would have guessed?!
Date: 04/30/09 05:44 pm Title: Alberto Balsalm
Hmm, it was a bit confusing because it seems like everything just went into fast forward mode and there wasn't much leading up to some things? if that makes sense :p
Date: 04/29/09 09:59 pm Title: Alberto Balsalm
Woah... This is way good. Just stumbled on this and I can't believe there aren't more reviews! Come on! Heh it's a little convoluted and fucked up, but it works. I do wish that there will be more regarding Bill and Tom next chapter, as there's been a huge load of content regarding Ben and Todd (not complaining).
It also took me a while to figure out what time period they were in (didn't know geishas still existed!) but I got it in the end. Also, I personally want some explanation as to Tom and his friend's backgrounds, why they're in trouble with the yakuza, etc.
Anyway, this is the freshest story I've read in a long time and I love it! If you still need a beta, I'm totally willing to do it. I've betad before, and I am quite a grammar/spelling nazi. If interested, my email's tenniscookie@hotmail.com.
Author's Response: Well I do have some answers. Um, I haven't reviewed in...months and it was all going well until I lost my beta and muse but I've had this chapter for so long and just never posted it. Yes, as we journey deeper into the story, things will unravel. I just needed filler for a bit to release tension with Bill and Tom. Well time period...modern day I guess. In Kyoto, Japan it's super rural and carriages and other older technologies are used. There are at least 2,000 geisha today compared to 80,000 back then (around 1900) I'll do that! Thanks :)
Author's Response: Well I do have some answers. Um, I haven't reviewed in...months and it was all going well until I lost my beta and muse but I've had this chapter for so long and just never posted it. Yes, as we journey deeper into the story, things will unravel. I just needed filler for a bit to release tension with Bill and Tom. Well time period...modern day I guess. In Kyoto, Japan it's super rural and carriages and other older technologies are used. There are at least 2,000 geisha today compared to 80,000 back then (around 1900) I'll do that! Thanks :)
Date: 04/27/09 11:19 am Title: All I Need is a Colt .45
hmmm... first of all I'm a Japan fan too D:
this storie is amazing! how everything starts, how one can feel bill's desires the feelings that are opressed by been geisha! its just fantastic how he struggles and then suddenly Tom appears, too many questions are inside my head but im sure as this goes on everything will b answered, still what does Tom do in fact, and the adoption thingy by hitomi~chan? Anyway hope soon they can b stable and well, hope u can keep writting too ^^
Author's Response: Gosh, I guess I got my point across. Well, I'm planning to update tonight (not sure what time period you're located in) but the grammmar will be sorta half-ass. I don't have a betaer anymore so T.T I hope you like the new chapter. Actually I haven't updated in months. :) Thank. You. XD
Date: 04/25/09 05:31 am Title: All I Need is a Colt .45
Oh I am so sucked in now....
Date: 01/24/09 12:10 am Title: Come As You Are
:O
Author's Response: DX
Date: 01/21/09 07:30 pm Title: All I Need is a Colt .45
Hahaha. Rupert Grint, huh? xD He's pretty cute. and at the beginning of the story, i thought it was Bill, Gustav and Andi in the picture Bill was looking at and I got confused because Bill would have been looking at a picture of himself and then i thought maybe he was kidnapped and doesnt remember his past. then i wondered why Georg wasn't in the picture but of course, it's not even them xD
Author's Response: ohh! ahah, good guess though, i didnt even think of that! si. he is very handsome and awkward :) if you like him, i recommend 'driving lessons' very good movie XD thanks!
Date: 01/21/09 05:52 pm Title: Come As You Are
I'm joining the line.
Where do I sign up for updates?
It's just so refreshing to read something original.
Author's Response: Sign on this dotted line anddd x.............. thank you. Your update is coming soon.
Date: 01/20/09 11:58 pm Title: All I Need is a Colt .45
plz update soon...lolz.i luvz u.hurry plz.thx=]
Date: 01/20/09 10:21 pm Title: All I Need is a Colt .45
VERY NICE!
Author's Response: :) i'm starting to like you! haha thanks
Date: 01/20/09 10:08 pm Title: Come As You Are
It is...LOL sorry to be vague.. I was just in a hurry to get to the next chapter. =)
Author's Response: hahah, s'alright, hope you enjoy it :)
Date: 01/20/09 09:48 pm Title: Lurid
I am completely intrigued.
Author's Response: And that is very positive. ...I think. :3
Date: 01/20/09 09:00 pm Title: All I Need is a Colt .45
this was awesome!
Author's Response: XD Awh! Arigato! :3
Date: 01/08/09 03:56 am Title: Lurid
OH WOW. Love this idea! :D Gott, Bill as a geisha. I can totally imagine. ^_^
I also think your story's quite believable. And I like how you put in the titles like -san and -sama. I dunno why. But Tom-sama is hot. xD
Lol. And I actually like imagining Bill calling the Mother Okaasan. *~* Haha. Okay. Enough rambling. I want an update! Please? ^__^
Author's Response: XD I love it too! He's so pale, it's wonderful. Aha. Yeah, I'm guessing you know stuff about Japan. Sama is very formal, like 'master-____' and san is used for business or semi-formal craaap. Sorry if you already know this. :) I hope I get time to update miss. :)
Date: 12/15/08 04:18 pm Title: Lurid
omg i love this ...tom is really rough? but its like tough love soo cute lol update soon?
Author's Response: :) Love it eh? good! Yeah, Tom is a rough one but he becomes a little gentler. I sure will <3
Date: 12/15/08 08:14 am Title: Lurid
more. that is all
Author's Response: :) and there will be.
Date: 12/10/08 06:52 pm Title: Come As You Are
plaese update soon. i will die with out this story
Author's Response: AHHH! Do NOT die. please. XD Thank you, I hope this becomes a good story :)
Date: 12/03/08 01:47 am Title: Lurid
yay!! i want more~~ :333
Author's Response: :) Happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 12/02/08 10:30 pm Title: Lurid
Hmm. So Bill was Tomi's brother?? :O
Did you get some of the plot for this story from the movie Memoirs of a Geisha? :P
Author's Response: Hmm, idk. Maybe. rnrnOh no XP I just know a WHOLE lot about geishas and was like 'what the hell? i'll go for it.' :] the movie was sucky compared to the book!
Date: 12/01/08 11:12 pm Title: Come As You Are
that was excellent
Author's Response: :] Thank ya!