Date: 06/16/12 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
Despite the few minor errors, this was really well written. You did a great job...
Tears were shed. ;-;
Date: 06/16/10 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
;'(
*cries* its so sad but i liked it X
Author's Response: thanks:)
Date: 04/01/10 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
Powerful
Author's Response: thank you:)
Date: 07/15/09 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
i notice that you didn't put Major Character Death as a warning so bill could still be alive. i would love it if you wrote a sequel. bill dosen't have to live , but it should defenetly be in tom's point of view. he has to realize that sometimes the most wonderull things you have are the ones you don't cherish at all. perhaps it should take place in the hospital room or even during the funeral is your story, but please make a sequel we need the closeur
Author's Response: thank you for the review:) this was wrote before all the new things came into place on here, and since then i havnt been on here much although i still pop on now and again to check on my reviews:) my muse died on th fics but maybe it will return and i can do a sequal on this story and some of my others:)rnthank you for the review:)
Date: 07/07/09 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
omg i swear to god im crying right now!!!! did bill die in this story? please god i beg you please say no
Author's Response: thank you for the review:) i only check here every few months now as i stopped writing th fics a while ago ( i feel outa love and my muse died:() im not sure if he died or not... i might write a sequal at somepoint if my muse decides to come back:)
Date: 06/22/09 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
wow....that is some heavy stuff right there...good job!!!
Author's Response: thank you:)
Date: 01/18/09 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
Ok, I just re-read this story, and it was even sadder the second time round! Please, you have to make a sequel, this is such a good story.
Author's Response: im starting to write one:)rnrnthank you again:)
Date: 11/28/08 11:53 am Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
please continue this one, i started to cry, reallyreally sad and beautiful.
Thank you.
Author's Response: thank you for the review
Date: 11/26/08 10:59 am Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
is this going to be continued??
Author's Response: maybe, i want too and have got a few ideasrnrnthanks for review:D
Date: 11/25/08 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
OMG I loved it. But I think something that would make it really good. is if you do a sequal and bill wakes up in the hospital and sees Tom sitting in the chair next to him. and tom like apolgizes and stuff. but im just saying
Author's Response: was think bout a sequal, but wasnt sure what to do...rnrnThank you:D
Date: 11/25/08 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
NOOOOOO!! BILL CAN'T DIE!! This story is so sad, but I'm so glad that Tom was nice to Bill at the end. Shame it was in such a sad way. Anyway, well done! I really really liked it and you're a great writer!
Author's Response: thank you:D
Date: 11/25/08 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
Sad, but beautifully written ...
*cries*
Author's Response: thank you:D
Date: 11/25/08 03:08 am Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
OMG!
Author's Response: you like lol?rnrnthank you:D
Date: 11/24/08 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
Liebe[:
Author's Response: thank you:D
Date: 11/24/08 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
Oh my god...this was so heartbreaking! I really loved this fic, very beautiful!
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 11/24/08 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
awwww taht was so sweet and sad.
i really like it=DDD
silly bill, he loved his brother so much that he choose to die for him=DD
i bet lifes going to be hell for tom now=(((
you know this story makes me think about my sister, i had a fight with her yesterday and i told her that i wish she could go away and never come back but now i see that you never know what you got till you lose it!!!
Author's Response: thank you:D
Date: 11/24/08 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
Aww that was so sad, Bill gave his life for Tom, because he loved him that much.
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 11/24/08 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1- all i ever wanted
awwwwwwwwwww
*wipes tear*
that was sooo sad,
but friggn EPIC (:
Author's Response: thank you:D