Date: 11/23/08 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
This is so sad...
*wipes eyes* But so good. Even better that Bill probably doesn't realize what he said to Tom :D -make it better!-
*BillPout*
Author's Response: lol....loved you review, it made me grin uncontrollably xDD I love getting emotions out of ppl ^_^ thanks for reading and reviewing, i lvoe you sooo much for that ^_^ and ja, i dont think bill realizes it, which is def. imapct the next chappie ^_^ and omg...is that a billpout? let it be KNOWN that i shelly watson was BORN with that pout xD so it should be called the shellypout xDDDD
Date: 11/23/08 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
OH MEIN SHELLY!!!!!
You fucking did it again!!!! You fucking amazed me and made me forget to breathe! *Standing applause* Fucking great job Shelly-Belly(Sorry, I kinda do that when I'm high om sugar...)
Please more more more more more more more!
(The sequel will probably be up in twp-three days, if you're lucky, tomorrow)
Get some sleep Shelly
Author's Response: lol...yes!! you got it right again xDDD HUGGLE lol...i'm glad that i could amaze you and make you forget to breathe (although....you should probably see a doctor for that...i dont need my fav. reviewer to die xDD) and its okay, sugar effects me in weird ways too (like the fact that i'm sitting here writing new chapters for ALL of my stories at the same time xDD jolly ranchers and gummy worms are my addicition xDD) and omg...YAY for the sequel..i am defintiely happy lol. and don't worry, i'll sleep and rest up AFTER the suger high wears off lol
Date: 11/23/08 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
Oh my god. That was absolutely BEAUTIFUL. You captured their emotions really well. You're great at writing in first person!
Author's Response: lol...awwwww...thanks for the praise and adoration, my ego/WB really needed to hear that xDD
Date: 11/23/08 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
Ahhh, too sad! Please new chap. (a)
Author's Response: lol. awww, i know, its kinda sad, but hopefully it'll be getting better. i'll try and post a new chapter, sometimes soon ^_^
Date: 11/23/08 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
pretty cool story, I wanna read more ;D
Author's Response: awwww, thanks ^_^ I'll update as soon as I have some inspiration ^_^
Date: 11/23/08 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
Wow...just wow. I'm really loving this story. It's witty and sardonic and wonderfully angsty! Can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: lol, awwww. i'm glad that i write this and was able to make you wow and love it ^_^.....i do try and make it as wonderful and realistic as i can. i really am glad that you like it and i hope i'll be able to update as soon as possible ^_^
Date: 11/23/08 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
AWWA I LIEKS IT UND ICH IS WONDERING WHERE U R AT! >< Sorry, couldn't help it...again. I love love loooove this even more than when you showed it to me!
Author's Response: i am about to get off early and go to bed >.< i couldn't take the lack of sleep...it was kicking my ass....and thanks for loving it even more xDDDD
Date: 11/23/08 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
Oh... I can't even describe how much this was heartbreaking right now; Bill is actually the main character I feel sorry for, but I have to say that Tom's feelings were very intense, too.
His sensibility is so lovely, it's very original, you know. ,) I love the way he worries for his brother, it feels so right somehow.
And Bill... ahem... did you put your own like in this story...?
"Andreas fucking Britney."
Ok, I don't mean to talk about it in a public review. But just so you know, this reminds me a lot your story, somehow. I just wanted you to know that I love the way you always manage to put your personal experience in your plots. It's a good yet difficult skill to practice, I just love it. ^-^
I hope you'll go on soon, I'm simply loving it. :)
Kisses!
Author's Response: lol....awww, thanks sweetie ^_^ i always say how much your reviews mean to me, and this isn't an exception. your review is soooo detailed, and yea, the andreas and brittney thing is from my life...i kinda just wanted to be able to write it down and get angry and curse and yell, and i wanted bill to be angry, so i found a way to incorporate it without it seeming too forced...im heading to bed now...gotta sleep and not die from lack of rest xDD thanks for reviewing ^_^
Date: 11/23/08 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
I really want to see where this story goes. :)
Author's Response: lol...yea, so do i...YAWN...as soon as work and my nap are over i'll attempt to write some more xD
Date: 11/23/08 11:46 am Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
*cries* that was just so good and so sad...
wonder what s gonna happen after this
tom now knows that bill loves him right ?
Author's Response: awwwww...don't cry *hands you tissues*...i kinda wonder what's gonna happen next. I don't have a distinct plan for the story, I'm kinda just writing whatever i feel at the moment. and ummm, i really don't know what's going btwn the two of them, again, i dont have a plan for this story, im just writing off the top of my head...thanks for reviewing hun ^_^
Date: 11/22/08 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
ME LIKEY! WRITE MOAR LAWL! I HAVE TO GO STRAIGHTEN MAI HIAR NOW AND GO BE SCENE WITH MY FRIENDS KTHXBYE
Author's Response: ewwww. izzy....that review makes me embarrassed to know you.....even though its SUPPOSEDLY a joke and your not one of those rabid TH/CB fans i seem to hate xDDD YAWN...im really really sleepy!!!!
Date: 11/22/08 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
Hey!! Great story! I really loved it :) Keep up the good work. Hope you update soon. Take care. Bye!!
Author's Response: thanks for the review, love ^_^ I'm glad that you loved it, i hope i'll be able to update sometime today, i kinda wanna get this story rolling before my WB kicks back in xDD
Date: 11/22/08 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
Hey, love! ^-^ I was waiting for 'Cold and Blue' to be updated, but here I saw a new fiction. xD
And... man, what a fiction. It's pretty different from 'Cold and Blue', it's a great change (that doesn't mean the other one is better or worse, it's just different). So, you write drama, too. xD Can't definitely wait to see where it goes, seriously.
I love the way one twin misunderstands the other's behaviour; and most of all, I love the way you dedicated half chapter to Bill's thoughts, and the other half to Tom's. Even if it's quiet full of drama, that gives the fiction a nice sense of harmony, I think this is a very clever choice of style.
And I loved the way you write it!
"I need him.
He ignores me.
I love him.
He hates me."
Speaking of harmony xD
Seriously, I respect you for writing something like this, it's very, very good. You're talented. :)
So please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Kisses, love u!
Author's Response: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW *blush* you always manage to say awesome things even though english isn't your first language ^_^ i always love your reveiws niky, they make my heart melt lol. and i really love the way you pay attention to details in both this story and cold and blue ^_^ i just hope that this story will be as good as cold and blue is ^_^
Date: 11/22/08 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
Oh Mein Para! This one (Sorry) made me cry! Please continue, cuz this is really good!
(BTW. I'm writing a sequel for Have you Ever? and when I have posted it, there is a little surprise for you;D.)
Great story Shelly!
Author's Response: cigi...cigi-cigi xDD so, i'm so glad you said "oh mein para"...i've been trying to get my friends to say "oh mein shelly" for AGES xDD and umm yay for writing the sequel...i swear your tryna seduce me with all these good stories xDD and OMG...a surprise....*thinks really hard, but not so hard that her head goes splodey* i'm so excited for the surprise!!! lol...and don't worry, I'll add more (hopefully sometime today ^_^)
Date: 11/22/08 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
I think it's a very beautiful story all ready! keep up the good work, it's amazing!
Author's Response: awwww.....thanks for the compliments lol...my story is blushing from all the praise xDDD
Date: 11/22/08 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
Omg. Great start. Very intriguing!! Can't wait to read on.
Author's Response: lol. awwws, thanks for reviewing ^_^ it made me smile and have loads of happy feeling, coming to work (avoiding any actual working), singing on to THF and seeing your review ^_^ and I'll definitely update as soon as i figure out what is gonna happen in the story xDD I kinda only had the 1st chapter planned out >.<