Date: 08/06/09 12:02 am Title: Chapter 6: Don't Fret Precious, I Am Here....Now and Forever
Awwwwwwwwwww XD Although...the fic would probably be better understood in general if you did the Tom-italicized-thing for the whole fic instead of switching views like that XD Personal preference, though.
The fluff isn't too too bad, though. If you need proof, look at the RP I sent you. I am Tom and Andi. See? I'm worse XD
Author's Response: hahaha. true enough, but when I wrote it, there was no reason to italicize anything, since the last chapter wasn't planned at all....the story was supposed to be longer than this, BUT....the fluff killed me xD and i'm checking out the RP when i wake up...after i've dreamt of chapters for all of my fics xD
Date: 05/15/09 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 6: Don't Fret Precious, I Am Here....Now and Forever
wow, i think that perfect is the word..
Author's Response: Awwwww. *grins. Thanks you so much for calling it perfect. ^_^ That's the highest compliment a reviewer could have ever given me.
Date: 05/15/09 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
Omg, soo intense, love ittt !!!
``making them realize that you don’t fuck with the Kaulitz twins.``
i love that line ! dunno why :P
Author's Response: Awww. Thanks for loving it! And yea, I like that line too xD I think if the boys had met me when we were all in grade school/junior high (the twins and I are the same age), I would have taught them to fuck bullies up! xS
Date: 02/28/09 01:48 am Title: Chapter 6: Don't Fret Precious, I Am Here....Now and Forever
*big freaking smile* That was a...maz...ing. Wow. The sex scene was so hot and beautiful. And dear God Tom was fucking sexy lol.
Date: 02/28/09 01:39 am Title: Chapter 5: The unrequited dream, The song that no one sings, The unattainable.
Oh Tom...lol. *grins* Ich will *nods quickly*
Date: 02/28/09 01:27 am Title: Chapter 4: Hold me, or else I drift, alone into the night.
This was great. *smiles* But the last line bothered me.
Date: 02/28/09 01:22 am Title: Chapter 3: You make me forget my name...
*smiles* Sexy, crazy, and beautiful all at once.
Date: 02/27/09 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
Aww. Wow. That was crazy. Oh and I can see a lot of things in this story. Andreas and Britney...*nod nod* I'm leaving for a bit. I'll read more when I get back.
Date: 02/27/09 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
*smiles* I love this so far. They both think the exact opposite of each other. *reads on*
Date: 02/17/09 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 6: Don't Fret Precious, I Am Here....Now and Forever
*Hugs* Yay for happy ending! You know Misa is a fluffwhore. XP *pats the fluff fondly*
Author's Response: hahahaha. you fluffwhore you! I'm glad I could make you happy xD
Date: 02/17/09 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 5: The unrequited dream, The song that no one sings, The unattainable.
You're trying to make me laugh/cry, I can tell. But it's REALLY hard to make Misa cry over something she's reading. (Though I do get choked up fairly easily. XD) *refusing to cry*
Author's Response: lol. hahahahaha. I probably was when I was writing that. I love making Bill so snarky AND THEN Tom so sappy xDDDD and hahaha to refusing to cry...
Date: 02/17/09 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 4: Hold me, or else I drift, alone into the night.
This better have a happy ending, or I will seriously cry. How can they be twins and misunderstand each other so completely?
Author's Response: *FROM PREVIOUS REVIEW* I love that I can make you guys not know what's going on xDDD AND....no crying...at least not now....and they can misunderstand each other like that, BECAUSE...they're dumb and they're not letting each other in >.> morons
Date: 02/17/09 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 3: You make me forget my name...
Dude, I love how Tom is like, "I just made another mistake" and we're all like, "WTF is he talking about?" and then we read on and it's like, "OH." XD
Author's Response: hahahahaha. I LOVE
Date: 02/17/09 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
Eyes are tearing up more... I don't know what people are talking about, I think this is AMAZINGLY written.
Author's Response: Awwwwww. Thanks for the praise AND for the review loves....and yea >.> tearing xDDD
Date: 02/17/09 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
You're going to make me cry... T_T Seriously. I will cry. XD
Author's Response: awwwwwwww. *chuckles* I'm glad I got a good reaction out of you lol. And no crying...at least not yet xDD
Date: 01/22/09 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 6: Don't Fret Precious, I Am Here....Now and Forever
beautiful :3 i love the choice of words mix of slang and beautiful ones too... ^_^ i also like that there's really no dialogue between them just their thoughts talking. great job! ^-^)v
Author's Response: Lol. Thank you for loving my mixture of words. I think that it makes the story more realistic when they talk/think like everyday people. and yea, I write a lot of dialogue in my other stories, so i wanted to write something where we are just in their heads ^_^ thank you for loving it though. ^_^
Date: 01/20/09 02:43 am Title: Chapter 6: Don't Fret Precious, I Am Here....Now and Forever
Loved it, I think that was the perfect ending.
Author's Response: Awwww. Danke for thinking it was perfect ^_^ I loved writing for you guys.
Date: 01/20/09 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
OMG I am into the story already.
Author's Response: Lol. Awww. yay for you being into it ^_^
Date: 01/19/09 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 2: I am a visitor here... I am not permanent
Oh goodness, I bet Bill doesn't remember saying that....
That sucks about Andreas. I don't get why he's always made the bad guy, though.
Author's Response: Lol. hahaha. he really doesn't xDD and Andreas was the bad guy in this, because I needed one xDD *shrugs* I was not in the mood to create a new character xD sorry.
Date: 01/19/09 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradoxes and Oxymoronical Statements of Love
I like it! If you had given more to this chapter, it would have cheapened the feelings of the twins and that seriousness. I like it jus the way it is.
Author's Response: Awwww, Thank you for loving the 'shortness' of the chapter. I loved how slow (and yet fast paced) I made the last chapter. I just wanted them to show their love as best as they could, without breaking the realm of thought. ^_^