Date: 01/08/09 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
I loved it. Bill would make the most amazing ghost. DE
Author's Response: He would. He would totally be the house diva, throwing out cheap hair products and everything.
Date: 01/01/09 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
What a wonderful story! I love paranormal everything, but I've never read anything that also combined romance and humor so well. This was such a great read!
Author's Response: Thank you very very much!!
Date: 12/30/08 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
so you're saying you have a writing problem? I understand I have a reading probelem. I have written 750+ reviews in *shifty eyes* 2 months...most of them like the ones you've recieved. Line by line notes...*grins*
you want to take this to email or im or something? I'm sure the review numbers are great and all but...*shify eyes* you know?!
Author's Response: I went to write a little nothing bit of smut, and it became a 60+ page orgy of story time. More recently I went to write a cookie, and finally finished at 27 pages. I've gotten amazingly wordy lately.
I sent my MSN name to you over myspace. :) Protecting my anonymity over here (poorly).
Date: 12/30/08 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah yeah I bet you're right. Ok maybe a epilogue then just to tie up loose ends. It would probably be like 500 words and it could take care of everything...all the nity gritty stuff...fine fine be that way be done with the story. At least you answered my questions...
BTW do you know how funny this is that were having this conversation throught your review secion...it's totally going to pump up the numbers *giggles*
Author's Response: My review numbers are going to be FANTASTIC after this. I'm almost tempted to slink this over to one of the shunned stories so I can look at it and go 'woot, people like it!' instead of seeing a sad little 4 or whatever there. ;)
They was my mini stories have been going lately, I would be AFRAID to try an epilogue. 500 words is suddenly 6 pages, then 10, 20, 50. By the time all was said and done Bill and Tom would have gotten married and adopted a couple kids who grew up happy and healthy and went on to each have a few grandchildren for Bill and Tom to coo over and spoil.
Date: 12/30/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is lovely but it ended too quickly. The rest of the story was so well paced, slow and steady. The ending felt a little rushed. I'm a liitle worried about some loose endings like what we're going to do about Bill now that he's back. And how Amelia brought him back, you explained everything else so to not have those bits tied up it feels unfinished. But all in all a good story. I like it. It was very out of the TH box.
Author's Response: In a way it needed to go quickly. Tom needed to NOT have the chance to rethink things and realize that what he was doing was PROBABLY really really stupid. Amelia needed to be right there, right now to keep Tom from going too far (another reason to have him do it RIGHT NOW, what if he decided to when she wasn't there?).
All the post stuff, ugh. I assume that Georg knows someone of a slightly less than savoury type that got Bill all his paperwork and such so that he could be a person again, but I doubted many people would want to read about shady business deals and such after all that.
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I just needed more time to get used to the idea that Tom was going to find a solution to Bill's problem of being dead. It just felt like that was sprung on us.
I like that Tom believing he needed to sacrifice himself was the solution...that was *bounces* really good!
And the seedy post stuff...you have no idea the kind of ick I read! I'm an ImNu fan omg some of her stuff I have to read while looking through my fingers. *shudders* Take a look at my favorites list and check out the stuff written by Imaginary Numbers (ImNu) SO good but really creepy!
Author's Response: That was another part of it. I wanted to spring the solving thing on everyone. Imagine if Tom had told Bill all about his plan and then it completely didn't work? That way only Tom's hopes would be dashed and Bill would be able to keep on like they do.
I'm thinking that the shady stuff wouldn't be so much 'omg' as it would be just BORING, you know? Georg goes down to the bad side of the tracks with a small photo of Bill, shares a pint with some mates, and a week later, bam, Bill has photo identification, birth certificate, and whatever passes as a social security card in Germany.
Meanwhile you KNOW Bill would be making up for lost time *wink nudge* and probably trying to redecorate Tom's place.
Date: 12/30/08 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
This is lovely but it ended too quickly. The rest of the story was so well paced, slow and steady. The ending felt a little rushed. I'm a liitle worried about some loose endings like what we're going to do about Bill now that he's back. And how Amelia brought him back, you explained everything else so to not have those bits tied up it feels unfinished. But all in all a good story. I like it. It was very out of the TH box.
Author's Response: In a way it needed to go quickly. Tom needed to NOT have the chance to rethink things and realize that what he was doing was PROBABLY really really stupid. Amelia needed to be right there, right now to keep Tom from going too far (another reason to have him do it RIGHT NOW, what if he decided to when she wasn't there?).
All the post stuff, ugh. I assume that Georg knows someone of a slightly less than savoury type that got Bill all his paperwork and such so that he could be a person again, but I doubted many people would want to read about shady business deals and such after all that.
Date: 12/30/08 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
The sex scene was awesome and sad all at the same time...how is Tom going to make him stay?! aaahh!!!
Author's Response: Since you're done, you totally know that answer to that now. ;)
Date: 12/30/08 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
The masturbation scene was spectacular…the lines about their breath, their hand…it was so cool!
Tom said, flopping down on the couch. "I kinda wish that he could. It sucks being all in love with someone that you can't even show off." - *squeak* and *grins* awh!!!
Tom cocked his head, looking at Bill with a confused smile. "You're so pretty," he cooed, reaching absently to stroke Bill's face and missing once more. – lol his boy genes say avoid, avoid!!
Author's Response: <3
Dear Tomi is in looooove.
But he admits nooothing. :D
Date: 12/30/08 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill scoffed. "Oh shut up with your rules. You know you like it, too."
"Do not," Tom mumbled, crossing his arms over his chest.
"Do so," Bill purred. – I second that Do so!
Succumbing once more to the magic that was Bill's touch, Tom found himself pulling the ghost boy closer, one hand twisting into his soft black hair while the other danced across the thin band of skin between his shirt and pants. Bill's skin was cool, almost disconcertingly so, but smooth and soft under Tom's fingers. Slowly Tom crept his hand up under the back of Bill's shirt, being rewarded with a soft moan as Bill pressed his body down against Tom's and shoved his own hand underneath the mass of Tom's t-shirt, raking his nails across Tom's chest hard enough to hurt. "Whoa, careful," Tom mumbled out, reluctant to let Bill's mouth go long enough to talk. – Yummy!!! *tingles all over*
"Sorry," Bill murmured, scratching at Tom more gently and swinging his other hand around to fumble with Tom's zipper. – horny much?
"And I'm thinking about how I am going to figure this whole thing out so I can come and go as I please instead of as the world pleases," – nicely worded…I would have stumbled all over this one.
You should go; I think you're late for work – awh look Bill’s taking care of Tom. *grins*
Author's Response: I do so as well. ;)
Bill claws are DANGEROUS.
18 years of watching people spank it without getting any of his own...yeah, I think that would lead to being a little needy.
Thankies!
Annnnd, Bill's a sweet ghost to Tom. <3
Date: 12/30/08 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
What, like I have better things to do with my time? It was a nice change to watching you beat off in the shower, though. I was starting to feel a little sorry for you, having to take matters into your own hands like that so...disturbingly often," Bill said, resting back on his elbows. - *covers face in embarrassment*
"I...oh!" he said, pressing his fingertips against any part of Tom he could, finally reaching up and cupping Tom's face between his hands. "Oh my god, you're so warm," he breathed, eyes wide and amazed as they raced across Tom's face. Blinking once, he quickly leaned in, pressing his lips against Tom's. – cool O.O
"It's obvious you've never had to entertain yourself while deceased, but fine. No more naughty spying. Even if you do look nice in the shower," Bill said with a wink. - *grins and giggles*
Bill kissed him gently, reciprocating eagerly when Tom abruptly threw himself into the act with a bit more gusto than Bill had been expecting. Letting his lips part, Bill let Tom's tongue dance over his for just a moment, shuddering softly and breaking the spell that was holding him together. - *grins* I like this bit!
“We can talk tomorrow. I'll be here whenever you want me." - *shy smile* awh that’s sweet!
Author's Response: :D :D
Date: 12/30/08 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
"You're not going to guilt me into staying," Tom called into open air, fidgeting at the little worm of guilt trying to gnaw its way into his belly - *smirks* guilt is my favorite weapon!
"I know, but I had to change my plans. So I'm going to be here, right there, across the street, apartment 4A, for at least another month. Just so you know." - *grins* omg so obvious!
Author's Response: Guilt works far too well sometimes. And obvious Tom is obvious. ;)
Date: 12/30/08 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's a lovely start to what I can already tell is going to be a fun story. Poor Bill is all tortured and miserable *shakes head* and good for Tom to stand up to a scary, scary ghosty Bill.
Author's Response: Alas, poor, dear Bill. So tragic.
Date: 12/25/08 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
OMG! You stop it there? I was so left wanting more! Amazing! I just loved it.
Author's Response: Stopped there! The boys are together and everything is yay. Happy endings are nice. :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 12/23/08 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aw! I loved this story!!! xD
Sooo cute!
But really this story was amazing. :]
Author's Response: Thank you very very much!
Date: 12/18/08 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
WOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)
Author's Response: Yay caps based review! Thankies. :D
Date: 12/13/08 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
nooo!not da end :( well it was good! ^^
Author's Response: Thankies. :D
Date: 12/10/08 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
I read this on LJ and absolutely loved it!!
This is an awesome story!!
Author's Response: :D Thank you!!
Date: 12/09/08 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
NOOOOO!!!! But i dont want it to be over *pouts* I love it anyways.
Author's Response: *pets* All good things must come to an end. And thank you. :)
Date: 12/08/08 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Loved the ending! I'm so happy they're together (and both alive). I thought Tomi was going to die! Yay Amelia!
Author's Response: Amelia has made skills at fixing things, doesn't she? No death for Tom, we loves him too much to make him dead.
Date: 12/08/08 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
They actually did it! That's kinda impressive all things considered.
Author's Response: Isn't it just? ;)