Date: 04/01/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
I don't think that Lara should break up with Bill just take some time to cool down. Honestly not my favorite chapter. I think that all of them should be happy for a while go through the 'honey-moon' stage of their relationships, but all in all I think that u r an AMAZING writer and still this my favorite story!!!!!
Author's Response: Awe tooo bad... i really thought i sent a good vibe on this one! if not TOTALLY SORRY!!! Well i'm glad you still love it... uhm as for the honey-moon stage it's coming tooo much fluff is on the way haha! Thanks though xxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/01/09 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
loved it! :)
Author's Response: Awe!!! Thankies!! (: Keep reading! xxxxx
Date: 04/01/09 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 16: You're Here
hahaha! thats funny
Author's Response: why thank you haha! I'm glad you like xD xxxx Danke for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: 04/01/09 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 6: Too good to be true
man-candy?! thats awesome!
Date: 04/01/09 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 1: Killing Time
awesome!
Date: 03/31/09 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 20: Wild Night
I looooooovvvvvreeeeeedddddd it!!!!!!!! AMAZING per usual! Seeing as I'm only like 15 I don't get drunk much but the worst was when I was out with a couple of guys that I knew who were like 18-21 and we were walking around Germany and I went up to an ice cream vendor and started asking for waffles in English then when the lady stared talking in German I repeated myself and didn't get my waffles.... :( (all of this was being video taped by the designated drver) BUT THE NEXT DAY I WAS AT TOKIO HOTEL CONSERT went backstage!!!!! They r sooooo much hotter in person!!!
Author's Response: Well your lucky! I never got a chance to meet them once!! NOT EVEN ONCE! Imagine that! I'm making it a goal to meet them! I'll bet they look hotter in person! *jealous* Damn about the drinking, i'm 17 and i'm allowed haha! *smirks* That is sooo funny i can imagine what that poor lady was thinking!! Thanks for reading and Reviewing xxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 03/31/09 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 20: Wild Night
loved it xD nice :)
Author's Response: Thanks hun, I appreciate it xD Keep reading and reviewing of course! xxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 03/30/09 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 20: Wild Night
Ok Maria, two words. LOVE IT! xD its not often i come across a story that literlly cracks me up.
I pretty much made a fool of myself laughing over this one. It so corny you just have to love it. --->
"....“Look I have boobs!!! I never knew!!!” I pointed at my breasts.
“OH MY GOD!!! You do have boobs; where did you get them??” she answered with a shocked face......."
But, i want to warn you, that Lara and Maria are mirroring eachother in a way (borderline Mary-sueish =/ ). Lets see if i can explain; both girls are doing the exact same thing most of the time. Like the throw up (plesant ehh?) and dont leave me thing. Im not trying to a fucking Nazi here , i rlly love this story. Just thought i bring something i noticed. =)
Fan! keep it up! 10/10 Oh and next time ill do the homework. ;)
KaylsTH
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!! I was really worried that they will become mary-sue! Ah thank you so much for point ing it out!!!! Thank also for lovig the story, thank you also for reveiwing!!! Alright that's IT!!! I'm dedicating my next chapter to ya!!! Thank youuuuuu ssssssooooooooooooooooooo muccccccccccchhhhhhhhh!!!! xxxxx
Date: 03/30/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 20: Wild Night
I LOVEEEEEE ITTT SOO MUCHHH MORE PLEASE!
Author's Response: I will have more!! I missed you there!!! I pwomise i'll have more!! *hugs ya* Thanks for reading and reviewing of course!! xxxx
Date: 03/30/09 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 20: Wild Night
Heh! Well, I'm not old enough to drink :( BUUUUUUUT My bro did get so pissed he shat himself in the back of an ambulance and pissed on the paramedic. I was literally laughing myself to death and the people were like 'he's had so much to drink he could die we need to pump his stomach' and i started laughin even harder. Those wierd looks would have killed me if loks could kill. Anyway, great chap!
Author's Response: LOOOL! OH MY GOD!!! That's hillarious shit!!! haha i can imagine!! YAY a new reviewer awesome!!!! Thanks for reading AND reviewing xxx
Date: 03/30/09 11:18 am Title: Chapter 20: Wild Night
I never got drunk before...so i cant answer the question. I LOVE THIS CHAPPIE. at school so i dont have time to write a bog review. XD
Author's Response: AWE!! *pouts* i really wanted a big review from you!!! Damn *frowns* you owe me one in the next chappie haha *wink* *wink* Oh damn! Getting drunk is fun sometimes! *whispers* don't tell anyone i said that! love ya xxxxx
Date: 03/28/09 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 19: Familiar Face
I think that it is the it that mar almost had sex with and he and tom get in a fight over mar
Author's Response: Ok you guys are way good! The next chapter is dedicated to you too! Thanks for reviewing and reading xxxx
Date: 03/26/09 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 19: Familiar Face
love it! xD i think that maria finds like an ex boyfreind or something :)
Author's Response: Damn I'm gonna dedicate it to alot of people the next one! The next chapter is dedicated to you hun :) Thanks for reading and reviewing xxxxxxxx
Date: 03/26/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 19: Familiar Face
GOOD! lol, yeah i liked the chap :D.
1.hmm...I thin it might be like an ex or something. And that's like the only thing i can guess soo, yeah :P I don't really no what else the person could be other then her parents but that would be odd, since you said earlyer that they wont be back till february.
2. I think if it is an ex that he'd totally freak out because she's with some others guy. And start up a fight with Tom, just because he feels like it. That's probably what i would put :P
I'm probably wrong since i can never guess what happens next in this story...or any others. lol. I feel like writing a BIGGGGG review since well because i feeeel like it. XD So hmm, yeah i likey the story its totally awesome, and it awesomness can be compared to nothing, :P That i know of anyways. XP. This story reminds me of one i was going to write for my friend...tho only because their is a club part in it. I'm excited to find out what happens next because ... yeah :P
So yeah continue the good work, it is awesome *thumbs up*. (oh and btw, i'm that hyper, just was in the mood to go on and on and on. XD)
Author's Response: DING DING DING Correct answer!!! I am so proud ^^! The next chapter is dedicated to ya hunny!!! Well i simply LOVE your hyperness!!! It brings very much joy your reviews are simply AWESOME!!!!! Thnks for reading and reviewing! xxxxxxxxx
Date: 03/26/09 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1: Killing Time
AWWW thankies :]
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Date: 03/26/09 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 19: Familiar Face
Wow! Congrats on the reviews! :D
Well I think it's that one ex dood.
& i think something bad is gonna happen,idk what though.
& this was another great chapter to a great story!
Keep it up hun! :D
Love you tons!
Author's Response: YAY!!! You guessed right!!! The next chapter is dedicated to ya ;) *giggles* Thank you honey! I love you too :D xxxxxxxxx
Date: 03/26/09 03:09 am Title: Chapter 1: Killing Time
wow you so would!
love you more ;p
Date: 03/25/09 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 18: Love is in the Air
L M F A O.
Ahh I so would've done and said the SAME THING! So Damn funny!
OMG I WANT MORE!!!! (not like that; or maybe like that hahahahahah)
Oh & if i had to date one of the twins it'll be NEITHER of them! :DDD
But If it was like a contest thingy and I HAD to, i'd pick Tom; just out of curiousity.
Author's Response: Awe that's too bad!!!! I would totally do Tom!!!! I know it's fucking hillarious, I will update soon promise!! I love you fuck loads xxxxxxxxxx
Date: 03/24/09 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 18: Love is in the Air
I'd probably want to go to a club with tom and then have some kinda mind blowing sex. Then he next night go out for a romantic dinner and a walk on the beach. Also UPDATE but I am loving how fast u r getting them out soooo..... *gives u a giant double chocolate chip cookie*
Author's Response: I love cookies ^^ YUM!!!! You really don't waste time, i probably wouldn't have sex with him on the first night... but that's just me LOL!! Awesome! I love you're homework haha :) I will update fast on the next one too... thanks so much xxxxxxxxxx
Date: 03/24/09 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 18: Love is in the Air
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!! (i think i'm the first to review...or close to it lol.)
Hmm if i had the chance to have a date with the twins...... hmmm
I would like it to be at a beach, i think it would be so cool :) and then like eat out, movies, normal stuff. I don't really care for all the romantic stuff, but sweet if it happened :) i probably would blush like a dork. I can't help it, but i blush A LOT. lol.
Yeah beach, i love swimming and it would be cool to go for a swim like on a private beach... OH and i would love to go scuba diving , that would be awesome with one of the twins.
Yeah, i am hyper again :P can't make up my mind. But i did my home work :P
EEEEEEEEEEKKKKKK, update soon :D (i don't know why i did that.. maybe the thought of going on a date with Tom XP )
Author's Response: AWE!! I totally love your dream date! Yeah you are my first to review this chapter! I am so proud ^^ I'm glad you're hyper i got hyper when just writing about a date with the twins. I love the beach too, i love the romantic stuff i'm a sucker for the littlest romantic thing! Yeah i wouldn't stop blushing either it's so embarresing!! It's insane! YAY Well done i'm glad you did you're homework! Just for being my 10l reviewer you get the next chapter dedicated to ya :)I hope you enjoy it! Stay hyper!!! Thanks for reading xxx