Date: 04/08/09 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 22: The Switch
=o
holy cow, horse. and banana!!!
ummmmm...
umm...
~pulls you from behind the tree~
I liked the story, but a liiiittle less at the ending, it was liek, CHEATING DUDE!!! With their bf's TWIN! >_< ohhh so confuzzlinggg...>n<
And I honestly am at a loss at what happens next. BUT I have to apologize again for missing the last few chapters T_T ~hides behind rock~ Don't kill me please! I'm a reader! A reader!!!! Anywhore, have I told you you're awsum? cuz you are. you're awsumsauce. awsumSUM sauce. You're awsumleey sauceey.sausumlee awsum. ... lee.
sauce!
Author's Response: aweee why thank you! I love being awsum haha!!! Oh well there's more to come on the next chapter! It's like a lot of fighting, slapping and forgiveness at the same time so yeah haha! I know but i love to add drama, but there's gonna be a lot of lovey dovey moments *wink* *wink* so don't worry! As for missing some chapters HOW DARE YOU?!!! i'm jk jk lol, it's alright as long as you updated see?! keep reading and reviewing! Thanks so much xxxxxxx
Date: 04/08/09 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 22: The Switch
hey! get out from behind the tree so i can get a good shot! haha jk...BUT ooo man tht was bad! but on the other hand, if they both did it, i guess it can all be a misunderstanding and everything goes back to the way it was....right!?
Author's Response: I'm glad someone thinks like me (: Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! :) xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/08/09 05:39 am Title: Chapter 22: The Switch
i like this story :D
Author's Response: thanks!! xxxx
Date: 04/07/09 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 22: The Switch
I think that some how they all find out about the whole cheating thing and get all pissy and don't talk for a while/ 'breakup' and then get back together cause they made such a horrible mistake.... NOW UPDATE GODDAMNIT!!!!
Author's Response: haha! Ah My God you just made me laugh my ass off with "Now Update Goddamnit!" So hillarious! Alright Alright *raises hads in defense* I will update soon. Thanks so much xxxx
Date: 04/07/09 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 22: The Switch
*shoots* lol kidding
O_o I wasnt expecting that. Oooo, i donno whats gonna happen next. Maybe they are still too drunk to realise and go further then they should have, OR they do realize what happened and started to freak out.
When i seen the name of the chap i was like..'are they going to switch boyfriends or something.' I guess i was close enough :P XD
Awesome chap ^^
Author's Response: *flees* haha, I know! I wanted something different you know from the rest you should see the next chapter haha! But now i think the twins are getting away with it too much! Maybe i should change it hmmm *thinking* we shall see haha! Thanks so much for reviewing and reading xD xxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/07/09 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
bah, Bill got away with it too easily. If that was me he would have to crawl on his knees for forgiveness! lol
Author's Response: looool! I like your style haha!!! thanks for reading!!! xxxx
Date: 04/06/09 09:37 am Title: Chapter 20: Wild Night
hahah afunniest thing ive read in a loooong time!!! haha and the boob thing? i could totally see me and my best friend doing that....sober. sad but true! xD
Author's Response: Sober?! Really?! WOW you're crazier then me when i'm sober haha xD Well i'm glad it amused you xD i love making people laugh! keep reading and reviewing of course haha!! Thankies xxxx
Date: 04/03/09 07:15 am Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
gfdhgf
Author's Response: huh? speak english please! LOL
Date: 04/02/09 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
UPDAAAAAATTTTTTEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! U CANT SEE BUT IM ON MY KNEES BEGGING U HERE!!!!!!
Author's Response: I will!! I PROMISE!!! AWEEEE!!!!! You need to get up in order to read my story xD! I will update soon!!! keep looking for it *giggles* Thank you so much! xxxxxxx
Date: 04/02/09 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
Awesome chappie :D.
What would I do if it was me instead of Lara....hmmmmmmm.... Well for the part with the bitch...or whatever you won’t to call that other girl. I probably would have thought about fighting her, I’m just not sure if I would be able to. I have never been in that type of situation before so I couldn’t say exactly what I would do. I know thought I would be thinking about killing her, :P the part where she was fighting with Bill I probably would have done that to, I might not have hit him across the face, like I said before; I would have thought about doing it but probably not going through with it. If that makes any sense. lol. Also I wouldn’t have forgiven him that fast; it would have taken a bit longer to get my trust back. It takes a lot for me to trust others, especially new people around me. SO yeah that’s what I would do if I was in lira’s position.
Now, hehe, I want to tell you a story because I want this review to be extra long. :P Ok so. Once upon a time, Bill ate a ....CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIE. Yeah I’m SERIOUS, he did. And it was one of those big cookies with extra chocolate chips. mmmm. Anyways. Then Tom asks if he can have a bite and well bill says NO, yeah he does, can you believe it? So tom’s pouting and asks what he could do to get a bite. Bill thinks it over, and thinks it over a lot. So long that Tom gave up and left, to which Bill smirked and finished the cookie. THE END. Now how did you like it? I thought it was awesome, just like your story. Keep up the awesome work, I just LOVE this story and can’t wait to find out what happens next. (Hopefully this review makes up for the short one for the chappie 20 :P)
Author's Response: AWE!!!! What a lovely review!!!! No Shit!!!! So long it made me drool! Ah nah i would totally slap him and kill the bitch! LIke seriously, as for the forgiving part then yes i wouldforgive him easily, i blow off some steam by slapping him hten it's gone yeah i'm like that! Anywayss, What an awesome story! I love it how Tom's pouts for it but then Bill still doesn't give it to him! HAHA HILLARIOUS!!! (: Yeah it did make-up for it!!! Lovely review made me smile! Thankies xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/02/09 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
hmmm....
I'd probably just cry. I'd be all HOOOWWWW COULDD YOUUUU DOOOO THAAAAATTTTT?!?!?!
or something.
Author's Response: I'd totally slap him haha!!! Then cry after i give him a piece of my mind! UGH!!! Thanks for reading (: xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/02/09 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 20: Wild Night
I cnan't do this home-y work... too young to drink T__T sorry teach :(
and, as always, this chappy rules!
Author's Response: Aw it's alright hun *giggles* you still get an A++++ for reviewing ;) xxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/02/09 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 19: Familiar Face
hmmm.. next chappy is already up, but eh, whatev.
I think it's that dude mar ALMOST had a one night stand with but didnt, and i think he might ge tin a fight with tom, or summat. ~shrug~
Author's Response: Awe hun!! If you reviewed before i would have totally dedicated the next chapter to ya!!! Go ahead keep reading and review!!! hihi xP xxxxxxxxxxx That's alright hun x)
Date: 04/02/09 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 18: Love is in the Air
aw maaaan, homework?
um... if i could date one off de twinniez, id uh...id date...I DONT KNOW >_<
all i know is we'd go to a chinese buffet that i luv ^-^
And no, i didn't like this chapter.
I LOOOOVED IIIIIITTTT OuO
how could I not? you're one of my all-time favorite authors!!! I haven't been on here in a while, and when i checked this story i was like 'OHMYGODWTF! 21 CHAPTERS! MA FORGET DINNER! I GOTTA READ!' XD
Author's Response: *heart stops* Oh god you gave me a heart attack, when you said you didn't like the chapter! Holy God!! MY!!! *heart beats again* WOW!!!! Awe i'm glad you like it! It's an honour to be a favourite author of yours xD *blushes* Thankies so much!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxx
rnPs: You need to eat!!! I don't want you to starve cuz of meh!!! xP
Date: 04/02/09 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
i love your story, it is realy funny! Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Awe!! Thank you soo much!!! xD I'm glad it amuses you haha!!! Thank yuo so much!! Keep reviewing and reading xxx
Date: 04/02/09 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
Homework answer - i wouldn't have pounced on the girl, I'd have just left quietly and let Bill wallow in self disgust while i went behind his back and made a move on... GEORG XD Not really, i would probably die XD Great chap! Just one thing, it's written like a script, like if it is from marias point of view it shud have been 'lara jumped' instead of 'lara jumps', or if it was from Lara's then 'I jumped'. I know the POV changes, and that 2 words was just an example, but it makes it like dictating the future and is kind of hard to follow. XD
Author's Response: Thank you for noticing! I will look at that, thank you very much! OMG make a move on Georg ey? HAHA!! Nah i would totally kill the bitch and Bill, he soo deserves it *evil smirk* Thanks for reading and reviewing xxxxx
Date: 04/02/09 11:01 am Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
AWESOME... if i were in lara's position i probably would have cussed him out and screamed in his face.
Author's Response: Yeah me!! i would so woop his asss haha!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 04/02/09 07:57 am Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
I don't think I would let bill slide that easily... but who knows:p more please
Author's Response: Yeah i wouldn't let it slide either! He would get some serious ass woopen haha!!! Anywayssss thanks for reading and reviewing (: xxxx
Date: 04/02/09 12:24 am Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
Ohh Ohh Ohh!! i forgots the Homework!! *rubs hands together eagerly *
Well, ahaha if MY boyfriend practically made-out with another women...*laughs nervously*...i would let kitty have 'em. Shes scarey! Melting skin and grating dicks......yah that sounds like a good punshihment!
Wove,
kaykay
Author's Response: Oh yeah! i would totally send Kitty up his ass, i think his dick would be non-existant from then on haha! But I totally WOULDN'T do that to Bill, he's too goddamn gorgeous to do so haha! Wove ya hun xxxxxx
Date: 04/02/09 12:16 am Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
Growl. *throws feildsXofXgold out of fourth floor window* SPLAT!!
Shut your yap feildsXofXgold , you cant even spell field. This chapter was fantastic!!
Lmao Mar, you seriously made me fall outta my chair laughing on this chapter. Haha you and lara beating the shit outta the fan-whore.
Awww, i absolutely love you to!=D
KayKay =p lol
Author's Response: Awwwwwweee thanks hun, you see? Thats why i love you!!! Haha thanks so much hun... ooooo i'm gonna read ur other review now haha! Wove you xxx