Date: 04/15/09 10:41 am Title: Chapter 24: Lust or Love?
*dances like an idiot* =D
Mar's first smut scene!!
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
i dont think you need me to beta! fucking fantastic.
Wove ya!
Juli-fucking-et
Author's Response: is there any particular reason why you posted the same review twice?! LOL eh i don't mind!!:) THANK YOU HONEY!!! xxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/15/09 10:39 am Title: Chapter 24: Lust or Love?
*dances like an idiot* =D
Mar's first smut scene!!
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
i dont think you need me to beta! fucking fantastic.
Wove ya!
Juli-fucking-et
Author's Response: *dances with kaykay* Awe thanks baby! But i need you to look at my other smut scene! It's kind of the same so i need to change it :D!!! Thanks honey!!!! Wove ya too!
rnMar!
Date: 04/15/09 10:35 am Title: Chapter 25: Public? Yes? No?
MARRRR! =D
hehe, srry its been forever since ive reviewd ya story! =/ can u ever forgive me? lol
Awwwwwe, why'd your inspiration leave ya?! where gunna have to go find it again love. =)
Juliettt
Author's Response: I KNOW!!!! you should be ashamed!! I'm just kidding love!!!rnYEah it left me *sobs*rnWove ya
Date: 04/14/09 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 25: Public? Yes? No?
Even if it was short, it still was amazing :D. I think your writing style is really good. Everyone has their own unique way of writing making there stories theirs. lol. I think that the whole, them telling about the relationship might be a good thing, but then again, it can also cause trouble. lol. (I decided to write a semi long review this time. :P) Good thing because everyone will know that they are unavailable, BUT telling might cause some trouble with the fans. lol. But that's just me blabbing on about something. You decide how your story goes, so I’ll have to wait and see what happens next :P *hugs* (I like giving out hugs. :P)
Author's Response: *hugged* I love getting hugs :D Awe thank you! Yeah it can cause trouble but NOT with fans I have another idea in mind :P haha You shall see soon! Thank Thank Thank YOU!!! *hugs back* xxxx
Date: 04/14/09 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 25: Public? Yes? No?
Mary? Who is Mary? OH! WAIT! I AM THE FIIIIRIST YESSSSSS! Awesome chappy, damn those frikkin reporters!! ~grrrr~ ~swears revenge on nonexistent people~ MMMMWAAAAH
you need a nickname... AWSUMPERSON! your nickname will be AWSUMPERSON. And yes, it has to be capitalized. or however the hell you spell it. I have a seectreeeet. I miiight tell you, but I don't know ^___^ anyhoo, I gots to go, my bro is nagging the shit out of meh >_< I promise all these short reviews'll stop! PROMISE! ya just gotta write more interesting stuff...
JK anyway, byez!
Author's Response: HEY!!!! You need to tell me the secret!! *pouts* SO NOT fair!!! I wanna know *stomps feet* AH!!! NOT FAIR!!!! I hate waiting *scrunches face* BUUUUTTTTTTTT I love your review haha! Thanks hun! But you need to TELL ME!!!!!! xxxx
Date: 04/13/09 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 24: Lust or Love?
that was... absolutely terrible.
hahah JUST KIDDING! for the first time writing it, it was pretty good, i never usually read this stuff, but this story is really really good, i didnt want to miss anything
Author's Response: OMG you frikkin scared me! I swear my heart stopped when i read your first sentence! Holy Crap! *get heart back* Thanks so much! Well i'm glad you like my story! :D Thanks so much means a lot to me xxxx
Date: 04/13/09 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 24: Lust or Love?
good :D
Author's Response: Thanks xD xxxxx
Date: 04/13/09 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 22: The Switch
oh loved it xD
Author's Response: Awe!!! Thank you! I'm glad haha!! xxxx
Date: 04/13/09 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 24: Lust or Love?
Ok, real good apart from one thing: I thought she already slept with Bill? So why would she be feeling the pain? Because her hymen would already be broken :S But apart from that, very good XD
Author's Response: You still feel that pain... but anyways thanks for pointing it out xD Thank you very much!!! xxxxx
Date: 04/12/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 24: Lust or Love?
SWEETNESS
i pick the first one. It was good, not bad nor ew nor never do that again.
HAPPEH EASTERRRRR
Oh, and do you have a DeviantART account? I DO! heheheheh.
OH and UPDATTTTEEEEEEE PLEEEEASEEEEEES T_T
I mean I know you just did and all but plz to be updating again!!! ~puppy dog eyes~ pweeease? OH and I'm bored. Oh, and are there any more good fics that you know about?? If you doooo, then could you please teeell meeeee? ^_^ Well, that's all I can think of to type right now, sorry about the extremely short post. I'm DROWNING in school work right now T_T toodles, and remember, YOU'RE AWSUMSAUSE.
Author's Response: Well I have 3 other fics if you wanna read them LOL! Thanks!! Ah i was so nervous about this one i'm glad you liked it though!!! xD THANK YOU xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/12/09 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 24: Lust or Love?
hot hot hot
Author's Response: sizzling haha! Thanks xD
Date: 04/12/09 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 24: Lust or Love?
:D Awwwww, to the last, final part. :P
It was very well written. You did a good job if it was your first time writing smut. :P (i haven't wrote anything like that yet, only a hand job, and i thought that was badly written) I knew something like this was coming, if was predictable... well to me. :P HAPPY EASTER btw. :P
Author's Response: Happy Easter to you too! Awee thanks!!! I was so worried that it sucked! I'm glad you liked it xD Thanks for reading and reviewing xxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/10/09 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 23: Are We Still Good?!
awesomme storry :DDDD
Author's Response: Thanks :D More to come! SO keep reading and reviewing of course hehe!! xD xxxxxxxx
Date: 04/09/09 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 23: Are We Still Good?!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank YOU!!!! xx
Date: 04/09/09 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 23: Are We Still Good?!
holy wow really?!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!%#*+#%
that does NOT look like confetti...
OH WELL.
Knewl chapter!!! It was all, POW! BAM! SMACK! KA-POW! HI-YA! KICK! PUNCH! KAPOWEY!!!
IT WAS AWESOME!!!
And can't wait for the next one! fluff and smut ^___^
A few words come to mind when I say that, but those are not for mortal ears ^_^
sooo..... Whad'ja wish for? or is it bad luck? If it's bad luck, whisper it!!! the bad luck monster won't hear it if you whisper. see look:
~whisper~ penis
see?
OH and happy birthday from my sister, who is READING OVER MY SHOULDER!!!
She isn't getting the message. She's still here. Oh well.
oh and UPDATE SOON PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!
OH WAIT here's a birthday joke:
Bob was in trouble. He forgot his wedding anniversary. His wife was
really pissed.
She told him "Tomorrow morning, I expect to find a gift in the
driveway that goes from 0 to 200 in 6 seconds AND IT BETTER BE THERE !!"
The next morning he got up early and left for work. When his wife woke
up, she looked out the window and sure enough there was a box
gift-wrapped in the middle of the driveway.
Confused, the wife put on her robe and ran out to the driveway, brought
the box back in the house.
She opened it and found a brand new bathroom scale.
Bob has been missing since Friday.
Author's Response: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!! Good One!
rnAwe thanks to you and your sis!!! Well i wished for *looks around* *whispers* Tom and Bill. HAHA!!! Yeah i know i wanted violence between the guys it was so much fun fighting and tearing them apart haha! Yeah there will be smut on the next chapter haha! Actually there will so much lovey dovey that it's gonna KILL ME!!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! xxxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/09/09 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 23: Are We Still Good?!
:D
AWWWW HAHA OMG THOUGH THEY HAD SEX! WOW!
AHHHHHH WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN!!!!
Author's Response: haha! You shall know later! Man i'm still shocked that you're actually reading!! xD HOLY MOTHER %&*^%£$ LOL THANK YOU HUNNY!!! luv ya xxxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/09/09 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 22: The Switch
HOLY SHIT!!!
OMG WOW INTENSE
Author's Response: haha! yeah Drama gets to me soo gooood *smirk*
Date: 04/09/09 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 21: Oh No You Didn't
HEY YOU DIDNT TELL ME YOU HAD NEW CHAPTERS!!!!
wtf i would've killed him though! Damn Bill!
Omg i wonder... next chapter i shall read
Author's Response: Well I didn't tell you because I thought you stopped reading! SORRY won't happen again!!! Yeah you would have killed him I can imagine it LOOOL! Thanks for reaing hunny!!
rnOh go ahead.. oh wait there's already a review.. i'm gonna go answer it xP xxxx
Date: 04/09/09 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 23: Are We Still Good?!
WOW!!!
Awesome Chappie. :D It was like intense with all the violence going on, but i was expected something kidda like that, maybe not all that violence. lol. It twas really good, super duper good, with added cherries and twins on top XD OH and before i forget,
duh duh duh
*glomps* HAPPY BIRTHDAY! :D
Author's Response: *is glomped* THANK YOU!!! YEah i wanted a little violence with boys make them more manly haha!!! Mmmm cherries and twins sounds good xD Thanks for reading and reviewing! xxxxxxxx
Date: 04/09/09 11:53 am Title: Chapter 23: Are We Still Good?!
HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAYYYY!!!!!!!!!! xD
awesome chapter! i totally predicted that everything would be fine! im a genious haha very good chapter :)
Author's Response: awe!!! Thank You! So much!!! Awee yeah i didn't want them to be all fighting and seperated!! Not good!!! Well the nxt chapter iss reaaaalllyyyyy interesing (i think!) Thanks for reading and reviewing!! xxxxxxxxx