Date: 04/22/09 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 20: Wild Night
my worst drunked experience was when i was drinking with my cousins and my friends and things got a little out of hand. then i kissed a guy and i called him bill, found out that guy was my boyfriend...
Author's Response: o.0 OMG!!! That's so emberrassing! WOW... well at least it was your boyfriend you kissed, sucks you called him Bill though... Keep reading honey! maybe it will make you feel betetr by laughing your ass off!!! xxxx
Date: 04/22/09 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 29: A Very Merry Christmas
^^ Hardcore much?? LMFAO
I loveed it OF COURSE!
0o0o Presents next chapter...Yippee!
Ly
Author's Response: Meany... you're EVIL!!! You betta love it ^^... Thanks LOVE!!! MWAAAA
Date: 04/21/09 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 28: I like you! Do you like me?
hmmmm i guess i can do my homework first xD
i would have picked tom, because im a sucker for a cliche and if she had picked georg then thats not how a happily ever after goes! not that your story is cliche haha i just like to see the right guy and girl together
and now for my own silly comments:
i totally vote for a scene at the airport, because that would just be cool
Author's Response: A scene at the airport you say? Hmmm i'll think about it... but i'm not sure! Yeah I know I Love cliches!!! Thank you very very very very much for reading and reviewing ^^ xxxxxxxx
Date: 04/21/09 06:53 am Title: Chapter 28: I like you! Do you like me?
They will get into something at the airport!
idk if i had to chose i'd pick Georg!
Great chapter my darling!
Author's Response: To be honest I don't who I'd pick. I love both Georg and Tom but uhm... it has to be according to the situation I guess. Awe thanks honey, I wanted Georg to have a little something, something. Next is the airport...! Luv ya xxxx
Date: 04/20/09 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 28: I like you! Do you like me?
I think it was suckish... XD KIDDING omg it was good.. like Awesome. And for some reason when Georg was talking about meeting her at the park i was like 'what, he gonna tell her that he likes her?' And then i was like OMG, I WAS RIGHT!! xD
Now, who would i pick if i were Mar... hmm. well anyone who knew me would know that answer OMG STICK WIT TOMMMMMM!!! XD (i feel bad about tom with the whole stalker people...)
*huggles* (and i also realized u used huggles in ur chapter notes *glares* KIDDING!!)
*hugs again* cuz i feel like it :P xxxx cant wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: DAMN!!! You always do that! Stsrt wit something awful!! AH! Freaks me out!! Yeah I feel bad for Tom too! Poor Tomi! Yeah I use huggles and hugs! So I'm gonna do both to ya! *huggles n hugs* Thanks honey! xxxxx
Date: 04/20/09 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 28: I like you! Do you like me?
ummmm... IDK if I was Mar I guess I'd pick Tom, because of the fact that they're in a relationship, and lub echuther vewwy much ^_^ And OMFG the news about Tom is awful! T_T Oh, and This chapter, as always, rocks!!! X3
Author's Response: Yeah Tom's news was awful and sad!! I love Tomi!! Thanks Honey!!! xxxxxxxx You rock btw x)
Date: 04/20/09 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 28: I like you! Do you like me?
I would pick Tom. no doubt:p more please
Author's Response: Yeah I know! I will have more xD Thanks for reading and reviewing of course xxxx
Date: 04/20/09 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 28: I like you! Do you like me?
Hmm who would i pick... I would walk up to Lara and slap her straight across the face shouting that Bill was mine and i need her to back off if she wants to live XD ORRR Georg, sorry just not a big Tom fan, cos i like his brooo more XD
Author's Response: HAHA!!! OMG this review literally made me laugh my ass off!!! So original and deffinately not what I expected AWESOME!!! Hmmm I'm more of a Tom fan and aslo Bill and Georg and Gustav aa what the hell Love them all anyone is good for meh haha!! Thanks for reviewing and reading xD
Date: 04/18/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 27: You're Dating Who?!
HEY! i was right! that doesnt happen much. yayy! hehe. but.moms are bitches. cant live with them cant live without them right? *sigh* theyll get over it
Author's Response: True that!! Yeah!!! Thanks for reading xxxx
Date: 04/18/09 04:25 am Title: Chapter 27: You're Dating Who?!
awww poor babies!! Ughh i hate that! i bet if i have a rock bf my mother would react the same a bit :[
oh well its my life *starts singing Gwen Stefani's "It's My Life"*
hahah another chapter that is great!
Author's Response: Yeah I know, my mum would totally flip out! Like WAAAA! but yeah. Thanks honey!! xxxxxxx
Date: 04/18/09 04:16 am Title: Chapter 26: Reunion
lmfao i so would not do or think that lmfao! but i fa-king loved it!!! as always your the best author!!!
Author's Response: To be honest I totally would! Yeah would do it at least if it were oh let's say a few months ago *smirks* Awee thanks lovey! And you're my best/friend/reader ever!!! xxxxxxx
Date: 04/18/09 04:07 am Title: Chapter 25: Public? Yes? No?
lmao hahah i am not a bad person! yayyy! omg omgomg heheh love this shortie, its still very good short or long!
Author's Response: Yeah you are a bad person!! Well at leatst you're MY bad person xP!! I'm fucking with ya lav! You're an amazing person!!! xxxxx
Date: 04/18/09 04:02 am Title: Chapter 24: Lust or Love?
O.O - OH MY....
I enjoyed this(shhhhhhhhhhh)
Author's Response: haha OMG SHE LIKED IT!!! YAY!!!! xxxxxxx
Date: 04/18/09 12:35 am Title: Chapter 27: You're Dating Who?!
Oh oh, i want a Tomi flavored one. *waves arms frantically* me, me! yeh over here! lol. OMG I loves this chapter, i would marry it if that was possible, and i would name our kid baby chappie XD I feel so special that it was dedicated to me. *big huggles*
I think dad's are more of a problem. Well mine is. lol. dad are more protective of their little girls... even if your not so little anymore. :P
When you put that mar needed to go pee and then she was like i'm hungry, i was like "i wonder if she got pregnant?" i don't know, it was just the first thought that came to my mind, XD
Anyways, i will say it again. AWESOME CHAPPIE OMG LUVS IT!!! *BIG HUGGLES* xxxxxx
Author's Response: *gives a Tomi flavoured smoothie* there you go! HEY you are not allowed to marry my chappie *hides chappy away* haha! Uhm nah Mar ain't pregnant! Yeah I know my dad is veryyyyy over protective but when it comes to dating guys my mum steps in lol! THANK YOU!!! *is huggled* *huggles back* xxxx
Date: 04/17/09 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 27: You're Dating Who?!
yay! I love christmas! but ewwwww, a Bill/Tom/Georg?Gustav flavored smoothie? wouldn't that taste like... sweat and hair and stuff? and how would you know what they taste like?? O_O And also, uhm... I have no ideas on what to do for your tribute on DeviantART so... if you have any ideas, lemme know, and also, HI!
Author's Response: haha maybe, you have to make it taste how you want it! xD. Uhm Idk do something for like bill and Tom make i'm sure you can come up with something! But i'll let you know if anything comes to mind xD HI!!!!
Date: 04/17/09 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: Killing Time
this story is interesting :P
Author's Response: Why thank you! Keep reading and it gets more interesting xD THANK YOU!!! xxx
Date: 04/16/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 26: Reunion
OHHH, i forgot to do the homework XD anyways, i think it'll be her mom, since well she's alway gone from what u said and well, yeah, so that's my guess. Plus theres not really anyone else, that we no of, that would get mad, pissed, whatevers gonna happen. :P
Author's Response: You are WAYYYYY to good, or is it my story predictable??! Nah, you're just good! Well since you have been an amazing Reviewer and I absolutely love your reviews! The next chapter is dedicated to ya hon! Hope you'll like it *wink* *wink* xxxxxx
Date: 04/16/09 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 26: Reunion
Ooooooo, that was awesome. So, that is who Mary is. Lol . Now if I was her, Mary, I’d be hitting on Tom too. :P Well, like, who wouldn’t? lol. And if I was Mar, I would drag her away and well, yeah do the same thing she did…I think XD OMG, I GIVES you chocolate for … um… OH right, the Awesomeness chapter. XD :D Keep up the good work *huggles* xxx lol
Author's Response: Aweee!!! Thanks so much!!! xD YUMMY Chocolate!! *is huggled* Yeah sure you would hit on Tom but then if you were instead of Mar... haha you would kill her xP Thanks hun! *looks up* oo another review from you i shall go check it out haha! xxxx
Date: 04/15/09 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 26: Reunion
who will find out the what and whom? anywaaaaay...
the secret. well, that is a very toutchy subject, now isn't it? hmmm... well... the secret is...
A secret so I can't tell anyone.
I am being so evil, aren't I XD mua ha ha...
anyway,
YAY they came public and stuffs. and consequenseseses fer teh next chappy is SWEET. I love them things. those r candee right? or is those halls?
~shrug~ i dunno, i dun care. sooo......
that was some pretty nice sex in the last chapter.
XD
really, almost all of the sex scenes I've read, people leave author's comments like 'It's my first time, plz be nice' and that's cool and all, but the sex scenes themselves aren't bad at like, all. srsly, nuu lie. and also, updatteeeee pleeeeezezsezezez...ez..ezez..ez.
AAAGH JSUT UPDATE PLZZZZZ
P.S. I might make a something for you on my deviantART account. my username is...
*whispar* luvluvshine13.
DUN LAFF! I like that username and its cool. on onliney things my usernames are usually luvluvshine, luvluvahine13, or darma. BUT I am not 13. My age is not that age. the ag in which I am is not 13. I aint 13. I wanted a moose when I was 8 though.
Author's Response: I love your username! It's cute :D Is that the secret?! I wanna know *pouts* *stomps feet* TELL ME!!!! Really you would do something for me? *puppy eyes* *whispers* that you would be totaly awesome and I would love you forever! *giggles* I will update soon! Aren't I doing that?! I used to update every once a week you know?! Now i'm updated almost everyday!! *crosses arms* No but seriously I will update soon! Yeah there are consequences for them going public, poor things though! AND Christmas is coming soon haha! No lie, i know but uhm yeahit had to be like because of the timing! Anyways! I am not giving any more details!!! >.< THANK YOU for reading and leaving the awesome chapter! It's so long *squeals* I love it!!! :D Thanks xxxxxxxxx
Date: 04/15/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 26: Reunion
hmmmm...
so i think. that...mar's mom will find out and.... will get pissed! or..idk! i suck at guessing. so. yeah i guess im going to have to wait xD
Author's Response: I guess you don't suck after all!!! You get an A++ for your homework and a cookie!!! Thanks for reviewing!! xxxxxxxxxxx