Date: 11/30/08 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aw! Dx
How sad!!!
Who helped him???
More soon???
Author's Response: Theres more soon i promise :D rnand it was teacher ;P
Date: 11/30/08 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
0_0 ahh! oh noooo! Tom needs to save him!!!
Poor Bill :( Did his brother really die?
I love reading this, it's a fact. :)
& as always, I cant wait for the next chapter!! ^_^
(haha, sorry, ive drank wayyy too much coffee today :P)
Author's Response: yes he did really die.. il explain more about that later :D rnand thankyou its great to know you love reading it, seeing as i didnt think anyone would like it :D
Date: 11/30/08 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
shit what happened come on add the next chappie please
Author's Response: :D the next chapi is on its way :D
Date: 11/30/08 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
A brillian fic!!! Please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Will do :D
Date: 11/30/08 11:48 am Title: Chapter 4
oh please please pretty please update soon i am very into this stor if u do i give u skittles *waves pack of skittles*
Author's Response: Deal :D
Date: 11/30/08 10:55 am Title: Chapter 4
oh noes!!! =0
this was sooo sad!! *sniffles*
i hope to GOD that tom was just in shock and not doing nothing after he foud out what was going down just because he was afraid of loosing new-found friends...
please update soon? (A)(A)(A)(A)
Author's Response: i have it written already
Date: 11/28/08 11:24 am Title: Chapter 3
omg!! O_O
amazing, but sad (not the beginning though, that was really sweet ^_^)
i can't wait for thenext update! =0 i can't wait to find out what will happen next (or what has more has happened in the past) =D
Author's Response: Thankyou :D
Date: 11/28/08 11:18 am Title: Chapter 3
wow,what else happens??????????? i need to know.lol
Author's Response: lol not alot XD
Date: 11/26/08 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
ooohh yay :D I love it when you update :) The dream turned out well by the way- even if it is so sad.!
Author's Response: yay thankyou :D
Date: 11/23/08 04:26 am Title: Chapter 2
ha cute. :]
so tom went through bulling too?
great update.
More soon?
Author's Response: thankyou rnand yes sort offrnand writing it now :D
Date: 11/22/08 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
awwww that was cute
bill well always have tomi
i can relate with bill im a social outcast people dont pick on me they just tend to ignore me ,
hmmm i dont see any mistake with the grammar in the story ooo and i do love how you change the pov.
keep the great work up
Author's Response: thankyou rnand yes me to i pretty much wrote it after an experiance i had
Date: 11/22/08 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
awwwz!!!! lol i love it!
Author's Response: Aww thankyou Xd
Date: 11/22/08 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
ILOVEITMORE!! >w< Great job hon, just a few grammar/spelling mistakes, but that's okay!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: thanx hun
Date: 11/22/08 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
aww this is so cute :D
& I like how you wrote the first line a lot :)
Author's Response: thankyou :D
Date: 11/22/08 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
this is good!! keep writing!! i wonder what else is gonna happen!!
Author's Response: :D thankyou :D
Date: 11/22/08 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
umm... was that a little too quick?
but good anyway. you have STYLE
Author's Response: im not going to develop the twin relationship for a while, but ive gotten an idea that they feel like they have known eachother before.. it should fit...
Date: 11/21/08 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
ZOMGIREALLYREALLYLOVETHIS!!! >w< Great use of dialogue and props (roses and chocolates!! >w
Author's Response: jejeje you know me :D rntokio hotel mixed with the rasmus :D the song ten black roses automatically came to me when writting it i was like :D il send you ten black roses and my mum was like O.o you have lost it XD rnim glad you liked it :D
Date: 11/21/08 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
ohhh, sweet :D I'll listen to it, thanks!
Author's Response: your welcome i hope you enjoy rnIm writting the next chapter right now so it should be up soon :D
Date: 11/21/08 10:15 am Title: Chapter 1
I like this..please continue
Author's Response: of course :D
Author's Response: of course :D
Date: 11/21/08 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1
awwwwww!!!
i totally loved it =D really cute and really sad all at the same time ^_^
one thing though, u have to put up "alternate universe" as one of the genre thingies ;)
please update soon? (A)
Author's Response: oh thankyou for that il make sure i do that :Drnand sure il update soon though i have my exams soon so it may be slow :D