Date: 05/18/10 04:48 am Title: Britney Spears is Not a Parental Role Model
That was handled beautifully and I am SO glad you told some of the interview questions. I truly appreciate and love your creativity. I just love how you handle all of this, it's very cute but believable (Unlike some *cough* my Mpreg *cough* ).
Date: 05/18/10 04:36 am Title: You'll Scare The Baby
Ah, babies and lip rings. One of my little sisters (their twins, fraternal though) just LOVES my lip rings. Poor Bill :/ he's already going through all of that stress and shit and Zoe cried at the site of him. You know how is she going to feel once she's older? I mean she's going to know Tom and Bill are her parents but everyone outside the home will say Andi is her dad. Poor kid. Well hell, what do I know? You've probably already thought this through and found the solution. That my dear is why I must read on, and just because your story is great in general.
Date: 05/18/10 04:19 am Title: The Joys of Mother(Father)Hood
Puppy! I had completely forgotten about Puppy really lol. I like how you add in other people's reactions, such as the grandparents, and have them want stuff too; like normal people. This is definitely developing interestingly and I'm enjoying it just as much as "...Makes Three"
Oh, and generally I'm not one to do this but I caught a mistake.
“I’m going to go change her diaper, and Mara and I was wondering if we could take Zoe on a walk around the neighborhood.”
Date: 05/18/10 04:00 am Title: The Prospect of Alone Time
My goodness, I just LOVE how realistic you are about everything. It's just so natural and real. I myself have never been a mom but of course I've seen my mom be a mom and that's how babies are, you're great. I like they're handling how they feel about everything too and their fights. The fights and things they have and the small little fusses are good too. It keeps everything proportioned.
Date: 05/18/10 03:49 am Title: Weighing In
That would be absolutely terrible. There are many downfalls to being a celebrity and you show them blankly; I enjoy it. Tom not being able to talk about with the world either must be hard and I wonder if he can do it (I'm very excited to see if he spoils it or not)
Oh, and I know exactly how Bill feels with those damned StairMasters >.>
Date: 05/18/10 03:40 am Title: Prologue
I regretfully did not know there was a sequel, but I TRULY loved "...Makes Three" so I have to say I believe I will truly enjoy this.
I like how you're including realistic things with the label and touring and all that good stuff. It took me a while to remember some stuff (and I even had to ask Meg about something) but I am already feeling attached to the world again.
Those damn label people though >.> telling Bill to lose weight. Psh, I honestly would prefer if Bill gained a little weight.
Date: 05/14/10 05:28 pm Title: Candid Camera
I want the next chapter
Date: 05/14/10 05:28 pm Title: Candid Camera
I want the next chapter
Date: 05/14/10 05:28 pm Title: Candid Camera
I want the next chapter
Date: 05/12/10 05:26 pm Title: Candid Camera
dammit!
this story is so addictive!! I actually had to read a French book (whoever was the one who said Dutch people have to learn French??) but instead, I read this story.... :)
This story even made me dream of being a pregnant male. (real-life, I'm female) I was quite shocked when I woke up ^^;
And now I'm longing for a new chapter :D (I eventually finished the French book anyway)
Date: 05/05/10 10:32 pm Title: Candid Camera
I really enjoyed your story. : ]
I was a little hesitant at first, because the first chapters were full of unneeded punctuation marks, such as the ever common "!!!", but the idea of a male pregnancy caused by a faulty product is very original.
I like it.
Keep writin'.
Author's Response: LOL yes. Let's just say I've gotten a bit better than that first chapter. God, it was so long ago... /nostalgia Anyhoo, as to the "keep writing', I most assuredly have and will. Feel free to stop by any of my other better written fics, lol.
Date: 04/29/10 11:22 pm Title: Candid Camera
sooo cute! can't wait for the next chapter... Zoe is the cutest thing!
Date: 04/18/10 09:33 am Title: Candid Camera
Is it just the end of the story :O It cant just end like that!! Love it!!
Sooo many hours i've put out on this Fic and i LOVE IT!!
Date: 04/15/10 10:51 pm Title: Candid Camera
hahahaha
oh zoe.
shes adorable!
love the family moments!
Date: 04/09/10 07:37 am Title: Candid Camera
when are there comming new chapters? :D
Date: 04/08/10 08:47 am Title: Prologue
Thank you :)
How far of chapter 13 are you? Very far?
I hope its not long. Simply cant wait.
Date: 03/15/10 02:08 pm Title: Candid Camera
Love this :)
Can I ask why david has two names?
Jost and david?
Author's Response: sometimes they call David by his first name, and sometimes by his last.
Date: 03/01/10 01:33 pm Title: Prologue
YEY!!! Another story :D You dont know how happy this made me!
Ekkekeek
Date: 01/30/10 01:49 pm Title: Candid Camera
eek!!! i need more! :D
Date: 01/30/10 06:28 am Title: The Prospect of Alone Time
why would ANYONE stop reading!!! i love this!!! its like frc-crack!