Date: 10/22/10 04:22 pm Title: Happy Fiasco to You
hahaha
awesome
Date: 10/22/10 07:14 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
ROFLOL!!! I love how you intersperse segments of this fic with Zoe's antics :))
Date: 10/19/10 09:54 pm Title: Happy Fiasco to You
i thought you forgotten!!
wish mara would just.... falll off the earth.
god bushido! your not supposed to say that!
uh oh :/
Date: 10/19/10 02:57 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
If I remeber correctly bill never told Tom that it was Bushido that have zoe the rattle. So is Tom going to get mad? And ps I'm so glad you're updating again i've loved this series for so long!
Date: 10/19/10 12:06 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
awwww that was so good. Yay for updates. Am i the only one whos sitting on the edge of their seats munchin on popcorn anxiously waiting for the Gs to get back together???.... And its offical im warming up to Bushido -_-
Date: 10/18/10 11:04 pm Title: Happy Fiasco to You
Yay! Finally, my favorite story. :3 I'm still cheering you on, love.
Date: 10/18/10 07:06 pm Title: Happy Fiasco to You
oooh i was so so SO happy to see this had been updated :D i can't tell you how much i love this fic, it always makes me smile. And i'm glad Bushido isn't going to fuck with anything. I had to go back to ...Makes Three to remind myself exactly what happened between Bill and Bushido xD i'm really looking forward to the upcoming chapters! Thanks for the update :)
Date: 10/18/10 03:20 pm Title: Happy Fiasco to You
Ah, tiny little Zoe always makes herself look *cough* good in front of the camera!
Though Bushido made me slightly nervous. He always do though.
Date: 10/18/10 01:45 pm Title: Happy Fiasco to You
*claps* Yay Sophia! You know you're a miracle worker. 3 updates all at once, I love it. I liked the chapter a lot and I really love how the whole Bill/Bushido thing came out. It was a very lovely chapter and I'm really looking forward to more.
Date: 10/18/10 10:38 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
I'm so glad to learn that you didn't forget this story :D I was so happy to see an update. I adore reading about this universe, the characters are so interesting and your writing style is fantastic. It's really rare that I like Bushido in a fic, but here, he really his a good guy, keeping their secret and all... can't wait to read the next chapter :)
Date: 10/18/10 10:34 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
Awww! This was such a cute chapter, but at the same time, you just feel something's going to snap soon. While reading it, from the start I braced myself for a major "Daddy" from Zoe to Tom in front of everyone including Mara's very scandalized face. I didn't think that Bushido would enter the picture so soon.
When I didn't read the chap yet, I was afraid of what you'd write: like Bill being poisoned by the chocolate he ate eventhough it passed through security and all. Thank God. So I guess I read too much into what "Lisabeth"'s gesture was.
I really have the feeling Tom is going to implode soon. I have to check if he knows that Bushido knows. Oddly I can't remember that detail and it's bugging me, but I think he knows. And speaking of Bushido, he's so nice and I don't know if your intention was to make your readers feel at ease with his character, but if that is the case then you succeeded. I kind of trust him? I mean, you made him sound so convincingly sincere and that he won't do anything to harm the twins and Zoe, including asking for anything in return.
Reading anything about Zoe's such a pleasure, I don't want the chapter to end. LOL@ the dark purple balloons. And what Georg told Melinda about what Bill would do with her list (ddisagree with it all and come up later with one of them like it was his idea), is such "in-character". The Bill and Tom of "Makes three" never seemed out of character to me. Tom especially. He had so much trouble in the begining when Zoe was still but an egg in Bill. Fainting and all that. He's the most vulnerable of them, I think. Such a big heart and so much love, but not enough freedom and field to express it all fully anywhere he wants. That's his greatest burden. He's kind of bound, and in his stead I'd suffocate. Plus, he's not really getting any either since they became parents lol. When was the last time he got laid properly. Morning BJs might be nice but he needs something definitely stronger to recharge his battery.
Children are like living memory sticks, saving all the datas in their memory and remind it to you later with exact precision embarassing the hell out of you when you least expect it. Tom and Bill should stop kissing and touching each other around her-scratch that, they should. Children who witness their parents loving each other are happier. Because those who witness their parents fighting are among the saddest. No matter what you do, good or bad, children always feel involved.So...Tom and Bill are kind of in a cul-de-sac here. Will they overcome their problems? dun dun dun - lol.
I'm glad you updated. It's always such a pleasure. Waiting patiently for the next chap to come ;)
Date: 10/18/10 10:29 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
Awww! This was such a cute chapter, but at the same time, you just feel something's going to snap soon. While reading it, from the start I braced myself for a major "Daddy" from Zoe to Tom in front of everyone including Mara's very scandalized face. I didn't think that Bushido would enter the picture so soon.
When I didn't read the chap yet, I was afraid of what you'd write: like Bill being poisoned by the chocolate he ate eventhough it passed through security and all. Thank God. So I guess I read too much into what "Lisabeth"'s gesture was.
I really have the feeling Tom is going to implode soon. I have to check if he knows that Bushido knows. Oddly I can't remember that detail and it's bugging me, but I think he knows. And speaking of Bushido, he's so nice and I don't know if your intention was to make your readers feel at ease with his character, but if that is the case then you succeeded. I kind of trust him? I mean, you made him sound so convincingly sincere and that he won't do anything to harm the twins and Zoe, including asking for anything in return.
Reading anything about Zoe's such a pleasure, I don't want the chapter to end. LOL@ the dark purple balloons. And what Georg told Melinda about what Bill would do with her list (ddisagree with it all and come up later with one of them like it was his idea), is such "in-character". The Bill and Tom of "Makes three" never seemed out of character to me. Tom especially. He had so much trouble in the begining when Zoe was still but an egg in Bill. Fainting and all that. He's the most vulnerable of them, I think. Such a big heart and so much love, but not enough freedom and field to express it all fully anywhere he wants. That's his greatest burden. He's kind of bound, and in his stead I'd suffocate. Plus, he's not really getting any either since they became parents lol. When was the last time he got laid properly. Morning BJs might be nice but he needs something definitely stronger to recharge his battery.
Children are like living memory sticks, saving all the datas in their memory and remind it to you later with exact precision embarassing the hell out of you when you least expect it. Tom and Bill should stop kissing and touching each other around her-scratch that, they should. Children who witness their parents loving each other are happier. Because those who witness their parents fighting are among the saddest. No matter what you do, good or bad, children always feel involved.So...Tom and Bill are kind of in a cul-de-sac here. Will they overcome their problems? dun dun dun - lol.
I'm glad you updated. It's always such a pleasure. Waiting patiently for the next chap to come ;)
Date: 10/18/10 09:43 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
*squeal* I'm so glad you updated this! I keep hoping for at least their parents to find out. I hope that'll happen eventually. heehe. thanks for the update!
Date: 10/18/10 08:55 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
that's great...running by with her diaper off...gotta love kids...
Date: 10/18/10 03:36 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
Bu is so cute! I love you so much for not making him a total ass hat. I was so hoping that Bu would end up covering for Bill and Tom though. Just so there might be a threesome some time in the future.
Date: 10/18/10 03:30 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
Yay! for an update!! XD
This was a cute chapter, and I'm glad Bushido is being a nice guy and keeping their secret. Can't wait for more! :D
Date: 10/18/10 03:23 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
yay!! I'm so glad you are updating this again. i just adore this story. Keep up the great work!!
Date: 10/18/10 03:05 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
"You don't fuck with family." I read that and instantly thought that was so untrue in this case, because really, Bill and Tom are family... they fuck with each other...
Anypoodle!
I truly love this! It's really truly adorable and I'm so happy it was updated!
Date: 10/15/10 11:21 am Title: A Tisket, A Tasket
more more moreeeee
Date: 10/11/10 12:11 am Title: A Tisket, A Tasket
argh nooooo why did it end *falls from chair* must reads more *pout*