Date: 11/11/10 12:00 am Title: Dayee!!!
Gosh, my heart broke at Zoe calling her daddy :/ Such a complex situation, but I feel happy that Bill is giving the choice to Tom. And they had sex, wheee :) Yes, I relate strongly to the happiness of parents of young kids being able to have sex :D In the end of the chapter, with Simone saying Zoe thinks Tom's her uncle, is that meant to say she thinks Tom's her dad? I'm a bit confused by that, as Simone is talking about Andreas as the other dad and I can't seem to remember whether she actually knows about Bill and Tom.
Author's Response: LOL yes! I fixed that twice after posting. Hope this time it sticks; thank you for letting me know and thank you for the kind words!
Date: 11/09/10 07:05 pm Title: Dayee!!!
I would think, with how close the twins are, that they could get away with saying that Tom was her dad as much as bill, not because she was biologically, but because they are that close and share everything. They could just say that Zoe is lucky because she gets three parents instead of two. it might not be exactly what Tom wants, but it sure would make life easier. i could see them doing that in real life, if one of them had a baby to take care of, that they baby would just be both of theirs. thanks for the update!!
Date: 11/09/10 06:47 pm Title: Dayee!!!
I really hope they're gonna tell them the truth. Lovely chapter, sooo glad you updated.
Date: 11/09/10 05:07 pm Title: Dayee!!!
Darn, this was coming. Poor Tom.
Date: 11/09/10 05:04 pm Title: Dayee!!!
this is killing me!
they neeeeeed to know tomis the faather!
Date: 11/09/10 01:49 pm Title: Dayee!!!
My heart is breaking for poor Tom.
Date: 11/09/10 12:50 pm Title: Dayee!!!
I’m always SO excited to see an update for this fic! I adore the universe you created with these characters and I can’t get enough! The scene where Zoe was crying for Tom, calling him daddy was absolutely heart breaking and beautiful! Very well written, I was able to feel Tom’s emotions. I wonder what he’ll decide; I hope someday they will tell the truth, it’s just so sad for Tom and Bill to not be recognized as Zoe’s unique parents. I’m glad the twins finally had some alone time, there is so much love and passion between them, it’s beautiful.
Date: 11/09/10 12:49 pm Title: Dayee!!!
Great chapter!
I just finished re-reading makes three again 13 days ago, and I realized that Tom didn't know that Bushido's in the secret as well. he just knows he gave her the diamond rattle. He doesn't know about Roberta's bribery (though, that might not be a problem because her bro and stephen know it all too). There are so many things, and it was so painful sometimes to read about his struggle to keep it together, having his nose bleeding due to stress and anxiety. One of the best part I re-read was no doubt about Bill asking people how he was acting, how did they saw him etc...Selfish Bill always got what he wanted, and people willingly gave it to him. It's really heartwarming to read later that he changed.
Now about Zoe's paternity. If they ever tell...Mara and Fredrick's hope to have a grandchild will have to wait until andreas nocks his girlfriend up(She's "Zoe's step mom o_o") lawl. People would not react the andreas did because Andreas know them. I already picture Mara going: "you're sick! you were fucking your twin brother!" I take them as an example because I can't imagine about Simone or Gordon. Or Jörg. Talking about him, he is a sweet guy in this fic. He was like my hero when he made Bill talk in the hospital. Great guy.
I hope Tom overcame his attack issues. Poor baby. I remember in chapter 34 (wait, I'll just bring the portion here)
“You would’ve gotten mad like you did with Andi in the hospital and blabbed our secret. I don’t even want to think about what that would’ve done.” Bill shuddered.
Tom shifted uneasily but didn’t respond. He knew Bill was right and that was what bothered him. Sometimes he felt irrationally angry; he knew it was irrational but there was nothing he could do about it. He felt powerless and it came out of nowhere. He just needed more sleep, Tom always felt cranky when he didn’t get enough sleep.
But his brain buzzed all over the place before he just collapsed into exhaustion. Tom worried about Bill, their baby girl, and if they could find a house they liked before Bill had to settle in before the cesarean. Even that scared him because he’d read online where there had been complications for the mother; if Bill died, he’d die. A child didn’t change that."
;__; *hugs him*
Thank you for the update!that was a great read :) I see you have a new "het"fic(so many chapters already? :o I really don't pay attention XD)Gotta read that after my exams, hehe!
I'm looking forward to read the next chapter!
Date: 11/09/10 12:23 pm Title: Dayee!!!
Ah I was so happy to see this updated again so soon :D Wow, and a lot happened in this chapter! I wonder what Tom's decision will be, whether he'll tell people he's the real father. And I wonder where he was at the end of that chapter? Hope not anywhere too sinister. Aw this is one of my favourite fics ^_^ it's adorable, I love the way you've depicted thier lives together with Zoe. This is such a beautiful fic :) I'm looking forward to an update!
Date: 11/09/10 08:57 am Title: Dayee!!!
love love LOVE this update! but now you have me on edge, who was watching Melinda and what's gonna happen with the Tom situation *facedesk* oooooh i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 11/09/10 05:22 am Title: Dayee!!!
Haha, I love that Tom has to help him write checks! I can totally imagine that would be the case.
Great chapter...I can wait to see what Tom decides.
Date: 11/09/10 04:15 am Title: Dayee!!!
I'm curious how the family would react if they knew.. Of course Mara and whats-his-name would be very upset, because they suddenly aren't grandparents anymore.. But I wonder how Simone and Gordon would react...
I can't wait till next chapter :D
Xx
Robin
Date: 11/09/10 01:18 am Title: Dayee!!!
Building up to another crescendo here :) It's becoming intense how they're begun to talk about Tom coming out as Zoe's real father.
Good job and nice how Bill was able to help Andreas' family. *Maria
Date: 11/09/10 12:15 am Title: Dayee!!!
I love this story so much, by have always felt bad for Tom, he has given up so much and has to hide how he feels for his own child.
Date: 11/09/10 12:03 am Title: Prologue
=) I'm so happy you updated this story, thank you!!
Date: 11/08/10 11:24 pm Title: Dayee!!!
cute! *is still hoping for Tom and Bill to reveal the truth*
Date: 11/08/10 10:18 pm Title: Dayee!!!
Great chapter! I can't wait to find out if they decided to tell them Tom's the father or not. :D
Date: 11/07/10 04:07 pm Title: Happy Fiasco to You
Zoe is a mess (I say that in the most fondest of ways). SO ADORABLE!
Date: 10/29/10 02:52 pm Title: Happy Fiasco to You
yay! I loved this update...I can picture the fansites going crazy over diaperless Zoe :D can't wait for more!
Date: 10/25/10 06:28 am Title: Happy Fiasco to You
YAY TO BABY ZOE UPDATES AND OMG I LOVE BUSHIDO HE IS LIKE A STAR <3 <3
