Date: 12/11/08 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 15 – Sleepless nights
*grins*
Author's Response: and *giggles* ?? *wink*
Date: 12/11/08 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 14 – One phone call
“Get it,” I command pointing at the package at my feet.
“Aaawwaahhh but it’s funnier to watch you try and do it.”
hahahahaha. Omg. My sister and I 100%.
And I like how you actually told us what the ring tone was, instead of "my phone rang" or something along those lines, and that the ring tone you chose meant something =)
Excellent!
Author's Response: Glad I got the sis/sis relationship right! Awesome fic writing on my part! Hooray for me! I'm glad someone else apprecated the ring tone. I went and searched for Sammy Delux songs that would work, saw that one and said "yes perfect." I like Wake me Up better but I thought that that one worked out better. But I digress, so thank you!
Date: 12/11/08 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Déjà vu?
nein nein nein NEEIIIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fucking tabloids!!!!
Author's Response: I know right! I needed something really good to FUCK IT UP! Cause it can't go too well and!!! he's a celebrity and that kind of shit happens to them and she needed a taste of what she had to deal with in the future. It needed to hit her hard, and it needed to hit him harder. That this who situation was really real.
Date: 12/11/08 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 12 – Oops!
Hahaha I love the last 1/4 of it xD
"So you wanna ditch school?" "Yeah.. real mature." lmao
AND! I didnt mention in the last review about how I loved the whole breast milk part xD not in a kinky way, but hilarity.
Well.. maybe a bit kinky. ^^
Author's Response: I'm glad you love the last 1/4 of it. I must have gotten the sis/sis relationship part right! woo hoo for me considering I don't have a sister I think that's some pretty good fiction on my part! ha! The breast milk think was funny I just wanted to add a little humor to break the moment of complete intensity. I'm glad it was well recieved. *grins*
Date: 12/11/08 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 11 – Haven’t we been here before?
“My English is perfect!”
“Ja your ver-we own spchool vershion of English?”
He scowls at me, “Should Ich spreche nur Deutsche?”
“Nien!”
lmfao xD I loved every part of this chapter, and even awwwwwwwed at the end ^^ As well as laughed at the soft-fake-porn haahhaha
So good =D
Author's Response: I know that part of TH TV always makes me giggle, and I know that if I were in this type of sitch with Tom I would totally be making fun of his ver-we own spchool vershion of English. The fake porn, I know right? *nods head* I'm glad you thought that was just as funny as I did!!! *grins* Your reviews make me happy!
Date: 12/11/08 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 10 – Up and down and repeat
Teehe.. Craine part was cute
And the end gave me goosebumps. Like, full body goosebumps.
I hope it keeps up ^^
Author's Response: The crane part was an excerpt from my own life. I’m forever making them when I have paper in front of me. Thanks! I gave you goosebumps. WOW that's so cool.
Date: 12/11/08 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 9 – Signing session in Hollywood
*actually panicked with her when she was about to hand Tom everything* You totally got my heart racing!! And you got their reactions to it perfectly (i think anyway...) Awesome awesome awesome ^^
Author's Response: *grins* really? That's so cool that I affected you? Thank you that's a great complement. *grins* I'm so proud.
Date: 12/11/08 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 10 – Up and down and repeat
I have placed a curse on manwhores every where! Daughters! Beautiful intelliegent kind friendly daughters the kind all guys want to date and their mothers want them to marry. Why would i place this curse well i'm sure you can figure out why!
Author's Response: I got you all mad and flustered that makes me all happy and proud!
Date: 12/10/08 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Epilogue - Potential
Me loved this story....This was a good ending. It was sound and it was believable and...mature I think. Good job! Can't wait to read your next fic!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. This review has stuck with me and made me feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside. Believable and mature. *grins* Thank you that is a spectacular complement! Thank you so much for reading and having faith in my future stories.
Date: 12/10/08 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Epilogue - Potential
Bloody wonderfull!!
sad to see it come to an end though.
would you ever consider makeing a sequill to this?
sorry i really can't spell
Author's Response: *hand on hips* and *tilts head* that's why there's an epilogue so you get an idea of the future but I don't have to write it. *shakes head clearly amused* I'm glad you love it! *nods* Really I am! But?! *frowns* I'm pretty sure I'm done with this storyline. I was all about the fight and the conflict and I wanted to see where my version of Tom would take the reality of knocking up a fan and dealing with the out come. I promise I will write more stories but I don't think right now that I want much more to do with this reality. *raises eye brows* and *bites lips which turns into a smile and then a little evil grin* If you want a taste of a future story you can e-mail me and I'll tease you with a plotline that I've started working out. *grins* I’ll make you pay for it *chews on lip ring* but it might be worth it if you’re *smiles an evil smile broadly* desperate. *chuckles softly* TTFNrn
Date: 12/10/08 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Epilogue - Potential
Oh wow! You know I love you and this story, and you know I'll read anything you write. Thanx for the excitment and nice moment, I really enjoyed it!
Cookies and hugs! :-)
Author's Response: Rouge darling, I'm thankful to have you as a reader. Thank you for your lovely complements and your love. Appreciate you belief that future stories will be as loved and appreciated as this one. *big hug*
Date: 12/10/08 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Epilogue - Potential
I want you to write a sequel about the tour!:D:D:D:D cuz I can't get enough of this fic:d
Author's Response: *hand on hips* and *tilts head* that's why there's an epilogue so you get an idea of the future but I don't have to write it. *shakes head clearly amused* I'm glad you love it! *nods* Really I am! But?! *frowns* I'm pretty sure I'm done with this storyline. I was all about the fight and the conflict and I wanted to see where my version of Tom would take the reality of knocking up a fan and dealing with the out come. I promise I will write more stories but I don't think right now that I want much more to do with this reality. *raises eye brows* and *bites lips which turns into a smile and then a little evil grin* If you want a taste of a future story you can e-mail me and I'll tease you with a plotline that I've started working out. *grins* I’ll make you pay for it *chews on lip ring* but it might be worth it if you’re *smiles an evil smile broadly* desperate. *chuckles softly* TTFN
Date: 12/10/08 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 4 – First US Concert
" I don’t care if the paper says fuck you, or is an advertisement for porn, it came from Tom Kaulitz"
lmao. I love your style xD
Author's Response: *grins* Well wouldn't you feel the same way? I mean if Tom or any member of Tokio Hotel handed you, HANDED YOU something, any thing? You'd love it just cause it came from them and they gave it TO YOU!
Date: 12/10/08 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 3 – Hollywood
=D hehe
I really like this story, and I'm excited to find a good het writer!! ^^
I love your writing style btw
Author's Response: Thank you! *bows* I really glad you like it! I just finished it today. Just posted the epilogue, I'm really proud to have finished it. If you like my style and my stories try my cousin miss r! We write a lot a like and she's better then I am!
Date: 12/10/08 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1 – Fuck you Tom!
iiiiiiiiinteresting =D
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you think the rest is as interesting as the first chapter. *grins*
Date: 12/08/08 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 18 – 6.11.08 the day I learned to breathe.
one word WOW!!
Author's Response: Really? *blushes* Well thank you! That's a very powerful word.
Date: 12/08/08 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 18 – 6.11.08 the day I learned to breathe.
Aaaaw, this was perfect! I'm sad, though, 'cause we're coming to an end. Thanx for everything!
Lots of loooove! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Rouge! Really thanks! the epilogue should be along shortly and then I'm on to another story. I have four floating around in my head right now. I just need to pick one and start writing! Half of them are slash and half are het, still not sure what I want to do next though. I know you will root for het though. lol But I'm rooting for one that I can't write until like Feb cause my co-writer has some life drama to deal with. So I have pick a diffrent one of the four to write. We'll see how it goes.
Date: 12/07/08 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 18 – 6.11.08 the day I learned to breathe.
ohwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's the cutest thing ever!!! please post the epilogue !!!! Love it!!
Author's Response: I just finished the draft for the epilogue but it should take my editor a day or so to respond cause I'm like 9 hours behind her. It's almost 12pm here and like 9pm there. So she'll likely get back to me tomorrow, both of our tomorrows *eye roll, grins* I'm not sure about it but it should tie things off and give you warm fuzzies. *crosses fingers*
Date: 12/06/08 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 18 – 6.11.08 the day I learned to breathe.
ooohhh i really liked this update! i'm sure whatever you decide to put in the next update will be fine.
Author's Response: Oh thank you! For both the words of kindness and the words of encouragement. I'll work it out. Hopfully within the next few days.
Date: 12/04/08 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Sooner then planned
this story is really good it kept me going on and on i give you props!!!
Author's Response: Thanks sugar plum that's super sweet of you...especially since I'm your first! review, that's so cool! Thanks I'll be done with it soon. The last chapter is written my beta's computer is on the fritz so? hopefully she'll get it done this weekend and then *groans* I still have to write the epilogue cause I'm still not sure what I need to cover in that? *sigh* I get it done! Then on to the next!