Date: 04/20/17 05:33 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Date: 04/05/11 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, really nice fic and the idea was awesome!!!
Thanks for sharing!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :D
Date: 03/06/11 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, that was awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 12/06/10 04:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful! ^^
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 11/07/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is great! I read the remix of this story and wanted to see what the original is like, too. You're a really good writer! I like especially the interview at the beginning and the dialogue.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/07/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed the twin dynamic in this. So often we see the twins on top of each other, in each other's space, but rarely do we see one of them feeling suffocated by it. And the scene with Tom curling up against Bill just tugged at my heart. You wrote this so well. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I struggled with this story so much during the challenge, so it really means a lot to get such a lovely comment. :)
Date: 11/19/08 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was wonderful. I loved it! Great job. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 11/19/08 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was wonderful. I loved it! Great job. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 11/19/08 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
wow.. talk about lucid dreaming... good thing Bill is such a clever little sneaky...
Author's Response: Heh. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: 11/18/08 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow that was powerfull but really good
Author's Response: Thank you. :)