Date: 12/08/08 05:24 pm Title: Invitation
oehhw I'm kind of sorry for Tomi.. I think he likes her alot... more please
Author's Response: Do my best :D Thanku for readin n reviewin xx
Date: 12/08/08 04:22 pm Title: Invitation
OOOOEEEE I can't wait for ze next one!
Author's Response: I hope It'll be worth the wait :)
Date: 12/08/08 04:14 pm Title: Fixation
"I'm tired Bill, what do you want?"
At that point I randomly broke out into, "I want YOU *DUN DUN DUN* I want you so baaaAAAAAAAd..." Yeah, my wierd mind tends to work like that. But anywho...
I'm really looking forward to more of this! And you just posted the 3rd chapter, so that all checks out. Just now that now you've got yourself a thorough reviewer!
Author's Response: Yaaay - I love readers that keeps coming back :D If your bored while waiting for the next chapter you can always read my other stuff :) I'll force myself to write later today just for you :D
Date: 12/08/08 04:13 pm Title: Invitation
Good character development for Tom. Nice details. I love this story, and it took way too long for an update.
Author's Response: Thanku for reading - I'll do my best to be quicker with the next chapter.. xx
Date: 12/08/08 04:06 pm Title: Audition
I smell a VAMPIRE FIC!!! WEEHEE!!!
Good job with the subtulty, I picked up on the things like Bill being hungry and "once a week". I was orginally thinking the girl was gonna catch Bill and Tom together "in the act" dun dun DUUUUUUUN.
And you're a really good smut writer (I saw some of your other stuff) so I'm looking forward for you to incorporate some of that into this!
Author's Response: uww, thanku. I'll see if I can get some random smut in there - don't worry :P
Date: 12/08/08 02:39 pm Title: Invitation
*grins* If I haven't told you I love this story. I love how you tell it, I love where it's going. I love the characters. And I can't wait for the next update. I hope it won't take as long as this one did. I go through withdrawl you know!! *pouts*
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so sorry about your addiction, but am glad you have it, lol :P Its taken so long because I've been travelling between Denmark and England these last few week. I like in London but my family lives in Denmark so I've been busy with work, school, boyfriend and travel.. I'll do my best to write as soon as possible :D
Date: 12/08/08 02:21 pm Title: Invitation
Poor Tom, getting that worked up about it.
Continue soon^^
Author's Response: I'll do my best to write the next part as soon as possible :) Thanku for readin and reviewing <3
Date: 12/04/08 01:03 pm Title: Fixation
Bill as a vampire is SOO sexy
I'm jealous of Jenna =)
This fanfic its great! More pleasee soon x333
Author's Response: Thanku loads :D
Date: 11/30/08 08:24 pm Title: Fixation
lovely Bill's a vampire and no one else is! giggle it's so great. She's the meal and that's the only reason why she's there. I can't wait to see what happens next and to see where this goes. I'm so intrigued!
Author's Response: Yup - you got it right on the spot :D I'll do my best to get some writing done as soon as possible.. xx
Date: 11/30/08 08:05 pm Title: Audition
I love it! The next chapter is up but that it, keep it up! It's great!!!!
Author's Response: Thanku so much for reading it so far - I'm trying to get time to write but am so busy atm. I should get some writing done soon though xx Keep checkin in <3
Date: 11/25/08 11:37 pm Title: Fixation
Pomme de sang translates into French as "apple of blood." It's just a term for humans that vampires keep around to feed off of. And I was wrong when I said it was an Anne Rice term, it's actually from a book series called the Anita Blake series.
Author's Response: Uw, very nice :P I should read those :P
Date: 11/21/08 08:51 am Title: Fixation
hmmm... Bill doesn't seem very human anymore, and I know that sounds like a completely obvious and dumb statement, but I meant personality wise -- he seems cold and harsh and a bit distant and generally inhuman...
I hope this isn't a 'Bill vs. Tom for the affections of the girl' fic, cause if you make this a threesome I will love you forever :D (although that's really hard to do, so I forgive you if you don't)
Author's Response: haha, I'll see what I can do for you even though it might not be directly in the fic but more like an additional story, if you would like that? But yeah - Bill does seem a bit cold in this, doesnt he.. Thanku for reading and reviewing :D xxx
Date: 11/20/08 11:02 pm Title: Fixation
HA! I KNEW THEY WERE VAMPIRES! XD Everyone's been talking about this book called Twilight (I'm not sure if it's famous in Europe but it's very well known here) and I've become really paranoid of vampires now. Great chapter, but update soooooooonn!
Author's Response: Oh yeah, Twilight is quite famous in London where I live too. I only read the books about a month ago though and first started writing this story about three months ago so Bill is not going to be the Cullen kind of vampire, but my own special kind, even though I will probably be a little inspired by the books :P Thankyou for reading :D <3
Date: 11/20/08 08:01 pm Title: Fixation
this is amazing so far
i'm really excited for more chapters
and to see how jenna reacts when she finds out
:)
Author's Response: Thankyou so much, I'll try to live up to the standard :) Thankyou for reading and reviewing :D
Date: 11/20/08 08:01 pm Title: Fixation
I wrote vampire story, but now I'm so jealous because yours is so much better! Waay better plot. Why can't they share Jenna?
Author's Response: Aw, thanku darling, I'd love to read yours too, is it in here? Well the reason they can't share Jenna is gonna be explained later in the story, so I don't want to give it away now. You'll have to stick around to find out :P Thankuu xx
Date: 11/20/08 07:44 pm Title: Audition
Woops! I just wrote that whole review before reading the last section of the chapter. Obviously the twins are vampires. I'm so mad I didn't think of this idea before you! Such a great story idea: audition to be Bill and Tom's personal pomme de sang (an Anne Rice term).
Author's Response: Aww no don't be mad, there are still about a billion unused fic ideas out there :P Thanku for likin the plot tho - I have to say that I am quite proud of it myself :D What exactly does pomme de sang mean? :P
Date: 11/20/08 07:39 pm Title: Audition
"Bill had to have her."-
Haha Bill is such a spoiled Diva. Gets whatever he wants.
Ok, so you obviously don't want people to figure out this is a vampire fic too fast. And you're doing a good job of it too! The story summary hints at a secret, but it just had me thinking that the OFC finds out about the twincest. I cought a whiff of 'vampire' at the beginning of this chapter when you wrote that Bill could hear Alyssa's heart beat. But I bet there are alot of other readers who are still completely clueless. You're being very subtle. Good Job.
Author's Response: Uw, thankyou very much :D I like to think that I do subtle very well, hehe.. Thankyou sooo much for the long review - gotta love it :D And you are right, I do like people to figure it out later on their own with all my little hints in stead of just writing "Bill is a vampire!" in the start of the story. This way (i think) you will be able to look back in the first chapter and suddenly find things that didn't make sense to you before.. Thats the way I like it :) Thankuuu xx
Date: 11/20/08 07:37 pm Title: Fixation
Tom’s head whipped round to face the smooth catlike figure standing up from the chair and walking slowly towards him.
So Bill is not a vampire? Catlike???
i really dunno what to think of it. Or i'm just misunderstanding what you wrote
^^
Anyway nice update.
Author's Response: Hehe, it's okay I'll try to explain. Bill is a vampire yes, but by catlike I simply ment that he moves with the majestity and elegance of a cat, all smooth and mysterious :) I hope you understand it - thanku for reading and reviewing :D
Date: 11/20/08 07:14 pm Title: Fixation
Oh my God...this story is BRILLIANt. =D I mean, I was very surprised learning that Bill has bitten Georg and Gustav too. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: There are gonna be pleanty more surprises so stick around :D Thankyou for the review :D
Date: 11/20/08 06:39 pm Title: Audition
dude.. i have no idea how she should react. i have MASSIVE writers block right now.... :p
but i am looking forward to reading the rest of thisssss
Author's Response: Thanku, I'll see if I can squeeze in a third chapter this weekend but if not it should be up sumtime next week :) xx