Date: 07/13/09 04:45 am Title: Illusion
good girl, you know how to please your readers. wonderfuly written, gives you the shivers! Please come up with the next sooner!
Author's Response: uuww, I'll do my best to please you more ;)
Date: 06/20/09 09:49 pm Title: Attraction
Gah! I love it! ^.^ This is my favorite fanfic right now
Author's Response: aawww thankuuuu :D
Date: 06/07/09 10:46 am Title: Attraction
“Go to your own room and find a coffin to sleep in!”
Man, that must have hurt sooooooooo badly!
Really feel sorry for him:(
And tears as red as blood*.* How do you explain that! good thing Bill's so tough!
Author's Response: Yeah, I kinda feel sorry for Bill too now :( Thankyou for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 06/07/09 09:21 am Title: Attraction
Definitely worth the wait! very tender moment between Jenna and Tom!
Author's Response: Thankyou :D
Date: 06/06/09 06:29 am Title: Attraction
Oh, Steena. Again: Great work! I truly love it! I'm out of words. Can't wait for more :*
- Sara
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/06/09 12:52 am Title: Attraction
And Tom was clearly avoiding me. I could understand why he'd be hating me so much though. After all I was disgusted in myself so why wouldn't everyone else be? – awh
"Um, the next interview starts in a few minutes. It's the Stern! and the woman who's interviewing you is also the album critic so David says to be on your best behaviour.." I was staring into my papers and trying not to notice how Tom obviously was having a hard time pretending to be interested in anything I had to say. He looked like he'd rather be anywhere else. – awh poor girl!
"Yes, she was more than eager." Bill leaned his head back against the cold wall with a satisfied smile and closed his eyes behind the dark sunglasses. "It didn't take much, she practically begged for it." – I love how cruel Bill is to Tom!
"I never meant for all of this." There was something different in Bill's voice, something that Tom hadn't heard for years, something vulnerable that made the tall, dark twin seem just a bit smaller. Tom slowly pulled his arm out of Bill's grip. – I think perhaps Tom just missed his opportunity to make a chink in his brother’s armor.
"Please let me in, I need to talk about all of this. You've all dumped me in the middle of this huge thing and yet no one wants to... to..." I felt my eyes start to water and my words disappear. It was all too much. – I want to hit her for crying!
"I think you might be the stupidest girl I've ever met..." – Fuck I know she is!
"He would be very mad."
"Don't think of him, this is bout you. Us." – -_- she is so stupid!!! Let’s piss off the vamp!
Oh my goodness the undressing scene is getting me all wound up and flushed!
“So. You like me, then?” I smiled and felt a little weird now. We’d just had sex and now I was asking him if he liked me? Never had I felt so stupid in my life. He didn’t make fun of me though, he just smiled and nodded. – OMG she’s sooooooooooo stupid!
“But... We‘ve always... You‘ve always said that we were one, that what we did was okay because it was us!” Within a split second Bill was standing pressed up against his brother with his arms around his neck but the shocked elder twin did his best to push the young vampire away.
“It was! When you were... normal... But it‘s weird now. You‘re all cold and hard and it‘s not the same. You‘re not the same.” Tom turned his back at Bill again.
“B-but... That‘s not true Tom, I‘m the same, I swear! If you just let me, I‘ll make it up to you.. I... I‘ll do that thing that you like, that thing with my tongue?” Bill again appeared right behind his twin and closed his arms around his shoulders. “I‘ll do anything! I‘ll even let you - ”
“- No! I don’t want to anymore. It‘s over.” – oh! *nods* yes I see!
“Now why do you think I don‘t want to be near you?” the oldest twin whispered out of breath and steadied himself against the end of the bed. “Go to your own room and find a coffin to sleep in!” – so Tom was scared he said something stupid and Bill’s basically thrown a temper tantrum ever sense nice!
VERY nice update!
Author's Response: Ah, I live for your reviews <3 Thankyouu :D
Date: 06/06/09 12:35 am Title: Attraction
EEEEEPPPP
this is SO awesome! I love this story XD I check back every day to see if you've updated lololol.
Keep writing when you can hun, the story is so interesting. Keeps me on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: Thanku for sticking out and thankyou for waiting :D <3
Date: 06/05/09 11:21 pm Title: Attraction
poor bill =[
Author's Response: It's funny how everyone started out hating him and now feels sorry for him ^^, Even me :P
Date: 06/05/09 10:49 pm Title: Contamination
so the others aren't vampires, only Bill? sorry, i didn't notice that.
Author's Response: Only Bill :)
Date: 06/05/09 10:22 pm Title: Fixation
I don't know if this means this story envolves twincest or not, oh well.
Tom likes her too, gasp!
Author's Response: Gasp xD
Date: 06/05/09 10:06 pm Title: Audition
I didn't know they were vampires till bill was sensing the blonde girl's nervousness, that gave me a little hint ;D
That was so unexpected, wuv this chapter
Author's Response: Thanku :D
Date: 06/05/09 05:01 pm Title: Attraction
Mein Gott. NEW CHAPTER!!!!!
Oh woah, Tom and Jenna - HOT. lol
Love it.
Itīs really sad that younger Tom acted like that. *sad*
And that ending- leaving red marks from blood red tears- OMFG. It was soooo sad. Iīm quite positive that Bill is acting like this because Tom pushed him away when he needed him the most. But still itīs one frigginī awesome story.
Thank you. :)
Author's Response: Thankyouu I'm glad you liked it :D
Date: 05/29/09 11:19 am Title: Decision
Omfg...
I thought that iīve commented that chapter but apparently not. So here it comes..... OMFG.
Bill is smexy. lol. I know heīs all bad and sucking her neck and all that but DAMN, that IS smexy.
Oh, and Tom. Poor guy. But revenge is sweet, iīm sure that Bill gets his share when he crosses Tomīs invisible line. lol. Donīt mind my last sentence. :D
Love it. Iīve read it like....five times at least. Seriously awesome ff.
Author's Response: Thank you sooo mucch <3
Date: 05/14/09 04:40 pm Title: Decision
O_O OMG I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I'll go insane >> dun stop!
Author's Response: Omg, I wouldn't want you to go insane, I'll do my best to post the new chapter as soon as possible :) x
Date: 04/30/09 02:43 pm Title: Decision
He didn’t want to have to sit here and listen to her annoying human trades such as breathing but he knew he had to be there when she woke up. There was no other option if he wanted her to stay. – is she really that special? Does he really have to have her permission?
This time though, Tom hadn’t shown. – Has Tom given up?
But Bill didn’t care, he was just fine being alone. So he kept telling himself. – hum?
"It-it's you," was all she said, in possibly the smallest, most frightened voice Bill had ever heard pass her lips. He'd really left an impression on the girl. Good. - *frowns* I still can’t wrap my brain around Bill’s motivation.
"Would you feel better if I turned the light on?" Bill assumed he might as well try to make her comfortable, if that was even possible. Humans liked light, it calmed them. – What is it that she has that no one else seems to have?
David had already told him that he needed to be attentive and seem likeable, even though the vampire found it hard. He wasn't a very likable person by nature, despite his predatorily charms. – the Bill part of him or the vampire part of him?
She shot him the most disgusted, doubtful look. "All evidence to the contrary, Bill," she said with clenched teeth and her hand on the bandage. – Oh thank god her brain is coming on line!!! I’ve been waiting for this for chapters and chapters!
Human opinions meant little to him. Except for one - Tom's - but even the importance of that one was fading. – He’s the one you care the most about but you continually hurt him?
"I want us to make a deal, Jenna." Bill's eyes cut straight into hers.
"A deal? What kind of... deal?" – yes what kind of deal?
They knew each other pretty well, especially after everything that had happened with Bill. Tom hadn't had anyone to turn to but his band mates and David and strangely enough it had all brought the band closer together. Except for Bill. – awh!
"And you know how much easier it's gonna get if it all works out with her. No more suspicious fans or rumours and no more of Bill's moods or hunger tantrums. It‘s gonna be like walking around with a Burgerking in your pocket!" - *snorts*
It was like that part of Tom that he’d always felt like he was missing whenever Bill and he were apart now had permanently disappeared even when he and Bill were together. – Bill as you know is gone. I’m not sure you get him back either?
“Oh shut up and go to sleep!”
“My pleasure. Are you gonna be perving at me from that chair all night?” – lol hot!
Right now it was all about getting it his way and for that to happen he needed her. It had to be her, it could be no other. Her scent, the taste of her, her freshness. Anyone else would be a step down now that he’d tasted her. – Then you’d better be fucking nice to her hadn’t you?!
“No, I don‘t mean like that. I couldn‘t care less about you getting coffee and all that. I want you to be at my personal disposal whenever I need you. Mine and only mine. With everything that that may include.” – what does that include Bill?
“Why would I make a deal with you? You‘ve hurt me! You could kill me!” – good thank you for thinking.
“Oh God, you really aren‘t as bright as you look. – no she isn’t that bright!!!!!
“And if I refuse?” Her eyes were less frightened and more spiteful. “If I leave anyway?” – oh good taunt the vampire. *shakes head*
“I‘d have to find myself another assistant.”
He knew he’d hit a nerve when her jaw dropped and she started shaking her head. “No, please no, you can‘t do this to people,” she begged, but he kept walking towards her. – OMG *frowns* she is sooooo stupid!
“Deal...” – she’s so stupid…where did she think his other meals came from!
Author's Response: Awwwwww <3 I love your reviews, they're amazing! They tell me exactly what I need to write about and what you guys think of it. I'll try to answer some of your questions in the next one, am glad you enjoy it :) xxx
Date: 04/29/09 02:12 am Title: Decision
I love your stories!!! I check every single day I can get on my computer to see if you have updated.
Author's Response: Aww, thankyou very much? :D
Date: 04/28/09 12:52 am Title: Decision
yay! youre back!! great chapter!
Author's Response: Thankyou!! :D
Date: 04/27/09 08:56 pm Title: Decision
i love this. i've checked almost every day for an update. this is pretty much the only fic i like to read. please continue updating . . it's just getting good! :) :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for still reading and checking in even though I'm taking long to update x
Date: 04/27/09 01:54 pm Title: Decision
Omg! Steena, that is something else I must say! It's cool that you've got Gackt in as Bills creator ^^ I love it!
And I love it even more because there's vampires involved! Oh God, It's good! Well, surprise, surprise, I love your story xD Like I love all the others you've written!
I'm sorry if my English sucks, but what the hell, I'm only a 15yearold Danish girl xD
But yearh, Love it! Can't wait for more ;)
- Your biggest fan, Sara
Author's Response: Aw, thx darlin :) x0x
Date: 04/26/09 08:35 pm Title: Decision
EVILLL,man he's soooooooooooooo BADD. I wish he could have some emotions left!
Author's Response: Thanx for rerading :D