Date: 06/01/14 12:16 am Title: Chappie 1
End note creepy AF lol
Author's Response: Woops :P
Date: 10/02/12 02:46 pm Title: Chappie 1
it was sweet :)
Author's Response: Aw thank you! :3
Date: 11/13/10 05:36 am Title: Chappie 1
*dosent wanna get raped* good story (: but why was he only scared of tom.?
Author's Response: Oh damn, I seem to forget my older stories alot... I blame it for my light alzheimer thingy :P Aw, thank you!^^ Well, Uhm... *thinks* Oh yeah I remember now! Cause the rapist looked like Tom! ^^ Thanks again! ^^
Date: 02/17/10 12:30 am Title: Chappie 1
awsomezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzahh
Author's Response: Thx ^_^
Date: 05/20/09 02:10 am Title: Chappie 1
Awwwww.... Tomi...
Author's Response: Yeah, awww Tomi! lol, thank you!
Date: 12/10/08 03:20 am Title: Chappie 1
0_0 i loved this story...but literally, i looked like my smiley there the whole time...this is a good thing tho
Author's Response: Lol, thanks I'm so glad that you liked it! Funny face;D Lol!
Date: 11/18/08 09:46 am Title: Chappie 1
ahaha!!! this feels incomplete... nothing much really happened... i still don't get it why bill didn't want tom to touch him unless what i had in my mind was right the moment i started reading this... can you have a sequel for this? i think it'll be cool to have one... hehe... thanks!! xoxox
Author's Response: Well, Bill's rapist looked like Tom, at least in my twisted mind. Maybe a sequel, maybe more chappies, don't know. rnrnNo, thank you for reviewing! xoxox
Date: 11/17/08 10:53 pm Title: Chappie 1
a little rushed. but i loved it :) nice story. it could have have many chapters.. you had many possibilities to develop each characters and situations. i wish you'd have put more into it. but don't get it the wrong way. it was still a good story that i love and enjoyed reading :)
Author's Response: Awww *cries* thank you<3 this is a one shot, but if you have any ideas for further chappies, please write me and maybe, just maybe, will i write some more chappies<3rnrnDon't worry, i don't get it wrong. Hey, i learn from my(is it wrong to say fans?) reviewers <3rnrnThank you sooo much for reviewing sweetie<3
Date: 11/17/08 05:00 pm Title: Chappie 1
-glares- I don't like people who rape Bill or Tom. but I like this story. ^-^.
Author's Response: Neither do I <3 But thank you sooo much<3 very nice <3 LOL
Date: 11/17/08 04:37 pm Title: Chappie 1
O.o.....woah....lethal, this story was just amazing...my heart broke for tomi, and i literally cried for billa....SIGH...why does the rape ones always suck me in? xD...i can't wait for the next chappie
Author's Response: Awww thank you soooo much<3 Don't worry, it makes me cry too<3 rnrnI'm sorry to tell you, that this is a one shot, but maybe if you mail me some ideas or something, i will write some more chappies, maybe? <3rnrnThank you soooo much for your super sweet review<3 *Blow kiss and dry tears away*
Date: 11/17/08 04:33 pm Title: Chappie 1
Interesting idea! Looking forward to reading the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you<3 rnI'm sorry but it's a one shot, maybe if you come up with ideas, you can mail me and maybe, just maybe, will i write some more chappies for this<3rnrnThank you for your sweet review<3
Date: 11/17/08 03:08 pm Title: Chappie 1
:(
Poor Bill! This is really well written, and I'm liking the story!
Update soon? :D
Author's Response: Awww thank you<3 rnI'm sorry but this is a one shot, but if you want you can maybe come with ideas and i could... maybe considerate it and write more chappies? Maybe<3 rnrnThank you for reviewing sweetie<2
Date: 11/17/08 02:25 pm Title: Chappie 1
I liked the story idea but the urgency was missing from the dialogue. I'm a little supprised. In my honest and mean opinion you can do better. I've read a lot of your stories and I know you're a good author. The idea's good and what the characters are feeling is there, just only on the surface. Bill was not bad. His fear and what not was good. Tom's anger though. I didn't get anything from him at all... Sorry, I'm mean but I know what you're capable of.
Author's Response: Awww, I don't really know what to say, but i wrote it really quickly and I'm tired as hell, but i think my other stories will be more like you say(Hope so...) rnrnDon't worry, it's what my lovely reviewers are writing, that I'm learning from<3 rnrnI've noticed that you reviewed for the most of my stories(If not all) And I appreciate that very much, thank you sooooooo much<3 And again, thank you for your review<3 rn
Date: 11/17/08 02:17 pm Title: Chappie 1
Hmm. I don't really get why Bill would be fine with with Georg touching him, but not Tom.
I guess that will be explained in further chapters
Author's Response: This is a one shot. But i tell you here. The rapist looked a lot like Tom, at least in my twinsted mind. But you're right, it is weird. Hope you get it<3
Date: 11/17/08 01:16 pm Title: Chappie 1
I almost "forgot" to review, I wanted that rapist to come to me so that I can kill him, but at the last second I realized that that's tom's task. Really, really cool here.
Author's Response: LOL! HAHA, well, it is Tom's job to take care of his baby brother, but thanks for reviewing though!rnrnThank you sooooooooooo much!
Date: 11/17/08 01:16 pm Title: Chappie 1
Aaaw ^_^
Author's Response: Lol ;D