Date: 10/19/13 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
W-wait what?! No! There must be more!
Date: 12/13/10 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
hey hun! it's been a while... are you planning on finishing this one? if not it's fine... i guess... but a heads up would be amazing. all im saying is: you leave it on a cliffie?!?!?! are you mad??? haha kidding... like i said, a heads up is nice.
anywho... how are you?
Date: 12/12/10 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hurry!!!! More, PLEASE!!!!!!
Date: 12/12/10 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hurry!!!! More, PLEASE!!!!!!
Date: 12/12/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the fact that you used, i think, lolz, Sherrilyn Kenyon's Dark-Hunter Series with Acheron. Nice choice. You did a really good job on this fan Fic so far, keep it up.
Date: 04/13/10 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
This is really good...I'm slowly starting to understand this Dark-Hunter universe...but anyways...love it!
Date: 03/13/10 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 9
yup... i liked it... but i wish you would have written more...:( so do me a HHHHHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEEE favor and update soon k?!^_^
Oh... and who are the Dream hunter and the Dark hunter that are talking to each other too much???? ... im confused.
Date: 03/13/10 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
yay!! they sorted it out!! XD. i hope you get better soon
Date: 03/13/10 11:56 am Title: Chapter 9
Ahh! I love Sherrilyn Kenyon. And Acheron is my fave! Looking forward to reading more of this!
Date: 03/09/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
Dammit, my original review was lost on my mum's bf's laptop, BUT I'M HERE TO REVIEW AGAIN DAMMIT.
anywayssssssss, technically i'm on hiatus, but this chapter/story deserves me taking my ass off of hiatus just for a little bit to review the hell out of this. LOL.
Okay, where to start....*rubs chin thoughtfully* I NEED MORE TOM/BILL! but what you gave us here was very very good, I enjoyed seeing Bill go back to Tom and not be able to kill him, cause you know, that's his boo LOL. But then, the fact that he shocked Acheron with that action was good and shows why Ash holds Bill in high esteem, cause it's so un-Dark-Hunter like, yanno?
And I'm frakking LOVING the characterizations of the cannon and non-cannon characters man. You're giving them all personalities of their own, so I never feel like anyone in this is flat or anything like this. *nodnod*
I want more dammit. xD
Author's Response: More Tom and Bill is coming right up. I don't like to put to much in a chapter at once, because I'm scared too much DH will overwhelm some readers. I'm glad you picked up on the characterization. I'm working my butt off making sure that I spend enough time on each character, especially important ones like Acheron. Next chapter will be up soon. ^.^
Date: 03/09/10 11:20 am Title: Chapter 8
So well written. This story and the characterisation are wonderful, I'm sorry I've started reading only now your stories, I believe you're a great writer.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm happy that you're enjoying the story. I try my best to give you insight into each one of the characters, cause they're all going to play an important part. But they're so many of them that it drives me crazy some times. X_X
Date: 08/08/09 12:21 am Title: Chapter 7
so, we ALREADY know that I beta'd this, but again, i have tot ell you that i absolutely LOVED THIS CHAPTER. We got to see some of Tom and Buffy/Angel in Spanish xD AND THEN Ash and Bill (which is SOOO sexy sometimes) oh and of course Simi! she's the fucking best with her shinies and BBQ sauce xD but ahhh for plot and him being targeted...maybe it's ebcause he has so many weird powers. HMM. dunno. maybe.
Author's Response: You're close....but yet so far away. Mwahahaha Don't worry. You'll find out soon.
Date: 07/21/09 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
shes watching Wow Wow Wuzzby...do not ask how i know.
Author's Response: ROTFL yeah, you guessed right. I have a nephew that LOVES that show and it was the first toddler/preschool cartoon to pop into my head.
Date: 07/21/09 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
...ugh, poor guys. All this shit happening now and misunderstandings galore! Hope they can really really really sit down and talk soon.
Author's Response: I might give them a break soon. The next chapter should be filler, humor, and slight conversation. I might lay off the action and bloodshed for a while. I forgot to ask how the fight scenes are coming along XD?
Date: 07/21/09 03:39 am Title: Chapter 6
is the cartoon Wow! Wow! Wubbzy!? xD I have a 1 year old nephew that lives for anything from Nick jr. xD and *nodnod* i LOVE where this is going hun.
Author's Response: YES! You are sooo right. My nephew is making 3 in a week and that's his favorite cartoon. XD Thanks so much. I'm glad that you like it. As you can see I absolutely love picking on Kyrian. Him, Zarek, and Ash are my favorite...and Nicki too. ^.^
Date: 07/21/09 12:19 am Title: Chapter 6
i hope tom's ok. o_o
plz update again soon ^_^
Author's Response: Tom will be fine ....no lasting damage. I'm glad that you liked it.
Date: 07/14/09 04:56 am Title: Chapter 5
*grins* i LOVED this chapter. *favorites this* I like how we're learning more about Tom and Bill, and yet we still get to see the past between Ash and Artemis (aka crazy xD)
Author's Response: Ah yes, Bitch-Heifer is most definitely crazy. We get to see more interactions with other characters, as well as how close Tom came to have bitten the dust.
Date: 07/14/09 04:38 am Title: Chapter 3
*grins* I've actually read the series! I bought the books for myself a while back and i was like OMG about seeing this. I was like "Dark Hunters?" OMG ASH! xD
but anyways, i do like where this so going, and i'm so totes reading the next chapter ^_^
oh, and not saying that you NEED help, but if you want help I'm willing to help you out, mostly because I am familiar with the books and the whole concept of Dark/Were Hunters and all of that mystical amazingness xD
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much. That will be really helpful. I'm glad you like the story. I KNEW there would be at least one person on here that read Sherillyn Kenyon ^-^.
Date: 06/18/09 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
that was so hot. Savitar was so smexy and cold. like a vampire crossed with Draco Malfoy. i swear if u don't write more i will go through my computer, find u and force u to type. *mob behind agrees.* ..... :D ja ne
Date: 06/18/09 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
(enter sexy man-beast) i like the way u think. although i am pissed right now since there is only one more chapter left for now. sigh. u've got me addicted. pout