Date: 02/27/11 07:57 pm Title: ORANGE: chapter 3 and end
Awwwww that was so darling! I suppose I forgive them. What a sweet sweet tale!
Date: 02/27/11 07:51 pm Title: ORANGE: chapter two
Oh man!!!! I would totally have smacked the both of them over the head for that prank.
And yet... *giggle*
Date: 02/27/11 07:41 pm Title: ORANGE 1
HAHAHHAAA!! How brilliant. Poor dear Mikayla, Bill is totally steamrolling her.
Tom was hilarious, by the bye. Pure icing.
Date: 12/27/09 10:08 am Title: ORANGE: chapter 3 and end
How. Insanely. ADORABLE.
I love your version of Bill! I have GOT to write a light hearted Bill, all mine are dark and sexy. But yours is so cuteeeee! I wanna squeal. Seriously, adorable.
I love how Miki just sucks all his joy. JOYSUCKER. PAH. But it made sense, so it was all cool. Tomi saves the day! *goes off to read Grey* Is it up yet? I'm going to check. It'd better be.
Author's Response: GAH!, m so happy you adore thsi bill, i do too, he's so.... so osm, lol, i really wicsh i could find more inspiration for thsi story, i have quite the plot planned, i just need places and incidents to carry them out, lol.
Date: 04/11/09 03:36 am Title: ORANGE: chapter 3 and end
Bill feels guilty for bring rich and famous?
Did he have a chance to have a baby, but not get it?
Did he do something horrid in his past?
Steal candy from a baby?
Shave a squirrel? Kick a puppy? Fart on his mom's lap?
I GOTTA KNOW! WHAT DID HE DO THAT MAKES HIM GO CRAZY WITH HELPING PEOPLE? GAH!
Seriously, though. I gotta know... Write Grey NAO!
Author's Response: lol! omg you crack me up all the time! its not soo....nice....not somethign he did though, but somethign gives him a good reason, though this song may give you a small hint....i don't wanna scare you away though....... :D
Date: 04/02/09 09:00 pm Title: ORANGE: chapter two
A crazy Tom is good too. Oh, to travel around with those two crazy boys... *sigh*
By the way, I would LOVE it if you would continue with this. Like, NAO!
Date: 04/02/09 08:52 pm Title: ORANGE 1
This is highly entertaining! I love a crazy Bill, he's the best next to a baby Bill! And you write both so well!
Date: 03/20/09 02:19 am Title: ORANGE: chapter two
Haha, how cute.
Um... maybe go to a shelter to feed homeless people? Only, I have a feeling that...well, he would start eating the food and then be like, "WHat? I'm on my lunch break!" ANd then Miki would sigh as he got kcked out. Or something.
Author's Response: aw, that'd be awesoem! thankyou for the idea
Date: 12/01/08 01:37 am Title: ORANGE 1
great, i like it XD i seem to suck at giving feedback so...that's all you'll get from me :P
Date: 11/18/08 12:09 am Title: ORANGE 1
no problem! update soon! it's really good and i can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: OOOH! danke zier! das ist so wanderba! thank you so much hun! i'm so glad you reviewed!! i hope to have the next one up soonish lol, i am working on three/four other fics at the same time so i'll do my best!.
Date: 11/16/08 08:58 pm Title: ORANGE 1
i just want to let you know that the chapter is repeated twice in here. you might want to fix that, or get a beta.
Author's Response: thank you for pointing it out! i don't know what happened, but its fixed now, thank you! XD