great story

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“I think we can all tell who he is gawking at,” the bass player teased. – cringes oi! Bill doesn’t need this and neither does Tom. They’ve just sort of patched things together.

Bill laughed a little embarrassed at the man’s shameless flirtation and flipped his hair in a very feminine way and could have smacked himself for it. “I’m Bill,” he said and tried to sound manly enough to compensate his earlier gesture. The clinking rattle from his jewellery ruined that the same second he shook the man’s hand. – It hilarious that Bill’s natural instincts make him feel girly.

“You rock my world, Bill. Want me to rock yours?” – I’m sorry your “lines” are too funny. I’m not sure if you mean them to be over the top or serious…but they end up being a bit on the ridiculous side. *grins* Not all of them just a few of them.

“So, we’re really over,” he said to himself. – awh! Poor Tomi, he still wants Bill…well he should have fucking said something!

Up in Alex’s hotel room, Bill looked around, feeling his heart racing. He couldn’t believe he had followed a stranger up to his room to sleep with him. – yeah neither can I!

“Nobody has ever turned me on like you do,” – I second that!

A voice in his head kept repeating that Tom didn’t love him back. He had just used Bill for sex and Bill had to look elsewhere if he wanted to be loved back. He knew this wasn’t love but it was a step in the right direction if he was ever to get over his brother. – Maybe?! But maybe Tom still loves you?!

it was getting through his head that they were actually doing this. – pretty but not so bright! Lol

“I can’t do this,” – Oh thank God!

I’m in love with someone else.” Bill looked sincerely sorry. “But he doesn’t want me so I thought I could try and forget him by being with you.” – oh well at least he’s honest.

“At least you’re honest, I give you that.” – lol that’s what I just said.

Deciding against going back out to the others, he went to his room. But after switching through the channels a dozen times, he turned the TV off. There was only one person he really needed to be with right then. Tom. – oh but because he went back to his room and killed time he’s been gone long enough to make tom think…*cringes*

Tom sat on the edge of the bed, leaning forward with his forearms resting on his knees, hands clasped, head hanging low. He looked completely devastated, his face pale, almost like he was feeling sick. – yeah see?! *cringes* oh my?!

“I’m sorry I wasn’t more open with my feelings. I should have told you, but I figured you already knew.” Tom’s lips continued down his cheek, closing in on his mouth. “When you ended it, I thought you didn’t love me back.” – awh!

“You didn’t seem to care at all when I did, though. You acted so indifferent,” Bill mumbled.
“Believe me, I was not indifferent,” Tom’s arms pulled him closer –Tom’s too good at hiding his feelings.

When they later made love, Tom made sure to tell and show his brother just how much he really loved him. - yeah!

Author's Response: So hmm. I'm not sure how to reply to this except that yes, some of Alex' lines were 'ridiculous' on purpose. Believe me, he's not the first musician to use those words.;)<3

woa... the fic is amazing >

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omg plz make an epilogue......i love this!!!!!!

Author's Response: What would an epilogue of this be about? More smut? ;) You get that in my next story too. *wink wink*

this is so good
its the best Ive read in a long time
thinak you

Author's Response: Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed it. <3

Aww.. It was flirting with corniness but it was really good! My heart was racing because I really thought Bill was going to do it with that guy just to regret it later and go back to Tomi. I liked the ending quite a bit and I'm gonna check out your stories for sure :)

Author's Response: Thank you. That makes me happy to hear. :)

Ah, thank you for this, girl! I thought for just a bit that Bill was actually gonna make it with that guy, and I was sitting here shaking my head "no!" lol I look forward to your new fic! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was a little worried at times too. Sometimes the characters just won't behave, but I'm glad Bill stayed true to Tom. So glad you liked the end. love

I'm so glad it ended well-I've really enjoyed this fic. You really managed to hold my interest through the whole thing and have hotness in every chapter. Nice! :D

Author's Response: Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. Sorry for the lack of smut in the last chapter but there's always the next story to remedy that. ;) love

AWWW! This was so cute, and no, I don't think the end was too corny

Author's Response: Thank you. That means a lot. <3

sweet! Lovely story!

Author's Response: Thank you! <3