Date: 12/26/08 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
“I remember you…,” he said, while he pulled on a pair of too large jeans, “…moaning out my name, while I made you come.” - *cringes* he says that like it’s a bad thing.
*sighs* and *shakes head* drinking never solved anything Tom…in fact it will make it worse!
“And I don’t know what’s worse; the fact that I made out with you…, or that I want to do it again?” - *giggles* and *grins* as the telly tubies say again, again!
“Will you stop with the drinking? – yes Tom will you? I agree with Bill here!
“Tell me what you want,” he said and started to unbuckle Bill’s belt. Bill stared into his eyes but remained silent. Tom zipped down his jeans and Bill still didn’t move. He reached down inside Bill’s pants and boxers and palmed the already hardened cock. “You want me to do this?”
Bill gasped but held his ground. His brother curled his fingers around Bill’s arousal and started to pump him steadily, holding his gaze the whole time. Bill was no longer able to keep his eyes open and he leaned slightly forward, resting his forehead against Tom’s shoulder.
Tom cupped his brother’s chin with his free hand and lifted his face up so he could press their lips together. Bill panted heavily into the kiss as his body shivered from the pleasure Tom’s hand was giving him.
“I want to see that face again,” Tom whispered. “The one you make when you come.”
- this entire section OMG *fans face* *pants a little* Yes I’m sure this time I’ve just come!
“It’s not okay that you let me do these things to you. It’s not okay that you want me to do these things.” – yeah Tom cause it’s all Bill’s fault for your feelings too?!
I think I’ve already read this? I can’t remember I’m not going to stop though.
Date: 12/26/08 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Then he briefly pulled down the neck and showed Tom the hickey without letting the other guys see it. Tom’s face turned red as he stared at Bill’s throat while his mind was working double. - *flutter claps* LMFAO
Hair straightener, Nice lie Billa!
The hand on top of Bill’s started to move slowly, stroking absently at the other hand.
“I’m pretty drunk tonight too,” Tom started, locking his eyes with Bill’s. “And I don’t remember much of that night, but I do remember the way it made me feel.” – are we sure it was a mistake?
again. A tongue slid cautiously past his teeth and played skillfully with his. As a low moan escaped the younger twin, Tom’s hand went up behind his neck, pressing him closer. Bill let all self control go and wrapped his slim arms around Tom’s neck, kissing him passionately - *guttural noise* that’s all I can do right now. Oh god, *looks down* I think I just came?! O.O
“I wanna make you come,” he said in a husky voice. – *fans face*
“I would gladly have helped,” Bill muttered to the empty room…- awh.
Date: 12/26/08 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bill always took care of his own needs. In his mind, there wasn’t much Tom already hadn’t done to him. There was nothing missing in his fantasies about his brother. - *grins* dirty dirty Bill
“Do I make you hard?” Tom asked bewildered. O.O oh my!
The next thing he knew was Tom’s lips hungrily kissing his. – oh god the kissing scene was so hot!!
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 12/20/08 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
So sweet and hot!!
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 12/20/08 07:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Just read it, and I must say, I really love it!
It's exciting all the way, there's always happning something, which I like xD
More? :D
Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it. More next Saturday. love
Date: 12/20/08 04:17 am Title: Chapter 6
YAAAAAAY! I love you!
You're amazing. :D
I sooo love this story, can't wait for more, so please please pleaaase update soon. ^^
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie for putting a smile on my face :) Next update is on Saturday as usual. <3
Date: 12/20/08 04:04 am Title: Chapter 6
Omg i'm so totally into this story. Please, don't keep me waiting to long. Maybe a tiny bit of romance could be added.
Author's Response: Thank you! I update once a week so there's no long wait. You may or may not get the romance you require, I'm not going to tell ;)
Date: 12/19/08 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
i really love this story,girl! i am always waiting for the updates!!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that. Thank you so much. <3
Date: 12/19/08 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aw I just caught up with this, sweet story. :) It takes me back to the days when I first joined the fandom and all the classic twincest stories were like this. Nowadays it's all AU.
Author's Response: Thank you! When I first started writing twincest, I said I would only do the one. Then I started with another one, and another one after that. Then I said I would never write an AU and now I'm working on four of them, so I'm not gonna say anything more. Writing twincest is just very addictive :)
Date: 12/19/08 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
Fucking hawt!!! *drool*
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 12/19/08 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
awww, Tom choose Bill over those skanks at the club!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, who wouldn't? ;)
Date: 12/19/08 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
~he nuzzled up next to Tom and fell asleep with his nose buried in the warmth of his brother’s neck.~
That was just the sweetest line ever !
It's like, when you write, you make the readers actually feel different things. And I'm not only talking about emotions here, I'm talking about sensations. It's like I could actually feel the warmth of Tom's neck as Bill nuzzled into him. I think it's amazing how you manage to do that by just using words.
And I loved the part where Bill wants to say 'I love you', but alters it after seeing Tom's eyes. It's like Tom is this lost little puppy and Bill just doesn't want to scare him away before Tom knows they belong together for real
And that Tom choose Bill in the club instead of the girl...I LOVE YOU !!! I just love how you try things out differently than what one normally reads. You write Bill as jealous, but not overly so, and you actually give him self-control! And you make them easy around each other so that Bill doesn't have to lie when Tom asks him if he's having fun, or bitch jealous about it ,) And again, Tom actually choosing Bill over girls...I loved that, and still you manage to keep it so casual, great work !
So yeah, I really, really like this fic and I hope you will post soon again ,)
love
Author's Response: Thank you so much, sweetie. You're the best, always making me happy with your reviews. I laughed to myself what you said about Bill having self-control. I realised it could have been a completely different story otherwise hehe. Only two more chapters to go. love
Date: 12/19/08 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really like how this story is coming along. The angst is there, but you never go overboard. Great update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Those words made me really happy. love
Date: 12/19/08 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
I like that Tom flirted, giving this a little angst, but that he didn't go too far with it and really hurt Bill.
And um...here's where I'd like to mention the rimming? Yeah, that was definitely nice.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, they had pretty much done everything else so I thought a little nice rimming was in place ;)Thank you for reading it. Just two more chapters to go ;)
Date: 12/19/08 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love this story. :) There's not nearly enough rimming on this site, so this was nice. I guess that makes me a perv. :P
Author's Response: haha, thank you. I guess we're both pervs ;)
Date: 12/19/08 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
WOOOOO!!!! and tomi wasn't drunk that morning.....d:)
Author's Response: Indeed he wasn't :)
Date: 12/19/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
:/ I don't know if I it is good thing that they have an agreement based on sex. :/ I have a feeling something bad is going to happen...
Author's Response: You may be right, we'll see ;)
Date: 12/19/08 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
naughty, naughty lol keep it comin!
Author's Response: Yes, it seems this story is all about sex...^^ But I promise it's not.
Date: 12/14/08 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
love it!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/14/08 01:45 am Title: Chapter 5
i kind of feel bad for bill, because he could only have tom when tom is drunk is lost his mind, instead of just loving bill out of his own consious mind. anyways, such a good story. good grammar and plot. luv it luv it luv itx99999
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you do. <3