Date: 12/27/08 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Featured :) You totally deserved it, honey. Can't say I was surprised. This story is awesome, I can't believe it's almost over. I feel so sorry for Bill, I hope Tom will come to his senses soon. Great chapter, can't wait for the next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It means a lot to me that you like it. <3
Date: 12/27/08 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
This story deserves to be featured :) It`s so sweet!
Poor Bill, it`s so heartbreaking to know that the only person you love just use you :(
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3
Date: 12/27/08 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
This chapter seemed like it shouldve been much longer with the way you said "a few days later" and crossed time in just a sentence. :/ It seemed really rushed.
Author's Response: I don't think I agree. It didn't seem rushed to me...
Date: 12/27/08 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aw *heartbreak*
I love this story ! It's all angst and sweetness (L)
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 12/27/08 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 7
Featured? Of course it would be! No question or surprise there. I’m most surprised that it hasn’t been featured before.
“Come over and sit on it,” Tom ordered him and Bill willingly discarded the towel and straddled Tom’s lap – mmmhhh
“No, I’m good,” Tom told his friend with a grin. “Just as long as I get sex on regular basis.”
Bill closed his eyes and tried to will his heart into stop beating so hard. He had suspected it all along, but Tom’s words still managed to rip his heart in two. He felt used and cheap, even though he knew that had never been Tom’s intention. His brother probably thought they were on the same page; an opportunity to have great sex whenever they felt like. – oh god! *moans* oh poor Bill
Bill wanted to punch his brother in his stomach for acting so indifferent to something that was so important to Bill. – he’s not indifferent he’s just not as sure as you. And if you act sure that you don’t want this then he’s going to be swayed by your words.
Normal? I don't think they know the meaning of normal anymore...or for that matter ever!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 12/27/08 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh.... i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 12/27/08 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww. It was such a sad chapter. I feel so sad about Bill... He really needs Tom... :(
But yeah.. Next Saturday the LAST chapter? Is it some misunderstanding or is this story really gonna be in the end?
Oh god! I can't survive it then! ;'(
I'm happy that it's featured anyway. :)
Author's Response: I'm happy about it too! One week will pass quickly enough though. Thank you so much for reading the story. love
Date: 12/27/08 11:54 am Title: Chapter 7
Nooo! You're killing me here! I'm really excited to see how this will end, but now I'm also kinda apprehensive....
Author's Response: Aah, but isn't it kind of nice not to know...love.
Date: 12/27/08 09:56 am Title: Chapter 6
very good , well done and ty
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Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 12/27/08 05:48 am Title: Chapter 6
After reading these chappies, I understand why you're featured! This is an incredibly hot and awesome story! 543895953/5!! (Worth more but then you would get a review with endless numbers LOL!)
Author's Response: You're just too sweet! Thank you very much. love
Date: 12/27/08 05:34 am Title: Chapter 5
You really outdo yourself, you know that? Just when I thought this couldn't get any better...IT DOES!!!
Date: 12/27/08 05:12 am Title: Chapter 4
I lost my breath reading the uber hot orgasmic scene! Just too hot for words!
Date: 12/27/08 05:00 am Title: Chapter 3
Hotness! You know how to make awesome, sexual scenes without even trying!
Author's Response: It's not so much about trying as being in the right mood ;) Glad you liked it. <3
Date: 12/27/08 04:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Tom has a huge dilemma! I'm sure he will remember this night LOL!
Date: 12/27/08 04:09 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so good! Can't help but feel bad for Bill, though...he luvs his brother so much.
Date: 12/27/08 02:30 am Title: Chapter 6
Please add another chapter.
Author's Response: I just did! <3
Date: 12/27/08 02:28 am Title: Chapter 6
Please add another chapter.
Date: 12/26/08 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
The Tom Bill knew rarely blushed, but then what had happened between them this morning was also something kind of life changing. Last night Tom had been drunk, but this morning he had been completely sober when his arm had snaked around his brother to stroke at his hard member, as he lay pressed against Bill’s back, breathing in his scent. Although Bill had been somewhat sore from the night before, he hadn’t been able to resist when Tom’s tentative fingers teased his entrance and they had ended up fucking each other all over again. This time in broad daylight, no alcohol whatsoever involved. – he he he
ha ha the groupie got screwed...over! LMFAO!!!
Tom’s eyes drifted down to Bill’s crotch and grinned. He took his other hand and placed it right on his own groin, rubbing it slowly. Apparently, Tom was already hard too and wanted Bill to know. - *grins*
He flicked his tongue out and slid it up and down over the entrance. Bill gasped and tossed his head back. This felt too good to be real. –Mmmhh so good
Tom shook his head and grinned. “I want to fuck you. That tight little hole of yours is driving me crazy. I can’t get enough of it.” - *guttural noise again*
Bill rolled to his side and watched Tom’s profile. His brother was lying on his back with eyes closed and Bill could tell that he was going to fall asleep in only seconds. The younger twin wouldn’t have minded a little cuddling, but was feeling quite drowsy himself so he nuzzled up next to Tom and fell asleep with his nose buried in the warmth of his brother’s neck. – awh!
Author's Response: Now you made me blush, did I wrote those dirty words? O_O
Date: 12/26/08 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
I’m sure I’ve read this and reviewed it!
“If you’re staying, then take off your clothes,” Bill ordered.
Tom sat up smiling. “My bossy little brother.” – so wrong, so so so wrong.
“Oh yes.” Bill panted and spread his legs so Tom could give him more of his finger.
Tom’s face turned determined and he took his finger out.
“Stand on all fours,” he said, moving off his brother and Bill obeyed without hesitation - *gasp, pants, fans face* OMG so hot. I’m such a broken record.
“Please …, just fuck me,” Bill panted – Yes I’ve just come again! *sighs*
That night Tom stayed in his brother’s arms for the rest of the night. - awh
Date: 12/26/08 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
“Aren’t you afraid she’s gonna catch gonorrhea too?” Bill asked Tom in a concerned tone. – Oh God Bill desperate much?
“At least I’m trying to end it. You’re just digging deeper into this mud hole.” – good line!
“No, I want to suck yours,” he said dryly, pleased with the shocked expression he got from his brother. - *pants* and *flutters* OMG HOT!!!
“Fuck, Bill,” Tom panted and looked down on Bill’s face where his come glimmered on Bill’s chin. “You actually did it. You sucked my dick.” – yes yes he did and it was soooooooo fucking hot! *guteral noise* oh god in heaven!
Tom smiled into the kiss as he felt Bill’s attempt to get himself off by grinding against his hip. He pushed Bill towards a low chest of drawers, where his brother leaned back, steadying himself with his palms at its sides. – no Tom it’s clear you aren’t interested in fucking Bill! No not at all!!!
Silence after that? *sigh* oh my!