Date: 06/02/09 11:51 am Title: Chapter One
Aaaaah. I love this. Please, continue. ;_; < + 3
Date: 04/01/09 08:26 am Title: Chapter Seven
I love this :) I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Date: 12/26/08 01:46 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I'm not one for Slash, but you write really well!
Date: 12/21/08 01:27 pm Title: Chapter Seven
god, I loved this so very much. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 12/21/08 12:26 pm Title: Chapter Seven
congratulations on the feature, you deserve it!
Date: 12/21/08 06:01 am Title: Chapter Seven
I love how innocent and adorable Tom is in this fic. XD
*Favorites.* :3
Date: 12/19/08 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Three
*grins*
yesss...
Date: 12/19/08 07:31 pm Title: Chapter Two
So Im definatly understanding my best friend`s agony with her boyfriend who`s doing the same thing.. lol!
Anyway, still SOOO good!!
And im so anxious to get some heavy aaaction!! Not to say that Im not enjoying the cat and mouse game they`re playing =P
Date: 12/19/08 07:09 pm Title: Chapter One
I`ve never really enjoyed torg before, but because this was featured, I thought I`d check it out..
Oh.. my glorious god.
This is SO good!!
I can`t wait til something actually happens =D
Date: 12/15/08 02:58 pm Title: Chapter Seven
"They'd only been gone three months and Georg thought it was a bit of an overreaction. After all, he called her once a week like she'd told him to."
lol! Oh Georg.
I agree that this is one of the best Torg fics out there. I love how you write Tom, and Geo of course. And Bill too. And Gustav.
Date: 12/15/08 07:00 am Title: Chapter Seven
I love this fic to death *_* It's the best torg on this site, hands-down.
Date: 12/15/08 06:35 am Title: Chapter Seven
Oh snap. So close. LOL. I was hoping for some steamy Torg sex. Hmm I suppose I shall have to wait for that. :P Great chappie. Looove this fic.
Date: 12/15/08 05:39 am Title: Chapter Seven
Your Tom so fits the image I have of the real Tom, it's creepy.
I may be alone here but in my eyes, Georg is the wierdest of them all in this story. His clumsy attempts to understand and reach Tom are pretty funny and I love to witness the progression of his feelings.
Date: 12/15/08 02:25 am Title: Chapter One
I love that this part is from Geo's POV. It lets us into his head for a bit and lets us know what he's thinking.
And, by the way, this part had me crying with laughter. Not only because it was a brilliant line, but because I wholeheartedly believe that this is true with Tom and Bill in real life. I'm sure poor Gustav and Georg call them freaks all the time. LOL
The line I adored was:
With a snort, Gustav said, “You're just now noticing this? The twins are the weirdest people I've ever met in my life. Maybe you were dazzled by Bill's weirdness and didn't notice that Tom isn't right in the head, either.”
Seriously. For the fucking win. :DDD
This story is love. Thank you for sharing it with us. I know Torg isn't a favorite pairing, and that there's some attempts at it that kind of suck if it's not done right. You're doing it right. Awesome job.
I'll review more on the other chapters later.
Date: 12/15/08 01:21 am Title: Chapter Seven
Bill, god Bill. I so wanted that goodbye smut to last longer.
Date: 12/15/08 01:05 am Title: Chapter Seven
*_*
Young love is so fucking embarrassing and dramatic and just so much of everything and you capture it so well. I'm going to stop saying the same things over and over again.
Date: 12/12/08 08:55 pm Title: Chapter Six
HUBBA HUBBA - I love this fic!!
Date: 12/12/08 04:37 pm Title: Chapter Six
This one got me all... whatever. Proud. Appreciative of this crazy fandom. Something.
Author's Response: That is a very obscure comment. I enjoyed it.
Date: 12/12/08 01:47 pm Title: Chapter Six
I love to see Tom opening up like this and becoming more accepting of his feelings and what they mean. You write him so hesitantly, so painfully, that it's glorious to see him bloom.