Date: 12/12/08 12:09 am Title: Chapter Five
God.. this is fucking painful to read! And I mean that in the best possible way. They way when you want to reach inside the story, grab the characters and shake them up! You are brilliant, that's all I'm saying! Torg is so difficult and sometimes I believe that it's only you and Little Muse that pull it off completely. I bow to thee!
Date: 12/10/08 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Five
*85 million bazillion thumbs up*
Date: 12/10/08 08:45 am Title: Chapter Five
Somehow I have missed out on this story, but i'm glad I've found it. It's great. One of the things I like in my fanfictio is a well-portraid Tom. He is the most intriquig member of the band for me, Everybody is distracted by Bill cause he is so shiny, whereas Tom is spouting nonsense all the time, so it's difficult to see what is behind the facade and not so difficult at the same time. Your Tom is everything I think about him. His phobias, his antisocial vibe, his introvertedness...He is a worthy object for dissecting and studying.
I don't mind that the first two chapters were a bit difficult to get into. I mean you don't have to serve everything on a golden platter, the reader should work for it a bit too. and there are still a lot of possible plot-lines that can be explored. I like your Bill, especially because you have managed to portray him with two or three broad strokes, and Gustav is adorably...well, Gustav the Super Nanny or smg.
Great job. i hope to see an update soon :)
Date: 12/10/08 04:03 am Title: Chapter Five
gold stars
Author's Response: So, for some reason I've never gone to your profile before. Having done that just now, I feel the need to inform you that you look like my ex-girlfriend's girlfriend.
Date: 12/10/08 03:23 am Title: Chapter Five
Dude, who doesn't want money and porn? Pssht, no one. Makes me wish I knew how the fuck to use photoshop.
These frequent updates are making me giddy. They just keep getting more adorable. I'm terrified of the impending angst.
Author's Response: If it makes you feel any better, sex occurs before angst occurs.
Date: 12/10/08 02:21 am Title: Chapter Five
Oh god, they are so awkward still, but you can just feel it solidifying, you know? Like Tom's starting to get a little bit of a handle on it and then it just flies out of his hands again. Absolutely wonderful, as always.
And what a mean place to leave off. *shakes fist*
Date: 12/10/08 02:15 am Title: Chapter Five
o.o
If I could make banners, I would TOTALLY offer to do so for porn. Alas, all I can offer is my pathetic review. You write the most endearing, cringeworthy, adorable Torg on the planet.
It's just... gah.
Young love indeed.
Author's Response: We've all been there.
Date: 12/08/08 06:26 am Title: Chapter Four
More more more more more, I'm dying here!!!!! O___o
Date: 12/08/08 01:06 am Title: Chapter Four
Gah. I love your Tom. I can't say it enough. They're such boys. In a fandom of girls making them girls, I can't express my gratitude enough.
Date: 12/08/08 12:29 am Title: Chapter Four
Great shtuff. :)
Date: 12/07/08 11:08 pm Title: Chapter Four
I can't believe we got another update so quickly! But I'm happy as hell about it. So good. I love this relationship. Thank you so much for this.
Date: 12/07/08 03:05 pm Title: Chapter Three
Awww, does that mean Georg's gonna pretend to lose the bet?
Gah. Genius. Especially the scene with the G's.
Date: 12/07/08 08:49 am Title: Chapter Three
I'm hooked! Young love is so akward, yet the best.
Date: 12/07/08 05:20 am Title: Chapter Three
I love this story so much. Well, it's Torg...love Torg. Inexperienced Torg. Gawd.
I feel like the dam broke and it was good. Thanks so much for this.
Date: 12/07/08 01:44 am Title: Chapter Three
This story is delicious, I can't put it any other way.
Date: 12/07/08 12:57 am Title: Chapter Three
DAAAAAYUUUUM. HAWT!!
Date: 12/07/08 12:15 am Title: Chapter Three
Wow.
You do the torg really well.
Date: 11/16/08 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Two
Yay, more Tom characterization. Poor Georg and his blue balls.
Also, did I not comment on the first chapter? I suck at life. I loved it too.
Date: 11/16/08 03:18 am Title: Chapter Two
So good. :) I just want to give them both a hug. I just want to tell Georg that he might want to remember that Tom is still just 13 and that he may not quite be up to speed with Georg at this point, LOL
This story is love. I love their budding relationship, as stilted as it is because of Tom's nervousness, and I wish for things to be okay for them. I really do.
Please write more.
Author's Response: I think you're the only person thinking about how old Tom is. I'm glad you like it.