Date: 12/11/08 01:44 pm Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
Omg you're from Norway? Ö
Wow, me too :D
That's so cool ^_^
Either way, I really liked this chapter, can't wait for the next update :D
Author's Response: lol, yes me iz from norway ,) thank you for this, hope you'll like what comes next !
Date: 12/11/08 01:17 pm Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
Oooohmygod! :D
I sooo love this story. ^^
Update soon, please, I really can't wait.
You're the best, I love you XD
*adds to favorites*
Author's Response: *hugs you till you squeak* honey, you just made me so amazingly happy, just so you know !!! thank you so, so, so much, means a lot to me <3
Date: 12/11/08 01:13 pm Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
Author's Response: lol, I think 'cute' is the word used most by my reviewers at the moment ,) that is so cute xD hihi, so happy you liked the morning scene, I think I wrote it cause that day I had a really hard time getting up oO and omi your mind works just like mine xD I was so thinking sirty when I wrote the 'you'll have to warm me up' line ,) I think we're the same when it comes to christmas joy as well...sparkling tinsel, some ginger bread cookies...I could very well be santa! awww, the line made you cry? that is so überly CUTE !!! I really didn't know that line would be so popular, but I think about four reviewers have mentioned it ,p and girl, don't worry about it, I'm a movie cryer, too, I went to see 'Brothers' with my little sister and her friend, you know, the one about the tigers...I cried SO bad, her friend was looking at me as if I was an alien xD what does Chompino mean by the way? because in my language it almost sounds like the word we use for mushroom. LOL, and you think chompino is easier to pronunce than chiara xD well, I guess for some people ,p okay, gonna go update now, love ya for this! very very much"
oh god i'm shocked. the good, doe eyed, oh-i-feel-like-melting kind of shock :D this story is like an atomic bomb for my brain cells, it makes me totally uncapable of writing anything smart - not that i do that often anyway but still xD i was chatting with my friends when all of a sudden i realised what day is today, i was like "holy shit!" and then i was running home without even a glance back to my friends...they must think i'm mental :P do i really need to tell you if i liked it? well just for the record, i loved it *o* "bill giggled. he knew that at that moment, tom was walking through town on his way to georg’s with the fuzzy, baby blue and very girly gloves of bill‘s" i would give up my make-up bag just to see tom wearing girly baby blue gloves xD "bill brought one long, pale leg up from the water and shaved it with languid movements" good god, i would give up aunt mary for this one - she's the one who bakes cookies on christmas eve, so that's quite a giveup xP "bill could relate. all he wanted for christmas was tom, no doubt about it" we're on the same line on this, bill xD awww the twins playing footsie under the table *giggles* i can't wait for bill to meet his real parents cus he is, isn't he? *puppy eyes* OMG! bill wearing only a pair of french knickers and rubbing on a polar bear fur... O.O seriously, are you trying to give me a heart attack? "tom drew a shuddering breath. “i’ll make you feel really good.”" oh shit yes! *starts a funny little dance* you know the last part was the hottest thing EVER, right? though i like that you're not rushing things between them, it makes the whole story much cuter to read :3
mmm lucy santa, huh? i'm sending you a letter this year, i promise to be good *doe eyes*
ohhh are you talking about 'two brothers' that movie about two twin tigers? it was sooo sad D°: no doubt you cried! anyway the saddest movie ever remains 'the notebook', that's a happiness killer really U.U
what does chompino mean? that's quite a long story... :D when i brought him he was utterly small and cute, the only thing he would do all day was eat, he was so goddamnit noisy i decided to call him chomp, which is an english verb they use on comics when someone's chewing noisily (at least on italian comics that is ;D) and since i live near ciampino airport in rome i thought to combine the two names together...chompino! so sorry, nothing to do with mushrooms xD
love you too, girl *huggles*
chiara
Author's Response: LOL well, your friends don't know what an amazingly dedicated girl you are, I love you for reading and reviewing this !!! and oh dear, seeing Tom in fuzzy baby blue gloves in reality, that would be the cutest! fotsieeeee, I had to make them do that...completely innocent fo course ,p still thinking about the whole parents thing, but I'm not sure yet. and yes, I am trying to give you a heart attack...well, no, not really, but I'm definitly trying to make you choke on the sexiness that is Bill in french knickers on a fake polar bear fur ,) and I am so, so, so happy you like the fact that I'm not rushing things, it'll move faster from now on, but I still want to keep that fluffy slowness to it all, you know? and the notebook...I cried my eyes out, that movie was amazingly sad and beautiful and just the prettiest thing I've ever seen (remember when Bill said Tom cried during that one...I actually didn't doubt that for a second) LOL okay, so translated Chompino means cookie eating airport, that is way too adorable xD thank you so, so much for this, hope you know how much it means to me !!! lots of love *hugs you hard*
Date: 12/11/08 12:17 pm Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
my nose.. it will bleed itself off my face if it wasn't for the hotness! *___*
And you're Norwegian? OH HAI!!!1 *waves the flag of Finland* lol. :] You seriously rule my internetz with this story while being awesome yourself. Much luw to yew~
Author's Response: awww, thank you so much for this !!! you rule mine by reviewing !!!
Date: 12/11/08 12:15 pm Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
...bill...in french knickers...YUMMY!! lol some nice mental images going on in my mind ;)
:D loved it, like always, and its getting a bit heavier XD WOO! lol.
Wonder whats gonna happen next? :)
Author's Response: lol, happy you like the mental images ,p you'll find out real soon I think, gonna post today ,) much love
Date: 12/11/08 12:15 pm Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew
OMG!!! It gets heavier and heavier...
AND I just can't wait!! Mein Gott!!!
Looking forward to the next updates!! Ahm loving this!!XD
Author's Response: thank you so much, really hope you'll like the next update ! gonna post soon
Date: 12/11/08 12:07 pm Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
LOVE IT
LOVE IT
LOVE IT
i want it much more heavier *evil grin*
Author's Response: hihi ,p thanksies, girl, I hope I won't dissapoint
Date: 12/11/08 11:52 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
Lucy, I don't think I've conveyed to you exactly how hard it was to beta this chapter. I don't know how many times I had to go back and re-read to make sure that everything was okay, because as soon as I would start reading again, especially then end, I would get caught up in it and forget what I was doing.
The last part of this chapter is SO fucking hot! You say I owe YOU panties?! LOL I think we're even, girl.
I want to say this, too, in public because I know I've told you in email. I see people talking about your great English. Now I know you, and I know you will pshaw over that one, but it's true. You have fantastic English, but even more impressive than that is how quickly you learn and how eager you are to learn. When I beta and tell you that some word or other isn't right or wouldn't be used that way, etc., I don't think that I've ever seen that error again or had to remind you.
You just continue to impress me again and again with your talent and it is an absolute privilege to be your beta and friend. Love you so.
Author's Response: makingmeblushand grumbles beingtoosweet huffs sodarnamazing humhumhum YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO BE THIS ÜBERLY GOOD TO ME !!! and yes, you are right, I am pshawing ,) But since we're doing the whole praise thing: I may be quick and eager to learn, but that is only because you bother to teach me. You've been helping me since the day we met and I think that if people were given the oportunity to see what impact you've made on my english they would be shocked. Your way of guiding me safely through the traps and teaching me how to use the language right has improved me so much and, girl, all honor to you. Thank you for your patience with me and thank you for caring enough to help me, you are the best friend anyone could ever have, and without a doubt the best beta I could have wished for ! Love you so much, darling, thank you <3
Date: 12/11/08 11:08 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
oh, so kawai:D and awesome..and of course hot! hehe..
btw, r u norwegian?! I didn't know norwegians could write so good in english! you rule! haha..('m norwegian too, but I suck at writing in englishXP)
Author's Response: thank you so much! and I have a beta darling, she makes my norweinglish readable ,p
Date: 12/11/08 09:49 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
Oh, no. No no no. You CAN'T finish a chapter this way! Now I'm going to cry, wah ;_;
I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more *fans self*
... I love this story so much, I want the next Thursday to be... now! xD
(L)
Author's Response: oh darling, I sorry ,p I promise to make up for it in the next chapter! well, next Thursday is tomorrow now, so hopefully you won't have to wait for long ,)
Date: 12/11/08 09:38 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
I sooo loved that! I haven't read something so perfect for a long time. It's really so-so beautiful! Thank you for it! x3
*Waiting for the next Thursday*
Author's Response: *hugs you really, really tight* thank you, this meant a lot to me!
Date: 12/11/08 09:31 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
Oh, my, Lucy, that was seriously one of the hottest scenes I have ever read, ever. I'm having trouble breathing, no kidding. *fans self* I was hoping Tom would give him the polar bear skin, and wow, the image of Bill squirming around on it in his French knickers was...orgasmic, lol! And then Tom touching him, whoa. I have to hug you for writing this!!! *runs to reread*
Author's Response: thank you, you know, for everything, For reviewing me and for simply being the awsomness that you are! lol, and I'm so glad you liked the polar bear skin scene, I was wondering what people would think of that ,p much love <3
Date: 12/11/08 08:59 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
You're Norwegian? That's cool, I've never talked to anyone from Norway before! The evening thing did kind of throw me off, but it wasn't a big deal at all, I just figured that they do Christmas different in Europe...
So I was pretty much drooling for Bill this chapter. Wow, he's hot. xD
I'm so glad that their parents know now. Are you going to have them meet in the story, because if you are, can't wait to see how that goes.
One more comment....zOMG Polar Bear Skin!!! I can just see Bill writhing in ecstasy on the fur and Tom's just sitting there, shifting uncomfortably and trying not to jump his brother...I'm glad that he didn't though. It just makes the anticipation for when they inevitably collide all the more sweet.
Once again, I'm going to be late for school because I was reading this instead of getting ready, but once again, I don't even mind. This chapter was so totally worth it and I'm sure the next one will be as well. :]]
Author's Response: lol, I began writing the evening thing and then halfway through I remembered they lived in england, but then it was too late because the scene had to be at night ,p I'm still thinking about introfucing the parents, I think it might be a nice detail, but I'm not sure yet. LOL oh yes, I'm pretty sure Tom was trying not to jump his brother xD and I'm glad you like that I'm holding them back, I just want to take my time. thank you so, so much for this, it really made me smile !
Date: 12/11/08 08:38 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
er du NORSK ?! du kødder ?!?!!
haha, I'm so shocked xD
how is that possible..? you're english is perfect ;o
anywaaaay xD lovely chapter!
loved the polar bear scene ^____^
and.. i'm still too shocked, so I just end the review :'')
(L)
Author's Response: lol, neida, jeg er norsk ,) and my english is not perfect, I just have a very good beta ,p thank you so much for this, girl <3
Date: 12/11/08 08:23 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
oooooooooh kinky
that kinda sums up the whole chappie doesn't it ^^
kink and fluff everyyyyyyyyyywhere *giggles*
and andreas' gift was like übercute and funny, well.. geo's was to! *grins* that's one pervy boy that one *winks* love him that way though
*le gasp* you're norwegian luce?!! that's so great!! i'm trying to learn norwegian now for my gf ^_^
and stop molesting the damn poor cookies!!! you cookiefiend! *grins* oh i know what could fit in your tummy what they don't have yet!!! *holds up a cookie in the shape of a polarbearskin* TADAM!!!!! ^_^
Author's Response: lol, yes it does: ooooooh kinky xD and yes darling kitty of mine, I am norwegian, which means you are a kattunge ! LOL and you tell me not to molest the poor cookies, but then you give me a cookie polar bear skin...you do realize what the cookies are doing, right? ,p *hugs you tight* Oh Ichi I've missed you !
Date: 12/11/08 07:41 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
Wow, my brain went into overload at the thought of Tom and Bill in their underwear on a polar bear rug in front of a fire. God I loved this chapter...
Author's Response: lol, well, I hope your brain is ready for a new chapter soon ,) thank you for this, your reviews are always so nice !!!
Date: 12/11/08 07:40 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
That was sooooo ADORABLE!!!!!!
I LOVE IT :)
Tom&Bill are just too CUTE!!!
Love ya!
Thank u and Bye Bye!
Author's Response: THANK YOU !!! I just love nice reviews !!!
Date: 12/11/08 07:37 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
Hey! Are you norwegian? That's freakin' cool! I'm swedish! Man, I would never have though you had anything but english as your mother tongue :) Anyways, this story is as lovely and heartwarming as always and just I definitly like thing getting a little heavier ;) Thank you! Eller, tusen hjärtlig menar jag hehe.
Author's Response: hey, we're neighbours then ,p oh believe me, before my fics go in for beta you can tell I'm norwegian ,) lol, very happy you like it getting heavier ,p tusen takk !!!
Date: 12/11/08 07:30 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
I had a dream that this was updated...hmmm....Quite odd. I love it! It's so...fluffy and awesome and it's just so good!
Author's Response: lol, you dreamt about it? that is so adorable xD thank you !
Date: 12/11/08 07:22 am Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
Polar bear skin! *_*
Oooh, naughty boys!
Love it!
Author's Response: lol, very naughty indeed ,p thanksies