Date: 12/18/08 04:12 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
hahaha good to hear about the polar bears :) that was really cute!(the polar bear thing) and the story was magnificent!!!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!! thankx sooo much!!!!
Author's Response: I'm happy you think the polar bear thing was cute ,) thank you so much for this, made me smile <3
Date: 12/18/08 04:06 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
now what on Earth happened August 7th??
but the rest.. yummy cuteness and Yummy hotness
Author's Response: who knows? xD and yes, I am going to torture you with that! thanksies <3
Date: 12/18/08 04:02 pm Title: Chapter five: of getting what you’ve been wishing for
way to cute, especially the gift exchange bits...
heh.. Go Tomi!
Author's Response: aww, thank you <3 so happy you liked it
Date: 12/18/08 03:52 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
omg no way i loved it absolutly loved it I cant wait for next thursday
Author's Response: thank you, hope you'll like what comes next, too
Date: 12/18/08 03:46 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
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Okay, gather your wits now and try to comment...
When Georg and Gustav interrupted in the beginning, I was so frustrated with them. I was like "What the hell, It'Christmas morning. Early Christmas morning. Get a fucking life, you losers."
But then LOL at the misteltoe kiss and them gawking at Bill's knickers ^^
The almost kiss... just... yeah.
But then you just about killed me with that fingering scene.
OMG, that's too good. Don't stop, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: LOL xD happy you managed to gather your wits and comment ,p hihi, happy you liked the Gs in this chapter, they annoyed the hell out of me too for bursting in like that xD thank you so much, I really hope you'll like the next chapet, too <3
Date: 12/18/08 03:46 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
I am naming you the queen of feelgood! I've had a really shitty day, like big time fucking horrible day and then I see a banner I've never seen before, check it out and it's Winter Kisses. From grumpy to smiling like a maniac in an instant. :P
I'm finding new stuff here and just discovered that you can read other peoples reviews. OK, so I'm kinda stupid for not noticing that earlier but still, it was so funny reading some of them. The long one from Ari...? what was her name just made me irritated, it's like people on youtube doing the whole "i hate this video, you suck". If you don't like it, stop watching or reading no-one is forcing you. Or wait, I don't know, maybe you're standing there with a gun to her head, then she has a right to complain, but then rather about the whole gun-pointing-thingy. Then I read a comment about the whole "switching from cute stuff to french knickers stuff in an moment" freakishly well done.
As always I'm just a pile of mushy limbs on the floor after reading. I blame you! I can sadly soo relate to the whole "this feels nice" leading to the "okey, let's just think about what we just did. What the hell did we just do?"
I still love the french knickers. I'm thinking about changing my wish list from just "bill and tom" to " tom" and "bill in french knickers", but that might be to hard for Santa. :P I can get the knickers myself and give them to him. :P
I love Tom bottom. It's a fun change to the normal Tomtop. :P It gets boring reading the same stuff over and over. Change is always good, or well, most times and this is definitely one of those times.
Sadly I have discovered a big flaw to the story. I have to wait for a new chapter. I want it now. >.< I'm becoming addicted!
To finish up. Great chapter. Love the knickers. Love the 7th of August 'cause now I have a fun Georg story to wait for. XD Love the fact that Bill and Tom are about to get it on. Hey that rhymes. "Bill and Tom, are about to get it on" I'll so not be able to get that out of my mind now. >.<
Now I'm just going to stop or I'll end up writing a novel. >.<
Love!
Author's Response: LOL the queen of feelgood? *blushes* that is so cute ,p I cannot begin to tell you how happy it makes me that the fic can make you smile, it's just the best feeling ever! "this feels nice" leading to the "okey, let's just think about what we just did. What the hell did we just do?" oh my God, that has to be the best phrace ever xD soooooo sweet ,p christmas is over, did you get what you wished for, even if it was a little hard? I LOVE Tom bottoming, too, he's just way too hot like that *drools* much much love to you darling, thank you so much for reviewing me, it means the world !!!rn
Date: 12/18/08 03:40 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
hahaha i knew there was going to be problems with the polar bear skin!
omg, i adore this story, everytime i tell myself okay that's it, this is my favourite story by firelucy, your next one blows my mind! i honestly cannot wait to see what you come up with next.
i'm really enjoying this story. thank you for your long & effort filled chaps.
Author's Response: but it is faaaaaaake *head desk* and it's fictional, so it actually does not exist, the polar bear it's coming from never existed. I could write that polar bear skins grow on trees and Tom picked one for Bill and it would be the same thing because it is fake xD but the cristmas tree wasn't fake, and only one person reacted to that ,p lol ,) *blushes* you're too good to me you know! and I'm glad you like the chapters long, I always found those the most satisfying ones ,) love
Date: 12/18/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
:P Poor polar bear still xP Fake polar bearws were harmed weren't they ;P I loved this chapter :D It's so...cute...fluffy...and...great :D I really hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: no, no fake, non existing, fictional polar bears were harmed xD the polar bear skin was made in a factory by some artificial substances, don't know what they use to make fake fur. thank you for this ,)
Date: 12/18/08 03:30 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
What the hell just happend?
No seriously, I so did not see that coming
Nice change of plot
or something
Anyway, it did made me smile
It's incedibly sweet
Keep it going (:
Author's Response: lol, it justed popped out there xD my fingers tend to go crazy sometimes ,) thank you so much <3
Date: 12/18/08 03:28 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
Yes! G/G kiss! I think I just about had a cow when they kissed. -Smiles happily.-
Really cute chapter, over all. I love their relationship and how neither of them think its really wrong but just natural. I think thats my favorite part.
Author's Response: you had a cow? lol xD and you have no idea how nice it is to hear that your favorite part is them thinking that their relationship is natural and not wrong, that's been my biggest doubt for the past weeks. much love
Date: 12/18/08 03:19 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
WHOA, I so did not expect that, but it didn't make it any less hot. ;) I've been developing a taste for Bottom!Tom lately, so that catered to my needs big time. I'm really glad you liked the graphic I made you. :)
Author's Response: Bottom!Tom rules my world at the moment, he's just so...*whimpers*. I LOVED the graphic, made me smile so much! Thank you for this, and for everything else!
Date: 12/18/08 03:13 pm Title: Chapter four: of tasting what you’ve always desired
d;) LOVE!!!!!!! sooo sooo sooo good!!!
Author's Response: hihi, thank you ,)
Date: 12/18/08 03:06 pm Title: Chapter three: of questioning what you’ve always been sure of
they sooooo love eachother more then they think they do....
Author's Response: oh yes, big time ,p
Date: 12/18/08 02:51 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
This might possibly be my favorite chapter yet. It's just so full of the awesome. :D
So my comments, from the top:
I can just imagine German being a big aphrodisiac for Bill. Like, Tom would speak some to him and he'd just melt and submit to Tom's every whim. :p But that was sweet where Bill said he could understand Tom's heart.
Georg & Gustav under the mistletoe...*sighs* I'm a complete sucker for the barest mentions of GG slash.
Are you going to reveal what exactly happened on August 7th? Because now I have to know, since you mentioned it. :p
So Tom wants to move in with Bill now. That does end up working out, right?? :]]...not to have you reveal any part of your story, but...
Okay, let me just say vanilla massage oil = ultra sexy time.xD I knew at the first mention of it that something good was going to happen. The whole massaging scene and the part after that had me giggling like a madwoman. :p I'm glad no one is home right now because they definitely would have wanted to know what I was laughing about.
I'm glad to see the next step in their relationship taking place. They're moving slowly but surely to higher and higher levels each chapter.
I can't wait to see that "what the hell just happened" talk though. Oughta be good. :]
PS: That banner is sooo cute!
Author's Response: I love that you work through the chaper in your review, helps me see how my writing is read and understood. oh God, now you have me going on Tom's deep voice dominating Bill gently in german and having him obey his every command willingly ^^ lol so you're a GonG fan, huh? I'm still thinking about revealing what happened on the 7th, maybe I will, maybe I won't, depends on if there comes a time in the fic where it just fits. yes, them moving in together does work out! cynical_terror did an amazing job with the banner and I couldn't agree more with you, it is absolutely adorable <3 thank you so much for this, and much much love
Date: 12/18/08 02:48 pm Title: Chapter two: of loving what you’ve always cared for
awwww!!!!! soooo cute!!!!
Author's Response: happy you like it
Date: 12/18/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
I love it so-so much!
Really so damn cute...
Mmm... Bill fingering Tom... *went horny*
XD I'm too perverted. :D
Anyway... Yeah. Love it so much! Just as I've loved it from the first chapter! :)
Author's Response: hihi, thank you so, so much, it makes me so über amazingly happy that you like this <3 much love
Date: 12/18/08 02:39 pm Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew
fluff.....O_O.....sounds good though!!!
Author's Response: LOL xD hope you'll find it good!
Date: 12/18/08 02:38 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
Um, ok I can't stop making this face. :O *drops dead* LOL.
Author's Response: thank you ,p *catches you*
Date: 12/18/08 02:37 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
Um, ok I can't stop making this face. :O *drops dead* LOL.
Author's Response: lol, thanksies ,p
Date: 12/18/08 02:34 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
oooo the G's kissed, hehehe lol made me smile, bless 'em.
O__o bill fingered tom...OMG *manic smile* hehehehe...can't wait to see how this affects their relationship, will it get wierd or will they take it in their stride. *strokes chin*
The chap was as amazing as ever ^_^, can't wait for the next one :D
Author's Response: happy you liked the G's kiss, just had to write that xD thank you so much for this, you're an amazing reviewer, you know that? much love