I quite like the monotone happiness of the story. It's a great getaway from all the angst. The only thing I would change is that it's just very difficult to believe in some things. Some of these events that haven't been addressed yet, like the kissing and the love bites, it just doesn't seem realistic that they wouldn't be talked about right away. They're twins, they should have an inkling of what each other is feeling and be comfortable expressing themselves to one another. I don't think in reality they would have waited until one of them fingers the other to address the situation.

Author's Response: And you're probably right, darling, in reality they would most likely never have gotten to the fingering before having to exuce themselves to the bathroom to throw up at the thought of being sexualy intimate with their own brother. But I'm happy that you like the monotone happiness of the story because if I was to wright this in any way close to reality, they would have probably never even kissed yet. I think (and don't take this the wrong way) that nexk chapter might dissapoint you furhter, but the chapter after that will hopefully make it up to you ,) Thank you for telling me this. Maybe I can write this more realistic, but still stear clear of most of the angst. Love

Heh... good chapter title :D Seems like Bill doesn't think he shouldn't. Can't wait for the after talk XD Wonder who will freak out first. I guess Tom even if at first it seemed like he would have cracked first and did something more serious than kisses to Bill. I kinda expected it. But like this is more realistic because Bill is more experienced. And is not the usual Tom knows all about the sex even the gay one XD

I must say that I really love the way you make Bill seam so adorable and small. I get the feeling that he is younger and smaller in stature too. Love it. And Tom is staying with Bill :D YAAY ^_______^ So cool. And the G's reaction to the knickers were the cutest. Could have been there a boner in the middle of everything from an unsuspected source? :P

Will patiently wait for next week? Will you post even if it's Xmas? A present for us maybe? Love u gurl.

Author's Response: aw, you liked the chapter title? it always makes me happy if people notice things like that ,p and I'm glad you liked the way Bill was more experienced in this, I sorta love him like that ,) there's something about a shy Tom and a Bill in control xD LOL I have no idea about the boner from an unsuspected source, but I guess that's the point of it being unsuspected, no? ,p and yes, positing even when it's christmas ,) much love, thank you for this <3

This chappie was incredibly SEXY!!!!!!!

I loved it!!! And I love the banner!!!!!!!

Great job :)

Thank u and Bye Bye!

Author's Response: hihi, happy you like it ,) and cynical_terror did an absolutely amazing job on the banner, you should have seen my smile when gave it to me <3

I love it! So no worries there - this is my current warm and fuzzy read, and I'm sure that even when you add the 'what the hell' angst talk (probably angst, right?) that it will still be wonderful. Keep going with it; I love the cherishment feeling of it all. Adore!

Author's Response: thank you! not much angst in the talk, but maybe some confusion and hesitation ,) so happy you like this !!!

This chapter reminded me why I squeal like a little girl everytime I find out you've updated...it was funny, cuddly, and sexy!
And I just wanted to add that this story makes me quite happy. Especially when Bill is wearing french knickers. That makes me really, REALLY happy...

Author's Response: lol, believe me, I squeal like a little girl when I read a review ,p hihi, and Bill in French knikcers makes me happy, too...and Tom.

love it, love it, love it!

Author's Response: happy, happy, happy!

wtf? they do know that wat they are doing is not equal to brotherly love rite? LOVE IT!!!!!! d:)d:)d:)d:)

Author's Response: ah, the beauty of naive fictional minds, denial xD thanksies

First of all I want to say this - don't listen to anyone who tries to tell you how to write this, or any other story! You are one of the very best authors on this site and you could never ever be boring. You're fics are amazing and I love you for writing them for us! They make me happy :)

I love that there isn't angst and tension in this. It's so beautiful and tender. In fact, I'm terrified for the whole 'what did we just do' talk! I can't bear the thought of them even slightly arguing, lol.

And yay - they did 'stuff', but lol, it still felt kinda brotherly. How is that possible? But it did!

Just dying for the next chapter!

XXX

Author's Response: I am so glad my stories make you happy, that is exactly what I wanted of this fic in particular. and you have no idea how good it feels to hear someone say they don't want the angst, it just gives me new hope for what I have planned for this fic in the future ,) really hope you'll like the next chapter. And girl, know that you are appreciated so, so much, you're such a lojal reviewer, thank you <3

O_O umm....wow!!!!! d:) LOVE IT!!!

Author's Response: that makes me smile ,)

I like your writing a lot. I liked some of your stories, like "A wolf's tail" very-very much. Hell, I even translated "Body language" to russian, which was srsly not a quick and easy thing to do. This story is nice and warm, but it's way too sugary for me, I mean, 6 chapters down and nothing non-fluff had happened, not one single argument, not one single psychological problem, not one conflict, everything is perfect, the cocoa, the knickers, the friends, the talk with the parents, the relationship... It's non-realistic and the plot is highly questionable due to complete lack of negative emotions and events. I understand that it was meant to be strict fluff, but the story's monotone happiness still seems like a problem to me, I wouldn't use the word 'boring', but 'way too sweet' is the correct way of putting it for me.

Now, once again, I love you as an author and I mean no harm. But your reaction to the critic confused me very much. Are you really expecting compliments only and react that aggressively on simple negative - maybe not extremely polite, but still constructive - observations? And bringing the amount of favorites here was actually weird, since it's not at all the point.

Author's Response: Darling, those replies were personal because of events outside this fic and they were highly unproffecional and immature from my side! I have never, and I need to stress this, never ever said that I didn't want negative reviews for any of my work! The matter between me and some of the girls that are criticising me is beyond this fic and has nothing to do with this at all. Here's the thing: if I do not like a fic, I will not bother with it because it is not my problem. If I like a fic, but feel it can be improved, I give friendly advice. The review you are talking about cirticised this fic, yes, and that I have no problems with. However, seeing as she does not like the fic in the first place and cannot find anything positive with it, I do not feel the need to take her opinion into consideration. I write these fics for me and for the people who like them , I will not change the way I write them because of people who generally dislikes them. See my point here? Now, you say you have a problem with the monotone happiness of this fic, that's fine by me. So I'm guessing what you want me to do is put in some conflicts and angst and make the fic more exiting, right? So, if I did this, it would make you like the fic. However, I quite like writing this fluffy, little thing and so however much I might respect you, I am not going to change my entire fic because of you. So know that I appreciate you (and all others for that matter) for reviewing and telling me what you thought, but I am not going to be able to meet your wishes with this, I am sorry. ~Luce