Date: 12/25/08 07:16 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
And what a merry Kaulitzmas it is! :) Luce, I love this chapter. And the talk didn't disappoint me in the least. You have stressed over and over that this is fluff, and besides, how could we know what would happen in a situation like this. I don't know about you, but I don't have a long lost twin (that I know of, at least), so I'm kinda out of the loop. Anyway, the line of angst... was it Gustav's smile disappearing or Tom being bothered by the moral rules that didn't allow him to show his love for his brother? This chapter was the perfect mix between that hot almost-smut you do so well, and the fluffiness that dominates this story and makes me grin like a sap. I love that, you know? Oh and, you should totally make lots of sequels called "Spring Kisses" and "Summer Kisses" and "Autumn Kisses". ;) Bottom line is, I love this chapter. And Lucy? A Merry Kaulitzmas to you too.
Author's Response: Becca *hugs you* Happy New Year, love! nope, I don't have a long lost twin eiher...and if I did, I'm not sure we'd end up in this situation anyway oO the line of 'angst' was Gustav seeing them on the dance floor, and there's more to come in the next chapter...not exactly angst, but still... LOL and I would love to make those sequels, I could make them sweet one shots that pick up on moments in their lives durning the different seasons, all fluffy as flowers of course! lots of love, Becca *keeps on hugging you and won't let you go*
Date: 12/25/08 06:46 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhh!! An update!!! *squeals in delight*
Another wonderful gift this Christmas.. Weeeeehhh!!XD This is just sooooooooo good!!!
Happy Christmas to you!!!XD *HUGGZZZ*
Author's Response: lol, happy you liked it...and got very exited xD *hugs you back* Happy New Year love
Date: 12/25/08 06:44 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
well, my pessimistic christmas thoughts just flew out the window and up Bill's ass, well if Tom's not in there yet.
this makes me melt into happy jolly goo, that's all I can say(:
Author's Response: LOL xD oh God, that made me laugh so bad ,p thank you darling <3
Date: 12/25/08 06:36 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
Honestly, I think this chapter is the best Christmas present I received, other than my dad coming home from overseas.
The story just keeps getting better and better. I love the twins' interaction, how they just become more and more intertwined with each other (in mind and, ahem, body.)
Speaking of body...hoo boy, that whole making out on the couch scene is staying with me for a while. Forget visions of sugarplums, I have visions of the Kaulitz Twins! xD
I think my favorite line of this chapter was this:
"The only thing Tom didn’t have was a girl, but in all truthfulness, for the first time in his life, that didn’t really bother him. He had Bill."
It struck me as really poignant, that Tom's so focused on Bill. (It also makes me kinda sad...lol...I wish someone was that focused on me! T_T Speaking of that, I'm so jealous of that New Year's kiss!)
I think I did catch the one line of angst, because when I read it, I seriously was all, "Hey, look, angst!" Lol...but I guess I have to wait and see where that goes.
Even though I don't wanna. :[ Haha....but seriously, awesome awesome chapter. :]
Author's Response: oh, I'm so happy for you, that your dad came home for christmas ^^ visions of the kaulitz twins are the best though, no doubt about it ,p I'm also jealous of the New Year's kiss, I wrote it and just though 'why doesn't something like that ever happen to me?' I'm really curious as to what you'll think about the next chapter because even though I wouldn't exactly call it angst, there's definitly some suspense there ,) thank you so, so much for this! much love and a Happy New Year <3
Date: 12/25/08 06:26 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
MERRY CHRISTMAS!! :D
helped make my day this did, it's 23.22 over here lol
oooo i can imagine the awkwardness nooow, O_O ACK!! will there be some more smexiness after the awkwardness??
Me hopes so ^_^
ahaha the return of the french knickers *drools* Loved it as always, can't wait for next thursday
Author's Response: lol, happy I got it out in time xD it's so odd with all the time zones ,p maybe smexiness, who knows ,) hihi, can't escape the french knickers, can we, love them too much ,p *hugs*
Date: 12/25/08 06:20 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
That was H-O-T. :)
I'm so excited to read the next chapter but I think I'll have to wait as I'm going to the movies! >.<
Happ Holidays!
Author's Response: lol, it'll be here waiting for you darling ,) thank you for this, and happy holidays to you, too <3
Date: 12/25/08 12:40 pm Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew
....damn, it's not innocent? Shit, someone forgot to send me that memo!
:-P
Do love you too, dear hear. Thank you so much for all the support I've gotten from you and for writing these amazing stories. It's stuff like this that I aspire to write. <3
Author's Response: *whimpers* girl, I am so, so, so sorry for never getting back to you, I will try today, promise! *hugs you tight* much love
Date: 12/24/08 04:44 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
Aw! This story is amazing!
I think i reviewed for the first chapter, but then i lost it in my favorites. Dx
But now i finally found it!
They're getting a bit too involved with each other. xD
Maybe that talk can help them work things out between them for the best. :]
Great Update!!
More soon?
Please!
Author's Response: I'm happy you found it again, darling, and thank you for reviewing this ! and you're right, maybe the talk will help them move forward. Hope you like the nexts chapter, too <3
Date: 12/24/08 11:22 am Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
My god...
Your story is really good!
I love the way you describe Bill en Tom, they are so sweet en adorable.
The English isn't that difficult, so I can understand everything ^^
Would love to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: oh, I am so, so, so happy that you like the way I describe the characters of the twins, that means a lot. and I'm happy the english is understandable xD thank you for this !!!
Date: 12/23/08 11:12 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
Debate? [scratches head] well anywho, I lobe his fic Lucy, you are a genius!
Author's Response: you don't wanna know, believe me ,p thank you so much, made me smile <3
Date: 12/23/08 02:15 pm Title: Chapter four: of tasting what you’ve always desired
For some reason, I think I skipped reading chapter 4, cause I started reading it and I was like, WFT, I don't remeber this. Whooops, lol. But that was such a cute way for them to kiss! And the snowball scene! ROTFL
Author's Response: lol, well, I'm happy you read it now and liked it ,) and I'm glad you liked the kiss, too <3 thank you
Date: 12/23/08 09:46 am Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
Yummy.
Loves it.
Wants update.
Still yummy.
Author's Response: hihi, thanksies ,) gonna update soon
Date: 12/21/08 06:21 pm Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew
mk well ive been checking out some of the reviews left for this since u mentioned how not to debate at the end of chap 6, and from wat ive read-which wasnt alot but enough-i was very xtremely surprised. im not going to try to rant about anything, but i truly and honestly want to tell u that me, and everyone else who reads im sure, is comeletely in love with ur story. i read it because not only is it written well, but it makes ME feel good. to some people the only point of writing is to get better and to get positive reactions, but the poeple who are great writers can inspire positive feelings in their readers. u chose to make this story filled with such happy and sweet moments and its working perfectly. this is UR story, and u choose wat to write. personaly, i dont think any of us have the write to tell u rude things like 'this is too fluffy. make it more real.' there are hundreds of other stories which are like that, and wat ur doing is different from wat they want. i love reading this story becuz everything is going so well. i feel happy for the twins as they discover their feelings for each other, and i noe this may sound cheesy but when i read i sorta live vicariously through the characters. theyr discovering themselves, which is something that i can relate to. i want to be smitten with fondness at how bill and tom interact with each other. i want to feel good when im done reading a chap-and ur story does this EVERY time. so in short-ur writing and this story is a strong, baeutiful creation and it has 100% support from me and others. this might be tiresome to head over and over, but dont listen to negative reviews. i really dont noe how to stress it w/o being a little overrated-and im already postive that u dont listen to them-but i just wanted to affirm the fact that u have alot of support and love from many people. so ya, thats it :) *snuggles*
Author's Response: I Love You
Date: 12/21/08 06:00 pm Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
XD YES! now the actions gets sexy-fied! i really cant tell u how much i LOVE this story. this story is just the sweetest thing without being too sweet. all the adorable moments, and sexual ones ;], are perfect in every way. this is really the best pick-me up story to read at the end of the day. im happy for u and ur story :D *hugs* its truly amazing
Author's Response: LOL xD sexy-fied action xD brilliant! what's a pick-me up story? *hugs you back* thank you so much for this, means a lot <3
Date: 12/21/08 05:47 am Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
Where to begin...
First: I grow more fond of this story for every chapter You write... I love it, it is as simple as that! I really can't wait for the next Thursday to arrive...
Second: Time is a commodity I do not have in abundance. So therefore will this review have to be short... I am currently trying to give You a review, write some e-mail, have a conversation via SMS and write christmas greetings, all at the same time.
How was it that Bill didn't realise he was showing his underwear, when he only moments earlier had mentioned said underwear to Tom?
Made for a funny conversation between the G:s though... :)
The twins tricking the G.s into kissing each other...YEAH!!!! Was that a hint of future action, maybe? HOT..
Let me say this: Thank The Goddess for auto spelling in Firefox!!!! I have no idé what I would have done without it, my spelling is all over the place... Not to mention my grammar...
The way the Twins are rationalising their behaviour towards each other is hilarious... can you spell DENIAL, any one???? I laughed my ass of, when Bill thought it was OK for him to show Tom the pleasures of bottoming, just because he is his twin... Not because he loves him and want to be with him... Yeah right...
However... That scene was VERY Hot! And a small taste of what's to come... (I hope...)(please)
No polar bears were harmed perhaps... But You cut down a fictional spruce tree for the twins to decorate in their living room... I have it from a VERY reliable source that that tree was aspiring to be the tallest and largest tree in the forest, a home for more than a million insects and spiders... Now who is going to take care of that fictional family of ants You just made homeless???
I'm sorry...
Some times my brain is nowhere in sight... Please excuse it... It and I are NOT related...
Sexuality... Hmmm! That is a debate for another place and time... But rest assured, I do not agree completely with You on that one... :) (here is me hoping You will except my challenge)
Tom moving in with Bill... Awww that is soo cute!!!! Bill not wanting to look at Tom and not being sure of himself when he was trying to offer Tom to move in... very adorable... And Tom not tormenting him about it... Sweet! They really DO love each other...
Some part of me, hopes You would speed things up a notch or two, and make them realise the true feelings they have for each other, and let them get it on... Hot steaming sex... YES!!!
But another part of me, and that part is winning, finds the slow moving tempo soothing! And in a world that moves faster and faster, it can be a real treat, to take it slow some times, not to rush things...
(I know, I am repeating my self here, but I think it is important to the story, that the twins take it slowly...)
Not much of a review of the story, but I managed to write a lot of words anyway... I do not seem to be able to stop myself... To hell with christmas preparations, talking to You is much more interesting...
In case You read this before Wednesday...
Merry Christmas!
In case You read it after...
I hope You had a very nice christmas and received a lot of presents!
In any case...
Thank You!
Love
Anders
Author's Response: oh God, I am so, so, so sorry for not answering this sooner! but I'm here now and I haven't told you how much I love you yet so: I LOVE YOU !!! you're the best, you know that, right? The underwear thing, I saw that too when I read through the chapter before posting, but it was too late to do something about it and I think it's possible to blame it on him being sleepy...and distracted by the fact that the Gs just kissed ,) hihi, happy you liked the ending scene here, I think that's the craziest thing they've done in this story so far xD oh dear, and all the homeless insects...I'll plant them another tree *goes into forest to plant tree* there, better ,p what was the thing about sexuality again? I can't believe I actually forget what I've written xD and yes, I am speeding things up from now on, there won't be any hot steaming sex yet, but maybe a little something more than what they have now ,) I'm keeping the speeding slow, if you get my go ,p I adore you to no end Anders, know that! Much Christmas Love <3 yours luce
Date: 12/21/08 04:49 am Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
*throws hands up in exasperation* Great, just greeeeat. Now you've not only got my Georg/Gustav mindset going, but you've got me just totally waiting for the twins to bang. XD I mean, jesus. This is the longest foreplay I've ever seen. hahaha.
Author's Response: lol, sorry bout the GonG xD and yeah, I never thought of it that way before, but I guess you could call it the longest foreplay ever ,p thanksies
Date: 12/21/08 03:35 am Title: Chapter two: of loving what you’ve always cared for
Um, noo I think the question is, dear one, are you trying to kill ME?!?!
LOL> Omg this story is tooo fucking cute for words, my mouth hurts from smiling and laughing so hard!!! AAAHHHCK!! It's on my favs now. I love it, its' amazing. I was having a horrible, horrible day and then I see this story and BAM, I'm all smiles and happiness. Thank you so much!! haha!
Author's Response: awww, you won't believe how amazingly good it makes me feel to know that I manage to make you happy with my fic. That is the best compliment I could have ever gotten, thank you so much !!! your review just made me smile so bad <3 much love
Date: 12/21/08 12:35 am Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
This story makes me happy.
My family decided to forgo christmas this year and i found myself longing for it and this totally filled the void.
i love your writing style and the innocence of bill &tom. it's love in its purest form. the fact that you conveyed that coupled with them at christmas.. i love it.
Author's Response: oh noes, no christmas? that sucks! I'm so glad this story makes you happy for a while then, that was all I ever wanted. Thank you so much for this. Much love <3
Date: 12/20/08 08:28 pm Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew
amazing
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 12/20/08 05:02 pm Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew
This is soo sweet, i love this story
Author's Response: aw, thanksies ,)