Date: 12/28/08 11:50 pm Title: Chapter three: of questioning what you’ve always been sure of
yay! sexual tension butterflys!
I love Georg and Gustav so much! They were both perfect, nice, funny, a litte akward, smart (sort of), just great!
And Bill and Tom sleeping in the same bed, and Tom checking Bill out, and everything!
Especially the ending and Tom saying he would kiss Bill anyway. It made me so happy!
Author's Response: hihi so happy you like the Gs in this, they're always fun to write ,) God, I've missed you so bad you know, all your freakish questions, theories about everything and anything ,) love you darling <3
Date: 12/28/08 11:35 pm Title: Chapter two: of loving what you’ve always cared for
Not talking romantic love my ass! Yeah right! Luce, just b/c you want them to be oblivious to thier emotions doesn't mean the rest of us are. I can't wait until the excitment of finding each other wears off and they realize they really are in love. That'll be the chapter. Actually, probably not b/c there'll be a denial period and and 'we can't do this' period and the usualla resistance before they realize it's totally futile and they'll have to give into their feelings eventually.
I love how we're learning more and more about their lives w/o being flat out told. It's nice.
Love this as usual.
Your Queen.
Author's Response: LOL xD yeah, yeah, you aren't oblivious, I know that, but I need to keep Bill and Tom in the dark a little longer ,) darling, those periods you're talking about, they always have angst in them, so no, not writing them ,p this is monotone happiness all the way! I'm glad you like the details that let you know more abou their lives, I'm always nervous if I make it work or not. LOVE <3 *hugs you*
Date: 12/28/08 10:56 pm Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew
HEY LUCE!!!!!!
Miss me? I've been SUPER busy and you're stories always take a lot of time b/c I have to write really long reviews telling you how amazing you are and all that. So, here I go...
Actually before I start, what's the likelyhood you'll see this one?
Ok, now here I go.
AMAZING! I loved how they just connected and everything fell into place. In most other stories it wouldn't have worked and I would have repremanded the author for it (I'm getting mean, old, and grumpy I know) but for you it was totally amazing and believable.
Their relationship was sooo NOT platonic though. Maybe a little but they are super attracted to each other, the sexual tension was there, they just didn't notice it in their excitment. I hope Tom moves in w/ Bill instead of going home!
Author's Response: Queen? is that really you? oh my God OO LOL xD I missed you !!! and the likelyhood I'll see this one is big darling ,) I've reviewed every review for this and I intend to keep on going ,p I know the scene where they met and just instantly connected was unrealistic as fuck ,p but that's the beauty of fanfiction, anything's possible! lol and already you are guessing what will happen...and getting it right xD he is moving in with him, yes ,) really hope you'll like the rest of the fic sweetie, even though it's fluffy as hell and not the least bit realistic ,)
Date: 12/28/08 08:29 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
this story is really good! I really like it. xD
except for my Dad downloaded some virus protection whatever thingy for my computer and it comes with this parental control blocker thingy or whatever and it's blocking chapter 6. ):
Author's Response: Thank you so much! if you want to read it, I could mail you chapter 6 ?
Date: 12/28/08 06:27 am Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew
This chapter was my favourite so far with all the hot kissing going on and the grinding...omg so hot! The boys are so kidding themselves. It's not normal to kiss your brother like that and the excuses they make for it make me laugh. They are so cute together. I think I will have to read it again now. It was so good. love
Author's Response: aw, it was your favorite? I'm glad, thank you! hihi, twins in denial babe, that's what they are ,) thank you so much for reviewing this, it means a lot to me ! much love <3
Date: 12/27/08 03:48 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
"Neither boy noticed the eyes of a certain blond watching them, the smile slowly disappearing from the boy’s face as his eyes widen in realization."
Nooooooo! No angst!
*pouts*
You can't ruin my lovely fluff fic with stuff like angst. It isn't allowed.
... Lol! *huggles you tightly*
It was amazing and I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I loves you bundles, Lucy!
Merry Kaulitzmas to you, too. *giggles*
Author's Response: awww, *pets you* sorry bout the line of angst...there will be more in the next chapter. Although I'm not gonna call it angst, because it really isn't, it's...suspense ,) and there will be fluff to make up for it! love you bundles, too! Happy New Year wifee <3 <3 <3
Date: 12/27/08 06:52 am Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
Slowly rising out of the christmas haze, I find You have posted another heart warming chapter of "Winter Kisses"! Well maybe not only _heart_ warming... Something else is getting warmer too...
Merry Kaulitzmas... Yeah, You too :)
One line of angst, and I'm on edge! But a good edge...
I was listening to some christmas songs, and when Tom led Bill away to give him the New Year kiss, ABBA's " Happy New Year" was on... It made the whole experience much better...
Back to the angst.... You Did promise a story without angst, but I think a story such as this one can't really survive without a _some_ angst... A happily resolved angst... Angst that doesn't involving You ripping my bleeding heart out and feeding it to the sharks...
But I hope Gustav will come to except Bill and Tom's relationship, and maybe corner the twins at some point in time and give them a lecture about the necessity of privacy and silence... Maybe... I'm just thinking out loud... And... I think you have made Georg already aware of the situation... Maybe You could have him talk some sense into
Gustav?
“And you’ve got Bill, right?” The brunette smirked. Tom had forgotten how well Georg knew him." Yeah... Georg knows...
“…That’s either a big insult to my kissing skills, or a very, very dirty train of thought.”
I don't understand why it would be a insult to his kissing skills? Of course I get the dirty thought though... ;) My mind can obviously only interpret sex...;)
I'm a male, I have no other explanation...
I was REALLY sure they would have sex this time... already past the line of sex, heavy kissing, sexy innuendoes, head over heel in love, more than little drunk, sexy underwear... But noooo, You staked me with that roastingspear of yours and slowly roasted me over a barbecue pit... You tease... ;)
Seriously... I love the way You are writing it!
As always... I find myself in a wonder... How is it possible to write a story about a pair of twins, who exist in real life, make them fall in love with each other, have lots and lots of hot steaming sex, and not make it seem wrong or perverted? A partial answer lies inside my own mind, and how I look at the world, but mostly it is the talent of your writing and your skill to make the story captivating and interesting, and for a few precious moments You make me forget the world and its troubles, trials and tribulations...
Who have more time during christmas?????? I don't!!!!
I found another thing I don't understand. Why wouldn't it be a shock to Tom that Bill watched Disney movies with only animals in them? Cats, maybe? No that doesn't add up...
The "talk"... Short and awkward but not disappointing!
Nothing You write have ever made me really disappointed...
Enough of my ramblings...
I'm of to read something old (new to me) by Beren...
If I don't talk to You before New years eve...
Happy New Year!
May it bring happiness and fortune to your life!
Thank You
Love
Anders
Author's Response: LOL xD my oh my, your mouth is getting dirtier by the chapter ,p And about the angst, I think you've got it the right way. I always planned on having some awkward and maybe even a little painful moments in this fic, but they're all so filled up with fluff all around them that it sort of works as a safety net, you know? it's angst wrapped in fluff, so maybe it won't be that bad ,) as for your thoughts on the Gs...we'll see, we'll see ,) “…That’s either a big insult to my kissing skills, or a very, very dirty train of thought.” it could be an insult to his kissing skills because Tom said he liked to kiss him 'because' they were brothers, and if Bill took that the wrong way it could have sounded like 'I like to kiss you only because I'm your brother, not because it feels good' but of course, that was not what Tom meant! lol, and yes, I may be somewhat of a tease ,p but I like it like that ^^ oh dear...you do realize you make me blush so much I could probably light up a whole town, right? and about the Disney movies thing, it wouldn't be a shock to Tom because of all the talks they've had about animals in the past, maybe that was a little unclear. Happy New Year to you, too, darling, love you so <3 and thank you for this, you know what it means to me! yours, luce
Date: 12/26/08 09:01 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
Wow.... O.O I really dont know what to say this was amazing... I cant wait for the next one too see what happens. >.<
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it! Really hope you'll like the next chapter, too <3
Date: 12/26/08 07:53 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
Merry Christmas! Thank you!
Author's Response: And a Happy New Year, darling <3 love
Date: 12/26/08 05:11 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
Lol, i was wondering when the cloud of lovely haze would crash around them. Sorry for the lack of reviews, i have been diligently reading though!
Also, I'm a little confused, I started reading this today, before work, but i had to finish later, after. I read this line
"... their lips stayed glued together, moving in a heated harmony that brought both teenagers to a state of heavenly bliss they had never before experienced with only one single kiss"
And i assumed they had grinded together until they came. Is my assumption wrong? Because Bill seemed more disturbed at the end when Tom actually did grind against him until he came. (Tom seems to be getting a lot more action than Bill is, lol)
So, I'm wondering how you are going to actually get them togehter, because you seemed to mention the whole "girl on his arm" thing a lot, when Tom was thinking it and then when Georg mentioned it aloud. It should bother Tom more, because he;s straight, and i wonder why it hasnt yet.
Well anyways, i still love this fic, but i did a little WHOOP of joy when you mentioned angst. ^^ Cant wait for the next chapter, ^^
Author's Response: not crashing, just becoming a little less foggy for a short amount of time. Yes, your assumption is wrong, they did not grind together, nore did they come in that scene. It was simply a kiss (as simple as it can get between brothers anyway). You say it should bother Tom because he's straight, but he has already confessed to being 'curious' about the same sex, hinting to being bisexual. And of course, Tom has yet to realize his feelings for Bill, so at the moment, Bill is not a threat to his sexuality. Thank you for reviewing, and I'm glad you asked about these things so they could be cleared out.
Date: 12/26/08 03:20 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
Lucy, you've done it again! You made me speechless again! This was so intense, so lovely, so... fuck... Oh my god Lucy, this was such a great chappie and a really great story! Keep moving on girl! (Yes, I did have e good birthday, indeed. Thanks for... asking? Lol) Love this
Author's Response: lol *blushes* that review made me very happy! thank you so much ,) hope you had a great christmas, Happy New Year <3
Date: 12/26/08 02:41 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
nice chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 12/26/08 01:58 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
Holy shit, I backed my page up before I remembered to review, lol. I'm like, in a daze because of this ending, lol.
Thanks for another chapter girl, love you much
Author's Response: *hugs you* aw, I'm happy you remembered to review! thank you for this <3
Date: 12/26/08 01:28 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
:3 Andreas was there wasn't he? That swarmy bastard!
Author's Response: Nope, he's in America. What other blond head do we know ,)
Date: 12/26/08 09:54 am Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
Daaayyum. That was HAWT!!
Author's Response: lol, thanks girl ,p
Date: 12/26/08 09:01 am Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
I just give you what you deserve, and I think you deserve every good thing people say about your stories :)
I also got the line of angst. I hope they won't give to must trouble for the twins.
Bill and Tom are so sweet together! And they are really getting hot and heavy with each other, oohh... I think my brain is not working bý the end of this fic because it's melting away!
Thanks, this fic makes me smile :)
xx
Author's Response: I am so, so happy that you like this fic. It means a lot to me and that you review is so sweet of you. I appreciate it so much! I hope you had a very nice Christmas and I wish you a Happy New Year !!! much, much LOVE
Date: 12/26/08 07:05 am Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
I do love your style a lot as there is always room in fandom for pure fluff and sweetness but it might be wise to be extra aware of maintaining them as boys when you write them. It's super easy being a girl to put a lot of the same characteristics and feelings and thoughts we ourselves would have but that's not the case for boys, even for really femmeboys.
Good chapter though, I really like the countdown and the new years kiss, so sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this. I haven't thought about this actually, but now that you mention it, I can see how it can become a problem! Wow, big eye opener here xD Especially with fluff I think it's easy to give guys female traits and I'll make an effort not to write them too girly from now on. Thank you again, this really helped me! Much love <3
Date: 12/26/08 06:46 am Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
a good chapter. Love it!
And merry Kaulitzmas to you too! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much, and a Happy New Year !
Date: 12/26/08 06:42 am Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not
You write so pro! You got this down to a science. Your fluff is not sickeningly sweet like some fics are. It's passionate and sexy! So who was that blonde kid that was staring at Bill and Tom? I bet he knows what's going on between the twins!
Author's Response: lol, passionate and sexy fluff ? xD The blonde kid has a hunch, yes ,) thank you for reviewing, it means a lot to me !!!
Date: 12/26/08 06:11 am Title: Chapter six: of doing things you maybe shouldn’t
This fic makes me happy, whether I want it to or not! It's just...cheerful! And the hot 'fingering' scene was just the sex! Best fic, hands down!
Author's Response: *blushes* do you have any idea how happy this made me? thank you SO much <3