Date: 01/09/09 10:30 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
This is absolutely amazing. It's honestly one of the best fics I've had the pleasure of reading in a long, long time. Amazing, just amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for telling me this, it means a lot to me! and it makes me so extreemly happy to hear that you like it!
Date: 01/09/09 05:12 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
i can't believe it. why isn't my last review with all the others? *head desk* stupid me, stupid laptop *head desk again and harder* i cannot remember a single thing i wrote in it... *thinks hard* wait, i do: bill's hair! holy crap, that's hawt *O* i swear, those paparazzi were really trying to make me drop dead or something! i mean, showing off bill's new hair for the first time WHILE he's wearing nothing but swimming trunks...?! - and anyway it's ok for tom to wear humongous swimsuits just like all the other clothing items he's got but why does bill have to wear them too? couldn't he go for like smaller and tighter fitting ones? *pouts*
i was checking if the ninth chapter was out when i i spotted the story note and my heart skipped a beat. i thought you wrote that cuz the story was finished! o.o' but now that i see 'completed: no' under the summary i'm cool - implied message: i don't want this to end...for now at least :P - (and anyway i bet the story note was there before and i didn't see it *slaps herself mentally*)
"everything was easy. and if easy meant having tom kiss him senseless up against the kitchen counter as he made them more cocoa, then bill loved easy" this line was...ngrrhm - translation not available. sorry, i can't find a word for it...something between hot and funny :P - because a) i liked the line itself b) i could very well picture tom ravaging bill's neck and face on the kitchen counter *gets stuck day-dreaming about it and starts drooling*
that was definitely the cutest, fluffiest, most amazing and, without a doubt, best 'talk' so far! "“i think i’m in love with you, bill trümper” “i think i’m in love with you, too, tom kaulitz” this made me go all 'awww' =3 "“so we’re not boyfriend and...boyfriend?” “i don’t think the definition is important. you’re my everything, tomi. i want to give you all of me and i don’t think any word can describe what we are to each other”" oh my, this was so sweet... *O* "“do you...want me want me?”" aw i loved bill here, he was so bashful it made me want to giggle and hug him like a cute kitten x3
thank you for making bill meet his natural mother. you know i wanted that from the very beginning and i really feel like thanking you for writing it *smiles an ear-to-ear smile* even if this is a very fluffy story and so many of the things that happen in here wouldn't exactly be like that irl, you wrote it so well, it felt real. "bill rested his head on tom’s shoulder and tom put an arm around him. he knew that bill was upset, and he knew that his twin was hiding it well enough for simone not to notice" this line made it perfect for me, there had to be a teeny tiny bit of angst. if i'll ever get to meet my natural mother, i think i would be just like that. well, maybe a little more upset but i think eventually i'd realize that there's no point in being disappointed or upset, cuz giving life is all about love, no matter what.
i loved when bill described tom undressing *perverted grin* and if the shower episode was 'totally unnecessary', then i love totally unnecessary *quotes bill* xD
about the eighth chapter, omg gustav! it was quite a shock for me cuz in the other fics he's always the one who understands and supports the twins while here he is the complete opposite! i gotta get used to that... oO
yesterday i was flipping trough my mother's cds and i found this frank sinatra cd, so i put it on the cd player and listened to it. there was this song 'strangers in the night' that reminded me so much of the first chapter, when bill and tom see each other for the very first time. that song is just as sweet and beautiful as this story is.
much love to you as always! *hugs you super tight*
chiara
Author's Response: LOL the hair is awsome xD and as for swim trunks ,p did you notice that Tom's looked awfully alot alike those Bill used last year? maybe he's getting in Bill's pants...in a less naughty way ,) I can just imagine Bill on the beach in REALLY short trunks, like, almost boy short -ish kind of things, showing off those long legs of his. But I guess he can't, Tom would be all over him ,p hihi, so happy you found so many lines you liked in this one, I really love you for telling me which ones you like you know! I think you're right about the biological mom thing. I think that since Simone regretted ever giving Bill away and that she really proved that she loved him and missed him, it was just right for him to let past be past. OMG OO I can't believe I've never heard that song before, just beautiful, and the lyrics fit SO well! I love Sinatra ^^ *hugs you back and won't let go* thank you airportmunching, much love <3
Date: 01/09/09 04:14 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
awwwww
Author's Response: hihi ^^
Date: 01/09/09 03:24 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
*fanning herself* ...steamy-hot!!! Thank you!
Author's Response: lol ,p thanks for reviewing
Date: 01/09/09 02:45 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
Oh My God...
This is hot, sexy, horny :D
I really loved this chapter ^^
First of all: Because Bill met his mom on a onexpected moment... I found it really cute how Tom supported his twin during the hours :) It was so f*cking sweet, really ^^
Second: I really loved the shower-scene! This is the chapter that showed us that the relationship is on the next level :)
You really suprised me and i liked it very much!
Love
Author's Response: aw, I'm glad you liked the moment where Bill met his mom and how Tom supported him silently, it just seems like such a Tom thing to do ,) lol, yes, next level indeed xD I am so happy you liked this chapter and I really hope you'll enjoy the next one, too! much love <3
Date: 01/09/09 12:04 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
*manic smile* mmm that was hot lol XD
Aww bless bill, meeting Simone for the first time. Loved the fluff as always and im glad that there was no awkardness between the twins :D
mmmm cant wait fot the next chapter, hoping for mor fluffy hawtness ^_^
Author's Response: hihi, glad you thought so ,) lol, I can't handle any more awkwardness between the twins xD really hope you'll like what comes next, thank you for always reviewing this <3
Date: 01/09/09 11:31 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
This story is amazing! *favourites*
Author's Response: aw, thank you <3
Date: 01/09/09 09:21 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
Loved the hot scene in the shower xP Oh, the rest too xD I loved it :D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: thank you so much, really happy you liked it! hope you'll like what comes next, too ,p
Date: 01/09/09 08:34 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
oh my goooood.
I liked it. I adored it. I loved it!
thank you so much. *_* so good
Author's Response: aw *hugs you* thank you, darling <3 means a lot
Date: 01/09/09 08:18 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
Please, keep the boring and unnecessary stuff up. I'm so totally in love with this story *_* That shower scene was hooooot
I'm happy the Gs didn't come and spoil their fun for once ^^
And Bill meeting his mother was really cute!
luuuuv it!
Author's Response: I will promise too keep writing the boring stuff ^^ ah, lol, couldn't have the Gs spoiling heir fun this time, I think those two boys are getting more death threats for coming between twincest as it is xD thank you for reviewing me, it means a lot !
Date: 01/09/09 08:07 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
It's one of the most beautiful stories, I've ever read. So fucking beautiful.
So... ugh... I'm waiting for more again. xD
Author's Response: *blushing* oh dear OO thank you! really hope you'll like what comes next
Date: 01/09/09 07:41 am Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew
The fluffy talk was the best. :) You just melted my panties girl, so I'm not sure my mind is coherent enough to form a review. Sorry. However, I can tell you that I love the way the twins interacted with Simone, though I was afraid she'd catch then kissing. I adore the shower scene, so hot because shower sex is always hot. ;) I don't ever want this fic to end... ever. I need the fluff!! XD I love it so much. :) Can't wait for next Thursday!!
Author's Response: aw, you liked the fluffy talk? hihi, that makes me smile, darling! and lol, I was sorta mean for putting in that kiss at a time when Simone could see, sorry ^^ thank you so much for this becca, you always make me smile you know! much love <3 luce
Date: 01/09/09 07:26 am Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew
Oh me god! Lucy? once again, you made me speechless with your fantastic and amazing story. This was soooooo sweet and almost had me in tears... So cute
Author's Response: *hugs you* thank you SO much !!! really, really glad you liked it <3
Date: 01/09/09 06:50 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
my god
holy mother of kaulitz
that was exactly what id been waiting for
all of it
the talk
the meeting with Simone
and the shower scene!
I love shower scenes ^^
that part about the chewing gum was so perfect and so lucy, you always do pay attention to the little details and thats one of the things that I really love about all you writings.
I want more
More sexual stuff ^^ and more G's stuff...I like how you portray them, and I wanna see what they'll make out of this.
I can see a lot of teasing on Georgs part :p
Author's Response: hihi, so I'm guessing the chapter didn't dissapoint then em xD so glad you liked it ! lol, the part was so 'lucy'? that's so cute ,p I have a feeling that next chapter won't dissapoint you either, if you still want those things ,) thank you so much em, love you <3
Date: 01/09/09 04:29 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
*ç*
As always, you rock!!! Go on!!!
Author's Response: aw, thank you ,) made me giggle
Date: 01/09/09 03:03 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
O.o
they almost had sex
if this was so hot then i can imagine how it'll be when they'll make love for the 1st time : mindblowing
*cough*
can't wait for the next Thursday
Author's Response: lol, no pressure or anything xD I hope I can get the first time right now ,p really hope you'll like next chapter! thank you for this
Date: 01/09/09 02:24 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh...
*faints*
I see fire... Everything's burning HOT HOT HOT!!! HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTT!!!XDXDXD
I love it!!!^^
Author's Response: LOL xD oh dear, do we need Gustav to come and play firefighter for us? ,p thanksies
Date: 01/09/09 02:05 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
U know how to make the hottest sexual scenes without them actually having sex! That steam from that shower is fogging up my computer LOL! And YAY for Bill meeting Simone!!
Author's Response: lol, thank you xD very happy you liked it! hihi, Bill meeting Simone was so nice to write ^^
Date: 01/09/09 12:58 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
aww update soon plz=]
Author's Response: will do ,)
Date: 01/08/09 11:36 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of
lol, if you could see my smile lucy, you would be so proud of yourself. It's like HUGE, promise.
Annnnnd, just wanted to say that my fav. part was the bubble gum exchange, I thought it added a little something extra, lol.
Author's Response: *hugs you really really REALLY tight* you have no idea how much it means to me that this make you smile! and lol at the bubble gum, very random moment xD