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Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 04:44 pm Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew

This is so fluffy and sweet it's almost disgustingly sweet. They clearly have the hots for each other already.

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel it's only almost disgustingly sweet ,) lol, and yes they do xD

Reviewer: Lahven Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 04:40 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

SNIF!! WHAT AM I GOING TO READ NOOOOW?!!?! BUUUH!!!

Author's Response: aw *hugs you* I'm absolutely sure you'll find something ,) go see my favorite authors, they'll give you a ride worth your money !!!

Reviewer: Ying Fa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 04:34 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

Lol, awesome ride, lucy. Loved it.

But the angry female in me still wants angst, so if you could fit that somewhere in one of the seasons, i would be so happy ._.

Author's Response: hihi, thank you ,) you want angst? xD no, I simply refuce ,p well, I don't refuce, we'll see how things turn out. mostly my fingers just work by themselves and let me read the story through when they're done.

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 04:32 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

totally didn't realize it had ended until I got to the words "The end" xDDD I LOVED IT. AND I MEAN LOVED IT. I want to have this fic's babies, that's how much I love it. lol. I think the way you wrote Bill und Tom falling for each other as such a pace where they couldn't stop it, and honestly didn't want to stop it was enthralling. I love this fic overall because that's how I think love really paces itself. You can't help who you love, it just happen, and when it hits you, you can choose to either accept it or run away from it. As for this chapter, the way that they made love, adoring every aprt of each other, giving themselves to each other wholeheartedly, was amazing to read. Like, it got to a point where my senses had been overpowered by the love that was all but tangible in the room. And Gustav's little revelation was good too, because it showed how much Bill was ready to defend his relationship with Tom WHILE trying to maintain his friendship with Gustav. I truly loved this story. It was an amazing journey and I'm glad that you wrote it ^_^ (ps. I can't wait for the oneshots lol)

Author's Response: *hugs you till you squeak* good goddess you just made me the happiest person alive! hm, as for having the fics babies...well, if you can find a way to actually do that, then I'm sure it would be more than willing to help ,p I really liked how you put what you thought of love "either choose to accept it or run away from it" I think that is so true! and so happy you liked their first time! and omg, you liked Gustav's revelation? you have no idea how happy that makes me !!! thank you so, so much for reviewing me and making me smile like this, girl, know that I appreciate it beyond words! much love

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 04:24 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

Oh god, Lucy, you killed me with this whole thing. I loved, loved, loved the amount of detail and tenderness and time you took with their first-time experience. I love Bill/Tom first-times in general, but this one was truly amazing and hot and perfect and everything it should be.

I wasn't sure how you'd end this fic, because it has been so wonderful all the way through, and endings are the hardest--both to live up to the quality of the fic as a whole and leave us all satisfied. This ending was amazing and satisfying and touching and sexy all rolled into one.

Thanks for doing it and I'm sure I'll be reading it over and over. (And I'm glad there will be sequels, yay!) *hugs* I loved it!

Author's Response: it feels so good to know that you liked this, that some people liked this...it's a story that's brought me pain and happiness and I don't know if I'm sad or happy to see it done ,) I am SO glad the sex scene worked out, I always find first times hard to write...they're so emotional. and the ending...it was the only one that sat right with me, I'm so happy it turned out good! *hugs you back* you always put a smile on my face, darling, thank you for being the awsomeness that you are !!!

Reviewer: Muse Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 04:21 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

Lucy, oh god... I'm crying. Fuck fuck fuck, this can't be the end. The logical part of me that is still functioning (the sex made for a spontaneous combustion) is saying that this is the perfect ending, and that I should be glad that you're even writing sequels at all, but the crying part of me wants to kick your ass for ending this spectactular fic while at the same time hug you to death for writing it. It made my winter, I swear. It's been one hell of a journey, I agree with you on that. Thank you so much for writing it, my dear girl. I love it as I've loved few things.

Now, onto the chapter.

This was me when I saw you updated, and me after reading the sex scene: jouwqrjjvwrlkjq9uf235o2iv9avnwkltjw. Perfect. Absolutely perfect. Stunning. Gustav's explanation made perfect sense, and I feel for him. Australia, though... for 3 years!!!

Oh and you have to write about Bill in Germany, I wanna read about him meeting Jörg and Gordon. That should be interesting.

And hey hey, we never found out about the 7th of August! XD

Anyway... I'm so sad it's over, but I know it couldn't have gone on forever. I eagerly await the sequels, while for now I have to settle with rereading this one and thanking you once again for writing it. (:

Author's Response: awww, you know how happy you make me? I am so amazingly glad that you liked this story and I am sad to have seen it end, too, but somehow it's also a relief. I always wanted the fic to make people smile, and you have always made me smile, and I am so grateful for that! hihi, SO glad you liked the sex scene, I was worried 'bout that (the whole polar bear issue) ,p ooooh, Bill in Germany, huh? well, I can do that ,) lol, and yes 7th of August will also be explained ,p you know I appreciate you so much, right? much, muc love <3 yours luce

Reviewer: Kariiin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 04:20 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

Uh... it's over...? *sob*
It was such a beautiful story... my fave... and now it's over. :(

But I loved it. Loved it so much. Thank you for it. And thank you more for million times.
It's a perfect story, and I'll love it forever. :)

Ugh.. And the last chapter, it was perfect as well. I loved the sex scene. And when they had that thing with Gusti... and the end... and... EVERYfuckingTHING!

I love you for writing it. So much. And one more time: Thank you!

Author's Response: *hugs you* I am so happy you liked this story so much, and it means so much to me that you reviewed to tell me !!! thank you so, so much for making m smile and thank you for reading this !!! much love <3

Reviewer: TomOlivia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 04:19 pm Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew

*happy tears*
So beautiful.. the ending... *sights*
well done..
The Queen of romance..

Author's Response: *wipes your tears away* thank you, darling, you made me smile !

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 04:17 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

awwww the end...
great story hun
u've done a wonderful job

Author's Response: thank you so much, so happy you liked it !

Reviewer: StrawberrySky Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 04:13 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!

*runs screaming around*

This fic can't be over. *cries* *tracks you down and kicks you*

I really (hounestly) adored this story. With your style of writing you just take the reader into the story and damn girl you suck me into it like a vacuumcleaner. I'm gonna miss this story and all it's fluffyness and I can't wait for the sequels to come.

XX

Author's Response: awww, I'm sorry *goes to hide* lol, I'm a vacumcleaner xD thank you so much for reviewing me, it made me smile so bad ,) love

Reviewer: Merenwen Telrunya Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 04:07 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

Oh so many thank yous for you for writing things as lovely as this is *_* Can't believe it's over and done now *tear*

I'll wait for the sequels and hope those will arrive soon and well. *hugs*

Author's Response: I am so happy you liked this ! it means a lot to me that you reviewed and I hope you will like the sequels to come as well ^^

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 05:52 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of

It was veeery nice! The word would be cute chapter, my reaction was AWW! They both want each other, love each other, want to be together, aaaah...!

And it was nice that Bill met his mother and that it went well.

And the end, oh yes ;)

xx

Author's Response: lol, I think aww is a very nice reaction ,p I'm so glad you liked this, you always make me smile so much! thank you for that! love, lucy

Reviewer: Mary-L Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 12:33 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of

first lime =D
I like this chapter, the meeting with the mother, the cuddles so sweeeet, the shower and the talk.
I look forward to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: LOL, I read 'first lime' and wondered if I'd written about fruit somewhere xD but yes, first time indeed ,p so happy you liked this, thank you for reviewing and telling me! much love

Reviewer: CandelightChaos Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 12:17 am Title: Chapter eight: of catching what you’ve been escaping

The fluff approach did just fine, I'm still left with with a warm squishy feeling of happy snuggles. (^_^) and I think he just got his hair braided, but dreadlocks would look just fine as well. Obviously, lol.

Author's Response: lol, 'warm squishy feeling of happy snuggles' that sounds like a pretty nice thing to be feeling xD yeah, it was figured out later that they were just braids, but I still like calling them dreadlocks, sounds much sexier ,)

Reviewer: jadedhavok Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 06:30 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of

My little Lucy... fer. :)

*panting* THE SMUT! THE SMUT! I demand moreeeeee. Fuck, you write so amazingly and DAMN! *wiping away drool*

*clears throat* Right, uh. :) I loved it. I loved it and I love you and, and and I'm REALLY sorry its taken me so long to review but I've been MIA and now I'm back and I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol xD Lucyfer ,p brilliant! I'm so glad you're back darling, I've missed you! and as for more smut...there might be some in the next chapter, but who knows, maybe I'll torture you further ,) love you, too, babe, hope things are going good now! *hugs* <3 <3 <3

Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 09:39 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of

but so cute.. poor boys almost getting caught by mom and Tomi getting teased about haing Bills gum..

Author's Response: hihi ,p thank you for reviewing me, and yes poor boys xD having to shower together, how sad ,)

Reviewer: IndigoKitti Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 05:50 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of

wow. I love this story. :D
Please more soon???

Author's Response: I'm so happy you do, thank you for this <3

Reviewer: anders1972 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 07:06 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of

Yes, You are the Devil Lucy... for letting us wait yet another chapter before our beloved twins get it on... ;)

Now this was a true "Winter Kisses" chapter with all the fluff and love and warmth we could possibly want :) YES!!!

I had a suspicion when the doorbell rang, that it wasn't any of the G:s or Andy, and I am proud to say my guess was right...
I am glad Bill liked his biological mother, and it is understandable that there has to be some resentment in him; His mother did give him away for adoption, after all... Questions about that is bound to come at some point (not necessarily in the story, though).

I am still waiting for Bill's adoptive parents to make an appearance! I hope they find Tom as likeable as Simone does Bill, although her feelings towards him is likely to be coloured by the fact that she is his biological mother though...

I have a request:
It would be nice if the last chapter had not only a sex scene of mind blowingly orgasmic proportions, but also a scene were everybody is gathered together and Simone get to meet Bill's adoptive parents...

I've said it before, and I will say it again; there is NOTHING that turns me on like Love! The "Talk" Bill and Tom had... Blew my socks off... And made my heart melt...
Talk about heart melting... “My boys, my precious boys.” Made me go Awww...

Now, about that totally unnecessary and boring scene at the end...
I absolutely did not need that mindblowingly Hot sex scene take my higher brain functions away, or to have my speech completely impaired, and my motor functions stalled!!!
Or wait... Yes I did!!! :)
You write sex scenes like Michelangelo painted pictures... Agonisingly accurate... Gulp...

The last paragraph of the chapter is perfect! Not only is it well balanced
and very nicely phrased, it conveys the love of the highest order the twins have for each other, and it makes my knees week just thinking about what kind of emotions they are going trough...
I love it when words flow effortless in a seamless stream, like water cascading down a waterfall, knitted together like wool in a blanket, united in their unison task of conveying emotions and meaning to the reader. It gives me great pleasure to read such things, and it always heightens the experience of the text! Especially since it is the last thing the reader take away from the chapter...
You have an excellent way of doing that, You know... :)
Thank You for that!

Don't fret about me not finding the last chapter fluffy, I wasn't prepared for anything not fluffy, so it caught me off guard, that's all...

And, bye the way, Bill watching is brother undress... That's another GULP, and GLXBLT moment... You may or may not have noticed that it is not the sex scene in it self, that makes me go GULP!
It is what precedes the actual sex scene, that, if accurately described, makes me all hot and bothered... Well, Sex does that too, but words of love and foreplay, more so...
The chewing gum changing mouths is one of those moments when I break out into sweats over the hotness I feel...
A really big GULP moment indeed!

The love and warmth and an over all feeling of comfort has returned to the story, so I am not complaining one bit!

A huge THANK YOU, for that lovely chapter! :)


Love and hugs
Anders

OT:
The dreads? Were they temporary ones?
And the counter now says 716 reviews... Depending on how many chapters You will write, the count will eventually reach 1000. Of that I am sure!!!

Author's Response: I'm Lucyfer ,p You're right about Bill probably needing to question his mother about some things, but I will not write them in this story, it will take time and eventually we know it'll be alright ,) I can tell you now, just because I don't wanna give any false hope, Bill's parents will not be included in this fic, but maybe if I write a sequel someday. Tom has spoken to them on the phone though, and they have made it clear that they like him very much ,) as long as he takes care of their little Bill ^^ I have written down your request, because it will be too hard to write into the last chapter, but I'm thinking about doing something like it for one of the sequels, I'll tell more about them in the end notes for next chapter. I'm really happy you're telling me what things you'd like to see in the story though, because it gives me fresh inspiration and that's so important to me! hm...*grumbles*...I'm blushing like hell now you know...all your fault xD LOVE you <3 LOL while explaining how words twine together ou do realize you were doing that exact thing, right? ,p so amazingly said! I think it's so funny because you always seem to like the details ,p the little things that I just write into a chapter without really paying it much mind, my fingers just write it because they feel like it basically. The dreads were actually baids and only temporary, but I like calling them dreads...sounds so nice to say "Tom tangled his hands in Bill's dreadlocks, swollen lips falling open as Bill sucked him down" I'm pretty sure the counter won't reach a 1000, but maybe 850 ^^ but it's not the amount of reviews that count though, it's what those reviews tell me, and this story has gotten a lot of helpful reviews, making me a better writer and the story a better fic ,) love you so, anders, hope you'll like the next chapter of this !!!

Reviewer: sarah_overtheair Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 03:17 am Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of

wow simone sure has god timing :) oh gustav, just accept it, and admit your undying love for georg. the ending was perfect. can't wait till what's coming next chapter. i have an idea...

Author's Response: lol xD she does, doesn't she ,p and gustav's undying love for georg ^^ so cute ,p hope you'll like what comes next, maybe your guess is right ,)

Reviewer: DURCHDENMONSUN Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/09 11:10 pm Title: Chapter nine: of acting out what you’ve only spoken of

LOVE.

Author's Response: ^^

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