Reviewer: Stardust27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 09:02 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

I'm gonna really miss this story Luce... But I know you'll bring us something new and amazing. Love you much xD

Author's Response: me, too ,) lol, I do hope you'll like what comes next. I'm posting Tokechester Hall on monday, maybe you'll like that one. thank you for being such a supportive and caring person, I really, really appreciate you for everything you've done for me! much love

Reviewer: Winry Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 08:31 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

Thank you for this lovely story. I'm kind of sad that I won't receive an email notice that it's been updated anymore, but I'm glad there are three more seasons to go!
This was sweet, cute, hot, fluffy and just incredibly good.

For the sequels; I'd love for them to make love properly (once Tom gains some stamina ^^) and for Tom to ask Bill how is it bottoming, and Bill showing him in avery practical way (yes, I love bottom!Tom and top!Bill)
I would also like to see how Bill's doing in Germany
But most of all, I want the story to stay in the same spirit. No drama, no cheating, no injuring, no death and so on and so forth...

Once again, congats for such a

Author's Response: it makes me so happy that you liked it, thanks for reviewing it! and I do hope you'll like the sequels as well ,) thank you for the requests, I am sure I can make them work with the sequles ^^ and yes, the story will aboslutely stay in the same fashion, there would be no point in writing a purely fluffy fic without it being purely fluffy ,) much love

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 08:04 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

Hey Luce, the ending was great and cute and fluffy and the smut was amazing and I'm happy you love this fic so much b/c writing wise I think it's one of your best works ever.

But (could you see this coming?)

I'm not in love w/ it. Obviously I'm not in a majority at all as evidence by your reviews but it felt like way too much fluff to me. Maybe that's what you were going for.

One thing my teachers always say in acting is 'raise the stakes' and I am of the opinion that the stakes weren't tht high here (though it's circomstancial b/c if this were a published play or something the stakes would be plenty high but here, on this site, twins in love is every story). I'm being mean, I'm sorry but I just wanted to tell you my thoughts.

I felt like story wise it's wasn't that original at all. You wrote it better than anyone else ever has but the story didn't blow me away.

On the other hand it's become very apparent to me that I prefer AU fics or ones with a little angst (though not too much). It was the angst that was missing. Everything here was rainbows and unicorns. The twins didn't have too much of a moral dilema, their friends ended up ok w/ it w/ only three confretations.

It was just...

Fluffy.

I'm sorry, I hate to do this to you b/c you're my friend and my favorite author ever but I just wanted to give you another perspective on your story and maybe something to think about for the sequels.

Hope you don't decide to hate me for this...

Your Queen *goes and hides*

Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive criticism, love. You’re right about me going for the fluff, that was the whole point of this! Writing pure fluff and hopefully making some people smile. You say there’s way too much fluff for you, and that’s cool, I’m glad we’re all different, the world would be such a boring place if we were all alike ^^ I get what you’re saying about raising the stakes and in most of my stories there is some sort of problem or dramatic event that the plot forms around, but the point of this story was for all to go well from the beginning to end. Lol, and you didn’t think it was original? All right. So here’s my dilemma now, this is good constructive criticism, but it only takes on one point: the story being too fluffy. Now, as the story was solely constructed to be fluffy…you get what I mean? If you write a story about carrots and someone says you shouldn’t write about carrots, what are you left with? What I mean is that if I take away the fluff from something that is only fluffy, I have nothing left. And if I add angst to a purely fluffy fic, of course it will for some people make the story better, but it will take away the whole point of the story being pure fluff. I don’t know, maybe I’m not making sense ,p but you know the ironic thing about this fic? I wanted to write fluff only so that I could write a story without becoming sad and as it turned out this story has made me sadder than any other fic I’ve ever written ,) Thank you for the criticism, darling, know that it’s appreciated! Much love

Reviewer: AdventPhantom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 07:54 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

I can truely say I was in luv with your story! Thanx from the bottom of my heart for writing it! You are the greatest!!!!

Author's Response: *hugs you really, really tight* that means a lot to me, darling, much love

Reviewer: bleedanarkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 07:40 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

hell, if Tom gave me a blowjob I'd cry too. xD

This was such a good story. I loved all the fluff. I honestly though I'd miss all the BIG drama, but no, this was just cute, sweet and perfect. Just the perfect thing to read everytime I'll feel sad because this puts a big smile on my face. Congrats, you made an awesome job. (:

Author's Response: lol, me, too xD I am so damn happy you loved the fluff, because that was the point of the story. I thought I'd miss writing drama, but...I needed a break for a while, you know? thank you so much for reviewing this, means a lot to me !!!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 07:34 pm Title: Chapter seven: of knowing what you’re doing, and of not

Hey baby! I know I kinda bailed on you for a while there again. I'm bad, I'm sorry *hangs head*

I was kinda waiting for you to finish it b/c I wanted to read it in one sitting w/o having to wait for a week and what not.

Passive agressive I know.

Anyway, I loved this chapter though honestly you've gone a bit fluff happy w/ this story on a whole but I can imagine it's loads of fun to write.

I'm gonna warn you now, I'm not going to review again until I get to the last chapter. I just want to read this story w/o interuption.

Am I being annoying? Sorry. I just am so sick of reviewing EVERY THING!!!

I might put a though or two at the bottom but not the usual long reviews that I like to give you.

Hope I'm forgiven,
Your Queen

Author's Response: Lol, absolutely forgiven my Queen (just look at how long it’s taking me to answer the reviews) and yeah, I am going fluffy and Happy with this fic because that was sort of the main point ,) I guess the fluff in the genres should be in capital letters ^^ much love

Reviewer: emraud Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 07:16 pm Title: Chapter one: of missing what you never knew

Aaaaaaaawww... I really love yur fic. Every moment's just... Waaaaaaahhhh... I love everything!!! Thank you for writing this fic!^^ Hope you make more great stories in the future and WOW us again!!^^ *kiss*

Author's Response: lol, every moment is wah? ,p that's so sweet of you! thank you so much for reviewing me, I do hope you'll like my future fics, too. Much love <3

Reviewer: DURCHDENMONSUN Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

I LOVE YOU.

Author's Response: *hugs* <3

Reviewer: Saol Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 06:16 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

Oh, I love it when Tom begges for kisses! It's almost always Bill in these stories. This was just... beautiful. Wonderfully sweet and sizzling hot. I don't know where you get it all from. Your fics rock my world. Now I'll just chew my nails off until the sequal to A wolf's tale is up ;)

Author's Response: Needy Tom is the best, makes him vulnerable ^^ thank you so much for this, your support really means a lot to me and you always manage to make me smile. Hope a Wolf’s ‘Tale’ didn’t disappoint ,) much love

Reviewer: tammerztehpwnz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 06:09 pm Title: Chapter ten: of believing everything good in this world

Oh, the end. :[ Now I have nothing to look forward to on Thursdays. That's okay though. I guess all good  absolutely wonderful things come to an end.

Okay, so I love the imagery in this chapter, especially at the beginning. I think you describe things really well, I always can see the scene perfectly in my mind.

And then- THE WILD MONKEY DANCE. haha xD. Or "dancing on a bed" I guess. Either way, the scene was perfect. I sort of had envisioned them having some kind of talk before or after, but then I realized: What was there to say that hadn't already been said? You made it really clear how much they loved each other, described perfectly the magnitude of affection between them, and how deep their relationship goes. So really, there was no need to say anything. And the scene was therefore perfect and demonstrated their love and the culmination of the lead-up to a long-awaited moment very well.

I loved when Tom said "Nothing's better than you and me" afterwards. It was extremely sweet and I think it characterizes their relationship in a few words, how the world narrows down to just them and nothing else can interfere.

The thing with Gustav was unexpected, at least for me. That was a neat situation, where Bill turned around on Gustav and said, "Because you loved me and thought we could never happen because we were more like brothers?" I think that's kind of ironic...but yeah. That was a good twist.

I don't think there could have been any better way to end this story than a scene with the polar bear skin. :D That was a big part of the story (at least I thought it was) and I thought it kind of brought things full-circle, from the first chapter when you said Bill loved polar bears, to the third chapter when Bill called Tom a polar bear, and then in chapter 5 when they had one of their first more serious "encounters", I guess, on the polar bear skin, and then to the end.

Those last lines of the story were some of the sweetest lines ever. I love love love love this story. It has made me really happen when I haven't been at the best time in my life. I am so thankful to you for having thought this up and written it. This goes in my top 5 favorite fics on this site, most definitely.

Let's see, what do I have left to say? Hmmm...I think a sequel for each remaining season is a great idea. I can't really think of anything you've really left out. I suppose you could maybe put something with Bill and Tom together with Bill's family, but for me it's not really necessary (although I mean it won't be bad if you do end up writing something about that.) My one little request is that we could see Tom and Bill go swimming in the summer, just because I think that would be really cute.  But, you know, do whatever you want. I'm sure it will be great with anything you choose to write.

And with that, I'm finally done with this review that I'm sure has you bored to tears. I think this is the longest review I've ever written. It's just that this phenomenal story has made me the happiest I've been in a while and...yeah.

It's been an awesome ride. :] ♥

(Oh, by the way, because you asked how to make those little black hearts, the keyboard shortcut on a standard keyboard with the number pad on the side is alt 3. If you have a laptop or something though, on this site, if you use the tinyMCE editor thing, you can go to the little button that looks like the Greek letter Omega and says "Insert custom character" when you hover over it with your mouse. When you click on it, a pop-up window comes up with lots of characters to choose from, and the heart is on the bottom row. Okay, bye for real now! ♥♥♥)

Author's Response: You’re right girl, all good things do come to and end, and I must say, however much I enjoyed writing this, I also feel slight relief that it’s over. It means so much to me that you feel you can see the things I describe, that made me smile! “demonstrated their love and the culmination of the lead-up to a long-awaited moment” wow, I don’t think anyone’s ever used that big words in a review to be before ^^ thanks! I’m REALLY glad you liked the thing with Gustav. I had it planned for a while and the line you quoted was one of the things that I really wanted to write, just to give more of an understanding to why Gustav ended up being sort of okay with them. And you liked the polar bear skin…you have no idea how happy that makes me! You have no idea how much it means to me that this story has made you happy, I think that’s the best thing anyone could have said to me! I will definitely write a scene with them swimming in the summer, that is such a sweet request ^^ lol and thank you for trying to help me with the hearts thing, although it didn’t really work, think it’s because I’m really, really, really bad at computer stuff, but I did manage to find it though, just couldn’t really make it appear on the site *pouts* but thanks anyway, it was sweet of you helping me! Gonna miss your reviews for this one, they always managed to make me smile ^^ hope you’ll come across some of my fics in the future that you’ll like, too. And know that I really appreciate you for this! Much, much love <3 luce (and just because I’ve read you bio and now feel obligated to point you in a direction that will make you like Bushido more (not that I like him all that much, but he’s a nice character to read from time to time) I’m gonna recommend ”When desire clouds your judgment” by sheerac50)