Date: 12/07/08 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 6.1
d:)LOVE!!!! i knew ren would like him!!!!
Author's Response: he will be more of a mother fiqure to her in later chapters.
Date: 12/07/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 6.1
I wondered why this was on recent's and there was no chapter! But here it is! xD
Awww! Its so cute! But what is his dad going to do/say? 0.o
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: it will be up soon like on monday
Date: 12/07/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 6.1
Aww I am glad this was updated ^^ you see, handling a reaction to mpreg is always hard but this was a good try for a beginner so compliments ;) also... as for suggestions, I think you should add some clothes shopping for Bill if he's showing much ;) and some affection between the two omg I so crave it! :D I suggest you inform yourself on the Net on preg people and their months, like what happens in each month and their visits, food things, so that you can make it as real as possible :)
hooray, post more soon! :D
Author's Response: i do in later chapters, and there will be lots of love beteewn tom and bill...i have been looking on the net ref. i'm trying really hard to get this right. thanks for helping me so much!
Date: 12/07/08 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 6.1
Did you add more to it, or did I comepletly skip over a part while I was betaing? *is confused*
Author's Response: yes. i had to re do the reaction of Bill of Tom cause it was too sugar sweet
Date: 12/07/08 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1
there's something wrong with the chapter D:
***next day***
Bill.
O______O
Author's Response: it should be fixed now
Date: 12/02/08 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 5.2
more?
Author's Response: Soon..Promise
Date: 12/02/08 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 5.2
:o YAY! Aww, I can't wait for their meeting, please post soon! :D
Author's Response: I'm waiting on my beta
Date: 12/02/08 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
:o omg, I hope Bill won't take it bad! You know, one thing I'd suggest: when you put them together, live the pregnancy slowly and put many details ;) we'd like to see something special. oh but I want them to meet!
Author's Response: i will try...thank you!
Date: 12/02/08 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
:o YAY! BILLPREG!! AMAZING!!! I SO hope this is going somewhere, anywhere to fluff and pottybellies :D
Author's Response: me too!
Date: 12/02/08 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
:o long! I liked it ^^ Tomi looks so sweet!
Author's Response: he is in this story but his mood will change though out
Date: 12/02/08 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww, Tomi's been sweet ^^ I can imagine the reason why he had to leave :(
Author's Response: he felt bad and about it but he had to...for his daughter
Date: 12/02/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww cute ^^
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 11/30/08 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 5.2
great plot update as soon as possible!!BITTE!
Author's Response: i will soon! thanks for reviewing
Date: 11/30/08 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww i love this story so much, your a great author=DDD
serenity seems really sweet and pretty, i bet bill'd love to have her as a daugther=DD
aaaaahhhhhhhh when is bill gonna tell tomi about THEIR baby??i wonder if bill is going to have twins??wouldn't that be awesome??lol
i like the fact that tom isn't much of a manwhore in this story, but maybe he was before becaming a parent.
anayway i hope you update this woderful story soon???love you=DD
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I base serenity off of my lil niece..bill going to tell him soon..tom was a manwhore in this story....I haven't thought about it yet..thanks again for your review!
Date: 11/30/08 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 5.2
*O* I wanna read the next chapter now!
Author's Response: I'm sorry..its not beta's yet..it will be up soon promise..pinky swear..lol
Date: 11/30/08 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 5.2
aawwwww i love it! update soon!
Author's Response: I plan to by next week!
Author's Response: I plan to by next week promise
Date: 11/30/08 11:51 am Title: Chapter 5.2
Oh God! Sorry i've been sooooooo fucking long to review... But this is making me cry! Please Let Bill and TOm find out that they love each other and raise their two childs together! Please! *cried for real!*
Author's Response: You know they will...and please don't cry...**hands tissue**
Date: 11/30/08 11:50 am Title: Chapter 5.2
YAY!!!!!! THEY MEET!!!!!!! wen will tom tell him about serenity? wen will bill tell him he is pregnant? CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Very soon x2...lol... next chapter will be up sometime this week if my beta finishes it in time..thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/30/08 11:27 am Title: Chapter 5.2
and i'm waiting for their meeting too
Author's Response: It coming soon promise! Thanks for reviewing
Date: 11/30/08 11:15 am Title: Chapter 5.2
Awwww...How cute...Send more I can't wait to see what happens...
Author's Response: More will be on it's way soon promise! Thanks!