Date: 12/30/08 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh Ren is so cute. I bet she doesnt even know what she is behind her daddy on. Oh thats is sooo cute. Good job. I am interested now. I want to find out why Toms wife or whatever left him. We know she cant look at the daughter but why. And whats going to happen with Bill and Tom. I have to keep reading. Good job.
Author's Response: thanks! more soon!
Date: 12/30/08 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
I swear I will sneak up on Lorraine and do something very creative to her if she takes Serenity away from Tom...really, I do...Fictional character or not, she's going downxD
Anyway:D, great chapter, great story and I really hope you'll update again soon!:D:D
Author's Response: Thank you! they will play a part in the story. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/30/08 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
OMFK... Kiro... and... and...Yu... and... and... CINEMA BIZARRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! You are now my freakin hero... lol I love CB!!! Strify's mine by the way. Anyway, I love how it's turning out... please continue.
Author's Response: Kiro/Yu are one of my favorite pairing! Thanks!
Date: 12/30/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
Lorraine's a bitch... I don't like her... lol... She better not get custody of freaking Ren or I'll throw a bitch fit. lol. Anyway, I love how it's coming along and please update soon.
Nanashi Nijino
Author's Response: i will soon! thanks!
Date: 12/30/08 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
:o wasn't expecting this mature act from Tom, most of all because I wished he'd wait for Bill XD But that maybe was the right choice. Grr, I can't wait for moreee :D
Author's Response: its going to get juicy after this...dont worry!
Date: 12/30/08 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
Oh my, hurry Billa! Tomi needs you! LOL... I'm soooo into the story... *.*
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/30/08 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
Poor Tom! Don't let her take Serenity away from him! Get home faster Bill!
*ok deep breaths*
Author's Response: O.ornrni will...tryrnrnthanks for reviewing
Date: 12/30/08 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
woahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...psycho bitch lorraine....i still hate her xDD AND i absolutely LOVE the fact that you brought in Kiro and Yu. AND AND AND...Heidi and Seal...they are soooo cute xDD and yea..i can't wait for the second part ^_^
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 12/30/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
Oh my fucking santa! This was.. Oh god, I'm tearing up now! I'm so revieled and sad and happy all at once. My feelings are mixed, but my heart loves this story! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: tonight part 3 will be posted. thanks again for reviewing!
Date: 12/30/08 11:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Thank you
Author's Response: your more than welcomed! Thanks for reviewing all!
Date: 12/30/08 11:24 am Title: Chapter 10
That was sad, I feel bad for Tom. Bill needs to come back from Paris and fix everything. I kinda understand Lorraine, afterall she still is Ren's mum, but she still can't take her away. It would be too cruel...
But anyways, more please! ^^
Author's Response: things will work out
Date: 12/30/08 11:17 am Title: Chapter 10
so sssaaaadddd... poor Tomi! x3 (Lawyer Saki xDDD that's a good one!)
Author's Response: i had to put saki in this...everything will get better
Date: 12/30/08 10:07 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so good!!! Love the story!
Author's Response: Thanks. it will keep getting better
Date: 12/30/08 08:12 am Title: Chapter 10
:O I ca-an't believe this! WO-H-OW! I wasn't expecting this twist, no way! :O you got me so thrilled, I must admit. Nice job ^^ Grr, I already hate that bitch! I'll enter the story and ruin her babydoll face with my punch if she keeps hassling Tom ._. poor soul, everyone keeps being nasty to him o.o even Bill! I hope Tom won't go and apologise to anyone, especially Bill... he's the one who should come and beg! MAKE SOMEONE PASS OVER LORRAINE WITH A TRUCKKK :D Oh I'm going to answer your mail now ^^
Author's Response: Thank thank you!
Date: 12/30/08 06:47 am Title: Chapter 10
o_0 I'm utterly confused!
Author's Response: How? On with part? Is it the lorraine and tom thing? If so, it goes like this. Tom is not serenity's biological father. Miguel is. (He mentioned later on in the story.) Tom and lorraine are best friends. When she got pregnant tom decided to take care of the baby since the real dad wasn't around. Now when lorraine got famouse, she started spending less time with serenity. She would leave her a lot with tom. So that's how she started calling tom daddy. Lorraine would come back into ren's life then leave again. Bill will be more of a mother fiqure to ren, rather that lorraine.rnrnrnI'm so sorry if it's confusing. Just remember....tom isn't serenity's real dad. Miguel is....this is important information you will need to remember for an upcoming chapter....tell me if this help somewhat. I didn't want to give away all the details of upcoming chapters. I hope you understand cause this is just the begaining! Thanks for alway reviewing. I love reading yours!rnrn-brittney :)
Date: 12/30/08 02:32 am Title: Chapter 10
I knew it! Ren isn't his! Argh... I wish He and Bill would reconcile already... Aaaaww...
Yay!! More more more!!XD LOLZ!!!XD
Author's Response: They will..promise! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/30/08 02:29 am Title: Chapter 10
oh wow didnt see tht an i actually was tearing up at the end with tom really sad but good
Author's Response: I didnt want to make you sad. sorry. more soon. promise! Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/30/08 12:25 am Title: Chapter 10
og....j'adore this chapter. it was just woah...all these revelations and such...bill und tom need to hurry and get back together...AND...that bitch CANNOT take Serenity. growl xDD
Author's Response: Thwy will. promise..more revelations will come into view later down the line. Thanks!
Date: 12/29/08 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
*hugs Tom* Lorraine is a bitch and Bill needs to hurry up and call Tom. Poor Tom being stuck in these situations.
Author's Response: I know. Things will get better. thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/29/08 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
*spazz* I KNEW IT!! hehehehe, I TOTALLY KNEW that Ren wasn't even his kid! *dances* I think I said something like that in a review, too!! -dances more-
lovely chapter, though I seriously think Bill needs to pick up the phone and call Tom. otherwise he's gonna drive himself crazzy. yup yup, and its never good to let a father go insane- it's scary O__O
hehe, please update soon! I wanna know what the paparazzi say about this? did they already know Ren wasn't actually Tom's? hmmmm...
Author's Response: Yup. Finally we know that Serenity is not Tom bio kid but he is still a father to her regardless. Bill and tom will get back together soon. promise..thanks for reviewing!