Date: 12/31/08 01:13 am Title: Chapter 11
oh my god i love this story sooooo much.
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 12/30/08 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
FINALLY!
Author's Response: yup! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/30/08 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
awwwwww soo adorable
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 12/30/08 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! So cute! =)
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Date: 12/30/08 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 11
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I'm gonna cryyyy...^^
Author's Response: please dont! i will update as soon as possible
Date: 12/30/08 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wow. That was really good and I am wondering something. Your Chapter End Notes lead me to think that this is the end, it better not be. There is to many loose ends. What about the mother. and the court case. Too many loose ends. Getting engaged doesnt make every thing alright.
Author's Response: i know...its going to cause problems down the line. Thanks fore reviewing!
Date: 12/30/08 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
Oh poor Tom. He must be having such a hard time. Knowing that he may not be able to be his daughter's father for long. But hoping for the best. That has to be hard and add on the fact that Bill is in Paris and he is wondering if Bill is going to take away that baby (or should I say babies) also. That has to be soo stressfull for him. Poor Tom. He better get full custody and that Lorraine get nothing.
Author's Response: yeah...but it will work out promise! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/30/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
i loved this. im glad Bill went home to tom.. more soon ok?
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/30/08 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
That's sweet.... Keep it up with this one..
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Date: 12/30/08 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMGoodness. I didnt see that coming. How could she do that. If she wasnt a part of her life then why would she want to now. And is her new boyfriend the father or what. Whats sad is that since she is one of her biological parents she has a good chance of winning the court case. A really good chance if her new boyfriend is the father. But Tom has a good chance since he is in a stable relationship and has taken care of her for the last five years. So lets hope that the judge/jury sees that.
Author's Response: all we can do is hope. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/30/08 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 11
uhhh... there's only a few sentences here... :
maybe you should try to repost
Author's Response: i did and it should of worked. check back now
Date: 12/30/08 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
What??? Serenity isn't Tom's?!? Okay, now I like that skank whore Lorraine even less. She'd better not pull some stunt about taking Ren away from him... she's got a much better family with Bill and Tom, and Tom's a good daddy. I hope Kiro shows up again at some point.. I kinda like him. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/30/08 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
Awwww...Tom has no idea Bill is coming home....
Author's Response: not yet he doesn't.
Date: 12/30/08 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
I love the new banner, very fitting I think.
Can't wait to see the Proposal part, should prove to be very tear-filled.
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 12/30/08 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
Lorraine must die
hurting Tomi is bad
love the story
Author's Response: she cant die cause she a part of the whole story..thanks for reviewing
Date: 12/30/08 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
great chap again!!! :D x333
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 12/30/08 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
:o when are you gonna update? I'm SO eager!
Author's Response: right now in about 30 mintues
Date: 12/30/08 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
You put Cinema Bizarre into the story to!! 0.o
Okay...I want...Bill to have a complete and very very angry rant to "the bitch" =D
Can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response: you got it. it will be in chap. 11 or 12 so look out for it. thanks fore reviewing
Date: 12/30/08 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
simply love this...
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 12/30/08 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
Oh, my God! Poor Tom! Update soon!
Author's Response: later tonight promise!