Date: 02/06/09 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 24
No problem with unbeta'd stories, but just for curiosity...
"Right on *que* Christian started crying."
"que"??? Where are you from dear? =D
By the way, awesome as always!^^
Date: 02/06/09 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 24
Awww so cute.. Loved this.
Date: 02/06/09 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 24
Kind of boring, but I hope it's a good set up for drama in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Kind of boring.....thanks...the last chapter should have engough drama....I hope. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 02/06/09 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 24
awe that was so cute!!!
this story is just so good, i really like it!!!
ahahahaha my sweet 16?lol
you're doing a great job, i can't wait for the sequel=DD
Date: 02/06/09 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 24
aww that was cute :D
Ren and Gabe make a cute coupole :D
Date: 02/06/09 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 24
:D
I've been waiting for this, and now it's here^^ weeeee
Date: 02/04/09 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 23
aww love it update pllzzz verryyy soon
Author's Response: I'm writing the last chapter right now. soon it will be posted! Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/28/09 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 23
more more more more
Author's Response: Soon! I'm in the writing process. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/28/09 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 23
awww i loved this chapter, i cant wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Thanks! More soon!
Date: 01/28/09 09:58 am Title: Chapter 23
It seems slightly weird Bill would freak out that badly when he thought Tom cheated when he had sex with Bushido...
Author's Response: know. But they dont speak about it...you will find out why in the sequel comming up soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/28/09 08:02 am Title: Chapter 23
Oh my fucking GOD!!!!! How can Bil freak out about THINKING that Tom has cheated on him, when he's the one who cheated??? Oh my god!
Author's Response: Yeah...... But tom doesn't think about it.
Date: 01/28/09 05:01 am Title: Chapter 23
Tom got a little hurt:D *dances*
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah I tried a little for you! LOL......next part soon as I finish writing it. I want to get to the sequel soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/27/09 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 23
But Tom did cheat on him...Their problems with infidelity aren't done yet, I'm guessing. They did kiss inside the room if I'm not mistaken...
Author's Response: Yeah but of course their problems aren't done. More stuff will happen in the sequel. Thanks fir reviewing.
Date: 01/27/09 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 23
But what about the sequel?!?!?!
*sigh*
I love this story, especially Serenity.
Author's Response: The sequel will be called 'Family Portrait' and it will be taking place 3 years after this story is done. I'm excited for cause it more packed with stuff and people. I love Serenity too and she will play a big part in the sequel. So stay tuned and thanks for reading this!
Date: 01/27/09 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 23
oh god i stopped reading this story for 3 days 'cause i was out of town and here you come and make it a whole lot better!!!!i love you=DDD
and about bill cheating on tom with bushido i just want to say that HOW COME TOM CAN BE A TOTAL MANWHORE BUT IF BILL GETS A LITTLE "INTERESTED" IN OTHER MAN PEOPLE MAKE A BIG FUCKING FIT!!!its not fair.
tomi isn't being the most faithfull husband but yet they expect bill to be a devoted one????fuck no
Even though i've never liked Bushido, and never will,i actually liked that bill cheated on tom with him,thats what he gets for being a man-whore, going around kissing his ex, and getting tired of bill!!!!!!!
and yay the baby was finally born!!!!
i hope you update soon=DDD
Author's Response: I know. Billshido is one of my favorite pairings! I wasn't planning making Bill cheat but some reviewers wanted it so I tired to fit it in. Tom doesn't mean to cheat and be a man whore. Deep down he loves Bill but burks still kinds fasinates him. In the sequel Bill won't really cheat again but Tom will and that will the last time he does. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/27/09 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 23
Aaaawww...
BABYYYYYYYYYY!!! Sorry... I can't help it!! I soooo love your banner!! Baby, baby, baby!!! So CUTE!! Gaaaaaaaggghhh...
At least some things are settled now. Guughh.. I hope everything will be alright for them. And the SEQUEL!! I can't wait!!XDXD Heeeeee...
Author's Response: Me to! I have 6 chapters already written out and I hope people like it as mush as I do. It will be called 'Family Portait'. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/27/09 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 23
aw... so cute!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/27/09 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 23
Awww... That was so cute..Love this story..
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/27/09 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 22
omg.....i cried during almost this entire one. i dont know what to say except i cant wait to read more!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry that you almost cried. More will be up soon. Thanks!
Date: 01/26/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 14
gosh I just love it when the people are in labour and shouting their husbands xD hahaha.
Author's Response: me too! and you know that Bill would do something like this. Thanks!