Date: 06/07/11 07:22 pm Title: dont know'em, but gotta save'em
It's great, write some more, I want to know what will happen
Date: 08/05/09 02:00 pm Title: i dont wanna fight... but sometimes i gotta.
GOD I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASEEEE?
Date: 12/18/08 08:21 pm Title: dont know'em, but gotta save'em
I loved it :)
write more soon? :D
Date: 11/16/08 08:44 pm Title: dont know'em, but gotta save'em
Bill shouldn't ahve been a bitch to poor tomi !
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Author's Response: i know right. well thats why its interesting ash. your a dork. XD
Date: 11/16/08 11:04 am Title: dont know'em, but gotta save'em
More?
Author's Response: yesh. :3
Date: 11/16/08 10:51 am Title: dont know'em, but gotta save'em
Awww cute Billa! Keep going!
Date: 11/16/08 09:05 am Title: dont know'em, but gotta save'em
give mee morrre :D hahah it was good and poor Bill :'(
Date: 11/16/08 01:50 am Title: dont know'em, but gotta save'em
I think it's been rushed a little. It's a good Idea, but this scene should happen at like.. chapter four. Right now it's just a skeleton. You still need to add nerves, vein, muscles organs fluids sking... everything. It's complicated, but you have the basic structure thus far. Work on it.
Date: 11/14/08 12:17 am Title: i dont wanna fight... but sometimes i gotta.
that was freaking awesome i cant wait to read more .dude yyyyooooooooouuuuuuurrrr igzirulating.
Author's Response: thanx. ura dork.
Date: 11/13/08 02:45 pm Title: i dont wanna fight... but sometimes i gotta.
What do I think?
LOVED IT...
So, normaly I've writen a death threat too, but right know I'm gonna kill my twin, she changed my shampo with orange hair color, it's gonna take ages too make it look the same!
Author's Response: thanx! XD your sister did that to you? thats kind of evil...rnwell I'll wish u the best of luck with getting your hair color back if yournkeep reading my story. :)
Date: 11/13/08 07:40 am Title: i dont wanna fight... but sometimes i gotta.
more please
Author's Response: *nodnod* :D
Date: 11/13/08 01:06 am Title: i dont wanna fight... but sometimes i gotta.
Like it:D plz update soon;)
Author's Response: i will i will! :D
Date: 11/13/08 12:16 am Title: i dont wanna fight... but sometimes i gotta.
Hmm...interesting. What's he gonna do in SanFran...the city known for a its high gay population. This could get VERY interesting. Hehe
Author's Response: weeeelllll.... its gonna be crazy.... ^_^ youll see what happens! heehee...