Date: 12/31/24 08:39 am Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
so cute!
Date: 05/14/10 03:39 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
really good... =D
i loved it....first the cuddles and cuteness and the hotness..
Date: 10/26/09 10:22 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
this is a classic! i never get tired of reading this kind of story (and every author gives it his/her own spice)...
sigh.. it's good every time C:
nice job!
Date: 12/09/08 01:15 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
Wooohohow, now THAT'S what I call hot writing! Can I borrow your writingskills for some days, bitte? (A)
Author's Response: thank youuu:)If i could share them, I would. lol I don't really think I'm that great but thank you very much
Date: 11/16/08 07:30 am Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
Sad face was because I wouldn't want to be selfish and tell you I could help you but then have to respect my timing :/ *sigh* school's a real nuisance... oh but you ask for help whenever you want or feel like doing it ^^ just send me an e-mail whenever you want ;) we should stop chatting through reviews now or we'll get in trouble! XD see you soon xxx and hope to read from you too.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 11/16/08 12:06 am Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
nice ending
Author's Response: thank you.
Date: 11/15/08 02:35 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
If you think that could help, then fine- I'm on :) HOWEVER you have to know that my time is not so much at various times of the year (like these three weeks...), considering school and all, so I'd have to respect that if you agreed :(
Author's Response: im at school too. i'll be busy these next two weeks then im out till january. you don't have to read all of the ones i write lol i'm pretty spontaneous. some times i just feel like writing and i'll post them if im done. why sad face?
Date: 11/15/08 08:03 am Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
I'm not a beta, nee :) I'm italian you know, I don't feel so confident with my english yet and I wouldn't want to be cocky and say I'd be able to make a FULL and satisfying beta *blush* I could help, true, but not as a full beta. I spot a few mistakes, that's normal, but you see I have doubts myself at times :x depends still on how deep you want your beta-ing to be ;)
Author's Response: lol well I would show you my stories before I posted them, I like your input. Italian? Thats awesome, I'm just full blown Canadian lol. I'd like your help if you don't mind. I could just show you my stories before I decide to post them.
Date: 11/14/08 01:24 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
How to get a beta? See, there's a LIST in the section 'main menu' (if you put the jelly layout you see it as the first section on the right part of the page), then you choose which beta satisfies your needs and contact them ;) as easy as that :D But then again, it's your choice whether to pick one or not, I am just suggesting because I wouldn't want your fictios to be killed by some typos ;) because they're really good. After all, you're in my favs ;)
Author's Response: awww thank you! :) are you a beta? Cause i'd be down with you cheaking my stuff for me, you seem to know what your talking about. and after all i'm in your favs. :p
Date: 11/14/08 12:16 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
Ohh, cute :)
So, you want constructive criticism? Here you go ;)
- you're really good at descriptions, and there you've got a good point; however, you swtich pretty quickly from a scene to another, I'd work on that point a bit more.
- your dialogues are fine, some inappropriate words used here and there but that can be fixed with a beta ;)
- also, I suggest you use a beta for your typos, those kinda kill the story if it's got this potential ;)
It was good :) you should really continue writing, you've got talent and can only improve!
Author's Response: lol thanks for being honest, and polite about it. These stories are the first thing I've written besides stuff for school, so I'm pretty surprised people actually enjoy them. I need to get a beta but I don't know howw. I'm very new to all this writing stuff lol.
Date: 11/13/08 02:36 am Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
I really like this! Bill is so cute, and I adore when Tom looks after him. =) I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for more fics from you!
Author's Response: :) thank you, i'll try to have another out soon. but schools hectic right now unfortunatly.
Date: 11/12/08 09:24 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
i loved it lolz u shoudl totally without doubt keep writing these amazing storys
Author's Response: aw, thanks! I will :)
Date: 11/12/08 04:31 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
This plot isn't the most original one, but the little details still made it a very good read.
I absolutelly adored the image of little bill huging his pillow.
And like everyone said allready: Very sweet ending. It made me smile. ^^
Author's Response: lol the image of little bill is so adorable, he is so adorable. thank you, i have the most trouble with the endings lol trying to end them just right.
Date: 11/12/08 03:04 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
aawww it was great! loved it
Author's Response: :) thank you
Date: 11/12/08 01:55 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
that was so cute! and again, im so in love with your endings. they're so perfect and cute. i definitely think you should keep writing. your stories are such a perfect mixture of innocence and smut. i love reading them, so definitely dont stop. and there are a lot of good stories that don't have a huge amount of reviews. believe me i've read a lot of stories. lol
Author's Response: lol thank you, i really appretiate your reviews, makes me want to write more! I just got a few negative ones before, kinda makes you feel like crap for a bit you know? but i still plan on writing more! :)
Date: 11/12/08 01:29 am Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
Hot! and well written. Good ending.
Author's Response: thank you :) I try to always make the endings good.. its hard sometimes to come up with just the right line lol
Date: 11/12/08 12:02 am Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
Awww that was cute! and hot haha.
Author's Response: lol thanks :)
Date: 11/11/08 11:45 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
That was really sweet! I liked it, alot! =]
And I thought Bill's last line was so cute for some reason! Almost sly...or coy. Anyway, awesome! :D
Author's Response: lol glad you liked it! :) thanks for reading.
Date: 11/11/08 10:44 pm Title: It Was A Dark And Stormy Night.
that was hawt.
I'm a little depressed, and it made me feel better. Thanks.
Author's Response: aw, I'm happy it made you feel better. :) dont be depressed, lifes too short.