Date: 07/14/12 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I really loved this story. I love their complex emotions, it's realistic and they feel like real people. This is my fav part of twincest- that uncertain feeling and them trying to figure out what they feel n where they stand. You write it incredibly well. Superb. Amazing writer. Love it! :)
Date: 03/14/11 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
So so so beautiful! I usually don't really like song fic, but this one is pure win. The story fits so well with the song, especially the last sentence, LOVED it! Beautiful fic for a beautiful song (how can you not like Coldplay! O_O lol).
``Bill's voice was a keyframe throughout Tom's life.`` This part was one of my favorite, how Tom grew up knowing all Bill's different intonations... I really don't know how to explain it but I really love the way you write things, always trying to find an original and poetic way to say simple things. You have a lot of talent and I'm so glad I came across your stories!
Date: 07/20/10 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
sweet :)... cinfusing.. but sweet
Date: 11/13/08 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome ass fuck and I love thus story excuse the language but I feel srongly about this story and must use strong words I love your writing style and this story is so well written and is so beautiful and is just......it puts me at a loss of words
Author's Response: aw, thank you so much! <3
Date: 11/12/08 01:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Just don't you ever even dare toy think yur writing sucks. Silly you! I loved it and it was so emotional and so well written and ... *snifs* ;_;
Oh, I know, I'll think of what gave you the inspiration and smile a wee bit, lol.
Really great! b29;
Author's Response: Lolol inorite? Maybe I should say what happened while I was writing this, it would make it look so ridiculous lol Thank you sooo much Di, for everything <3
Date: 11/12/08 12:52 am Title: Chapter 1
This was not crappy at all. I loved it, actually. Great job, and I really hope the next project from you isn't a long way away. :)
Author's Response: :D :D Thank you so much, Sophia!
Date: 11/11/08 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
beautifully written
Author's Response: :) Thank you!
Date: 11/11/08 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this--I like your style of writing and the way you have of evoking emotions. I have to admit, I wasn't thinking Coldplay when I read it, I had Black in my head, but it worked just was well. ;) This was nice.
Author's Response: Lol, it makes sense that you didn't think of Coldplay xD Thank you so much for the review b29;
Date: 11/11/08 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Liz, thank you so much :) Your stories are always so powerful and emotional *hugs* This one was no exception, I really, really loved it. ♥
Author's Response: That was the point, wasn't it? I'm so happy you liked it, thank you so much *hugs* &heatrs;
Date: 11/11/08 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
Author's Response: :D Thank you so much!
Date: 11/11/08 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
it was great girl,so intense and realistic!
and so much better in english,you have no idea...
Author's Response: :D Thank you! They're always so much better in English ;__;