Date: 05/10/10 01:03 pm Title: Remember, what you're staring at is me.
I wanted a happy ending, but you made me cry, lol
Date: 01/03/10 03:49 am Title: Remember, what you're staring at is me.
This is so sad...It really made me cry
Good Job!
Date: 11/19/08 07:26 pm Title: Remember, what you're staring at is me.
I love this. It's very intense and the last line is so powerful. It leaves me with this little ache in my chest every time I read it!
I'm going to second what everyone else is saying... Any chance of more of this? You need to fix them!
Author's Response: It took me so long to take in the fact that one of my fave authors reviewed my fic! Thank you so much for everything! And well...let's say that there might be a chance of more! Can't guarantee anything, though! XD Thank you so much again! *hugs* <3
Date: 11/12/08 10:40 am Title: Remember, what you're staring at is me.
i love this song..!
it is so sweet..and angst!!!!!
Author's Response: It is so weird for me to see a comment of yours in English, lol! Thank you! *hugs* <3
Date: 11/12/08 12:26 am Title: Remember, what you're staring at is me.
So beautiful and sad
Author's Response: Aw thanks :)
Date: 11/11/08 10:01 pm Title: Remember, what you're staring at is me.
well jesus. their needs to be a warning saying "depressing". seriously i think im about ready to kill myself. i guess i watch disney channel too often because i expected a happy ending. but no, apparently certain people have other plans in mind and wish to bring forth misery upon their readers. so congratulations turd. you have succeeded. lol im kidding(sort of) even though this was intensely depressing i loved it. it was beautiful and i wish there were more chapters.
Author's Response: lolol I liked the 'turd' name. xD You know, I honestly found it really hard to write a happy ending ._. It just didn't seem write, for some reason. Sorry for the depression and misery! I'm glad you enjoyed it, though. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing! <3
Date: 11/11/08 09:51 pm Title: Remember, what you're staring at is me.
it's sad:( I like the song though^^
*I.MISS.YOU*
I love your writing, miss reading it too^^
*Pda*
Bill left everything behind because...
(it's late and i'm almost falling asleep, brains not working:/)
...They love each other and it can't be?
*Jarlove*
It's a nice story though^^
*hugs*
B.
Author's Response: Aw, panda sis! I miss you, too! We'll talk really soon, though! <3 Well, I guess Bill left because he was scared? I honestly don't know xD I guess he was tired of not being able to express his love in public the way he wanted to, and along with fear he ran away. :( Thank you for reading and reviewing! *hugs back* ^_^
Date: 11/11/08 09:31 pm Title: Remember, what you're staring at is me.
Huneybunch, we are all here, another BUNCH, but not honey, just Skittle, Gummi and Pumpkin, and reading this and shuddering from it again, praying for this never to happen, I mean, in the 1st place, no leaving each other at all!! Well, I dunno if it's right to say this, but yet I have to agree with itsasecrettx' words; maybe you should continue this!! I got it it was just a sudden idea from that song but still!! Though I also dunno if it's lucky to ask you for more cuz as we know you, you very probably would kill one of them and then I could just cuss you out, and myself, too, for being as stupid as asking for another chappie!! *snickers* Well, we still like it, though!! But honestly, I think I would really like to see how it could progress if Bill happens to really go back to Tomi! Yeah, what's then, Missy??
"What's then, Love?"
"What's then?? Hm??"
Okay, don't take us seriously!! *giggles* Just couldn't help it!! We really started to wonder hard!!
Well done, well done, well done!!
*kissy-kissy-kissy* Luv ja, YO!!!! *lol*
Author's Response: *giggles* Hey Loves!! We do know that this will never happen, don't we?? Oh yes, we surely do!! As for the sequel, as I told itsasecrettx, maybe it would ruin it and I so don't want that to happen! Though, you know, if you have any ideas to give me, I am right hear to listen!! For sure I wouldn't kill them!! lol In my mind, Bill has to pay the price! I am so mean, yes!! Ah well, maybe I will think of smth to do, maybe not!! Thank you so much, Babies!! Even though you'll be here in a while, I wanted to respond to your review!! :D I am more than happy you liked it!! You know it means so much to me!! Thank you!! For everything!!! Luv ya, too!! *kisses*