Date: 11/21/07 03:55 pm Title: Comparing scars
you're updating so fast!!
keep going!I'm afraid of Tom friends reaction to Bill
Date: 11/21/07 02:48 pm Title: Comparing scars
oh ...wow...loved it....and it made my heart ache ...
Author's Response: that's what i'm going for... but things will get better... keep reading to find out... things will get really intense...
Date: 11/21/07 02:36 pm Title: Comparing scars
Wow....intense story. I like it ^_^
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 11/21/07 02:23 pm Title: Comparing scars
I loved it hope you update soon.
Author's Response: thanks ^_^ i will :D
Date: 11/21/07 02:13 pm Title: Comparing scars
shit, i dunno why i enjoy it so much, i love agony what isnt real in reality and is hidden. the way characters feels, in every situation, that's something i appreicate. maybe it even helps me to let out my feelings while reading this stuff. but i personally dont wish anyone a life like this but in acted way it shows your heart why people are having emotion and how they are feeling. and thats the way of living for someone. aw.
oh and im so sorry about your parents' divorce.
hope you'll post more soon:)
Author's Response: working on the fourth chapter now :D i'll try and post it soon :D... i'm glad you like my writing, i'm just writing how it felt during the time, and how it would feel to be in that position.
Date: 11/21/07 02:12 pm Title: Comparing scars
poor Bill
how old are they in here? cuz i think they are already 17 cuz Bill has black hair with blonde streaks
i'm sad cuz u make this chapters so short
try and make them longer plz
Author's Response: yeah their 17, almost 18... i'm sorry the chapters are short... but it makes you guys crave more, and that makes me happy :D
Date: 11/21/07 01:25 pm Title: Longing to feel
O.o poor Bill
this is so sad
Jorg is a bastard
Tom really likes his brother
Simone seems an awful mom...i always think Bill is close to his mom than Tom is
Tom should be with his father and Bill with his mom cuz he's the sensitive one
can't wait for more
Author's Response: don't worry, everything will clear up in the later chapters... ^_^ i'm glad you like it :D
Date: 11/21/07 01:02 pm Title: Longing to feel
shit my heart missed some beats when i read the place about bill. i hate when parents do this.
i can't, i so want more. and i'd be so grateful if you'd post it asap :) !
Author's Response: working on the third chapter... yeah, i know what it's like... my parents are divorced... i live with my dad and my brother's live with my mom...
Date: 11/21/07 01:00 pm Title: Longing to feel
This is so sad. Nice to see that Tom is nice to him, but it seems like it's more because of Bill's appearance. Or that's my impression at least. :P Must say that you're a talented writer! Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: thanks hun ^_^ i'm working on the third chapter now... like i said before... things will get better ...
Date: 11/21/07 12:41 pm Title: Longing to feel
wow, Bill's life it's so sick!
it's a little weird that no one had notice before the way he's treated, but I'm loving this
Author's Response: thanks hun ^_^ i'm working on the third chapter now :D
Date: 11/21/07 12:24 pm Title: A stir of new emotions
I hope Tom don't like Bill just because suddennly he founds him attractive
Author's Response: Lol don't worry... things will start to clear up during the chapters later on :D
Date: 11/21/07 12:11 pm Title: A stir of new emotions
wow this is a good one
i want more now please cuz it was a short chapter
please?
Date: 11/21/07 12:08 pm Title: A stir of new emotions
I am intrigued, lets see some more :)
Date: 11/21/07 12:06 pm Title: A stir of new emotions
cuteeeee ^^ go on.. dont stop and make us happy!
Author's Response: i'm almost done with the next chapter :D
Date: 11/21/07 11:38 am Title: A stir of new emotions
oh fuck MORE o.o
Author's Response: haha i'm working on the second chapter ^_^ it should be up soon :D