Date: 11/27/07 02:05 pm Title: The poison
I love it you must post more of it...its a beautiful story
Date: 11/27/07 01:39 pm Title: The poison
ahhhhhhh so intense!!!!! crzy spin!!!!! omg keep going!!!!! update soon!!!!! i wont b at a computer all weekand!!! please get it up soon!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: don't worry i'm going to post the next chapter up soon, i've written half of it... i'm working on the other half... don't worry :D
Date: 11/27/07 01:22 pm Title: The poison
aaaaaaaaa it's the return of our worst nightmare if he hurts Bill again will you please let the whole gang "teach him a lesson"? (meaning Tom,Georg,,Gustav and Andreas) Poor Bill i'm suprised he hasn't tried to kill himself, not that i want him to... *snif* you're getting a BIG cookie
Author's Response: aaaaaawwwwww thanks for the cookie.... don't worry you'll love the next chapter....
Date: 11/27/07 01:09 pm Title: The poison
o_o ......... O_O ..... urge to kill rising....!!!! ATENTION ATENTION! URGE TO KILL RISING!!! I REPEAT: URGE TO KILL IS FUCKING RISING!
IT'S THE FUCKER!!!!! AH AH! GET HIM!!! GET THE FUCKER TO ME!!! I'LL TEACH HIM WHAT PAIN IS!!! xC give me my Needles!!! u'll cry so goddamn loud that my neighbors will beg for mercy to make you shut up! xD i'll cut ur balls off and give them to an chinese restaurant!
innocent voice: more plz ^^
Author's Response: the next chapter will be up soon :D you're funny :D
Date: 11/27/07 01:06 pm Title: The poison
jorg better stay away from ma billy or there's gonna be some sirious ass kicking! (Tom will take care of it)
haha nvm, just continue with the story! :D
Author's Response: i'm pretty much half way through the next chapter... so i promise you ti'll be up soon :D
Date: 11/27/07 12:42 pm Title: The poison
OH MEIN GOTT!! O__O
You HAVE to post another one tonight *bribes with cookies* lol
Author's Response: lol i'm working on it right now, i'm pushing myself to get it done... i owe it to you guys... you make me want to write better chapters... you guys rock!!
Date: 11/27/07 12:38 pm Title: The poison
Good lord, way to drag out the painful 'whathappensnextiness'. Don't bother looking that up, I'm pretty sure it doesn't exist. See, your writing skills force me to make up words because there weren't any to use. Can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response: lol i'm flattered ^_^ thanks for reading, i appriciate it :D you'll love the next chapter...
Date: 11/27/07 12:31 pm Title: The poison
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww they are so nice
Jorg? gjyhdcjhgjb ,khi oh no.they were so happy and now this animal....Bill's nightmare is back....
i hope they'll win the case and bill will stay with them forever *big puppy eyes*
Author's Response: i'm gald you liked this chapter, the next one will be better... i have it all planned out in my head :D
Date: 11/27/07 12:21 pm Title: The poison
o.o! i couldntsay anything
MOOORE!
Author's Response: working on it, next chapter will be better :D
Date: 11/27/07 12:21 pm Title: The poison
Aw what a mean place to end it! I adored Tom in this chapter, he was so sweet to Bill! I love how Bill likes to match their clothes. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Lol i'm sorry, but i thought it would be a good way for you guys to think what's going to happen... then next chapter will be better i promise you ^_^
Date: 11/27/07 12:01 pm Title: Buried alive by love
ADORABLE
omg Tom is so sweet
LOVE IT
post more
Author's Response: thanks :D the new chapter is up :D
Date: 11/27/07 10:39 am Title: Buried alive by love
.........!.THAT WAS.!.........
.......!.!..AMAZING..!.!.........
and YAY! THEY TOUCHED!!!! ^^
what an intense moment!!! crap! that was sooo fantastic! so erotic! ^^ so beautiful! you win the slash-award of the year! and they still didnt get into de real thing! wow... i cant wait.
and damnit.. "faggot"?! ok... i really wanna kill their father.. if he still can be called that. I thing "monster" would fit him more. .....DIE YOU EVIL THING! ROT IN HELL SON OF A B****!....
ok, that's better. ^^
and yeah, im wainting for the next chap.
Author's Response: you are so nice, you always leave me the best reviews :D i'm working on the next chapter... it should be up in a couple hours :D
Date: 11/27/07 10:30 am Title: Buried alive by love
that was awesome ..u made me so hot at first but at the end u broke my heart again ...i loved it as always
Author's Response: i'm glad you loved it :D i'm working on the next chapter :D
Date: 11/27/07 08:27 am Title: Buried alive by love
Another great chapter. I love this story, seriously! I love the way the twins act with each, it's so cute! Can't wait to see that b***ard Jorg get what he deserves and to see Tom and Bill furthering their relationship!
Author's Response: aaaawwwwwwwwww thanks :D i'm so happy you love it :D you're going to love the upcoming chapters :D
Date: 11/27/07 06:55 am Title: Buried alive by love
aww, lovely chapter! i love this story! plz update soon!
Author's Response: thank you ^_^ i'm working on chapter 18 now :D
Date: 11/27/07 06:31 am Title: Buried alive by love
Geez this is so good! I liked this chapter very ! It was so hot ^_^ But I still fell so sorry for Billi! It's just horrible what Jorg's done! I just wanna kill him! No.. That would be an easy punishment, he desrves the pain that Bill's andure all his life! I really hope they win this case! And I love the way Tomi act! It's so adorable! Aww I'm totallt obsessed woth this fic! And I have to praise you for updatiing this often! It makes my day ^^
Author's Response: thank you so much :D i'm glad you loved it.... i'm working on the next chapter right now :D
Date: 11/27/07 06:24 am Title: Buried alive by love
OMG O_O
More...MORE
Author's Response: i'm wotking on it :D i'm glad you loved it :D
Date: 11/27/07 06:23 am Title: Buried alive by love
aaaaaaaaah , thats so lovely!
more!!
Author's Response: lol thanks, i'm working on it :D
Date: 11/27/07 06:21 am Title: Buried alive by love
Wow! I loved that chapter, dear! It was so amazing ^^ I loved the way that Bill begged and when Tom discovers the worse scar on Bill's back *-* It was so tender and cute. I can't wait for more! So, read you in chapter 18th! With all my love, jaenkaulitz =)
Author's Response: aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thank you so much Jaen :D i'm glad you loved it, chapter 18 is being written now... i hope you like it :D ^_^
Date: 11/26/07 11:54 pm Title: Emotion sickness
WAAAAAA DEEPSHADOW87~!!!!
You rock my socks >w