Date: 12/29/08 01:26 pm Title: Coming out
Tom wrapped his arms around Bill in a protective manner, stroking up and down his arms gently. – awh
“My favorite color is black” Bill said all of a sudden. – actually to technically black is a shade not a colour. *giggles*
“But I had a pinecone named Carl, if that counts” – ah ha ha ha
“Did he touch you?” Tom couldn’t help but ask. – jealous much?!
“Oh Bill” he sobbed. – I second that OH BILL!!! Thank you for being brave!
“No, n-no, please don’t… D-don’t leave me” he cried out. – Oh Bill!!
“What happened sweetie” he asked still on the verge of tears. – Oh it’s Mommy Tomi *giggles*
He spoke softly “Dad happened”
Tom’s heart sank in his chest, his dad was beating his baby brother. – not so bright is he? That’s ok he’s in denial, it’s not just a river in Egypt.
Date: 12/29/08 01:08 pm Title: Flash backs...
I’m glad that in general they don’t split siblings up.
his tears falling like twin rivers, - nice line!!!
Now that you answered my question as to why Jorg got Tom…Why does Jorg hate Bill?
He had no friends nor a family to celebrate it with, and as a result he never got any presents not even a card. – not even from his mum?
“How could Tom love someone as ugly as me?” he asked his reflection. - Oh Billa he loves you very much!
Author's Response: thanks for the comments, you take time and effort to write them, i do love that. :)
Date: 12/29/08 12:59 pm Title: Let me in
“Would you… Would you like to…. Sleep with me again?” Tom asked his voice shaky.
“Do you want me to?” Bill asked looking over at him.
Tom nodded “Yeah, I really do” – me too…*winks* and then they had sex! …awh!
“Please (sniff) don’t (sniff) make me (sniff) go back” his voice was muffled but Tom could understand. – no don’t make him go back!!!
But something in his heart told him “Tom loves you and he wants to help you” – yeah Bill’s going to talk to Tom…and Tom’s going to make it all better!!!
Date: 12/29/08 12:47 pm Title: Wondering
“I told you my brother was cool” Tom said to the guys, causing Bill to break from his trance.
Bill blinked a few times, was he hearing right? – yeah love!
Tom made him feel weak, warm and strong all at the same time; - that’s not confusing for Bill is it?
Tom glanced over at his mother making sure she was occupied and then he rested his hand on Bill’s thigh.
That single touch made Bill shiver and when he did Tom did as well. – and then they had sex!....awh not yet? Ok fine
Date: 12/29/08 12:40 pm Title: Asking why
I wish Bill would just show her so he could stay safe with her and Tom. Why is Bill such a wimp? If he said something he would never have to go back!
Date: 12/29/08 12:36 pm Title: Comparing scars
Oh my Bill in Tom’s bed already?! I think Tom chose the movie on purpose. *grins*
Tom slid from out of the covers, his feet landing on the soft carpeted floor. He stretched and flexed his muscles. Bill couldn’t help but admire his brother’s body.
He was thin but muscular, his body was toned perfectly and his chest was smooth.
Bill looked away blushing, lucky that Tom didn’t see him.
Bill remembered how he used to feel about Tom when they were younger. He loved his twin, not a brotherly love but a lover’s love. – uh oh! *giggles* it’s all going down hill from here!
Date: 12/29/08 12:25 pm Title: Longing to feel
“Let me get those” Tom said moving Bill aside so he could get his bags out of the back seat. – Tom a gentleman?
How did Jorg not end up with Tom, his favorite?
And it was up to Bill to fend for himself, eating out of the dumpsters behind the restraunts, even though it was contaminated and old. – oh pathetic!
Tom smirked “I could get used to this” he thought to himself. – oh my Tom has it bad!
Date: 12/29/08 12:18 pm Title: A stir of new emotions
The intro was awesome. Teases but tells enough that I want more.
But someone caught his eyes and he was amazed. He watched as his twin brother, his flesh and blood walk out of the train searching around for them.
Tom bit his lip as he stared at him, he had become slightly taller than last year, his hair dyed black and grown out to his shoulders with random blond streaks running through the front and he had it straightened, covering one of his black shadowed eyes.
As Bill turned his head still searching, he moved a strand of loose hair out of his face revealing his black and white manicured hands, and Tom also noticed his new eyebrow ring. Tom couldn’t take his eyes off Bill’s pouty lips, his slender body which was covered in tight black clothing showing off his curves. – uh oh too late *giggles*
Date: 12/21/08 01:45 pm Title: Still standing
Actually this is my first review ever, so don't blame me for my bad english, that's the reason why this is the first time xd But god, this is one of the most beautiful stories i' have ever read! During some chapters i've really cried, it was so sad ö but i also laugh a lot xd great job , really ^^
Date: 12/20/08 01:29 pm Title: Still standing
WOW this story is amazing, i love how you write!!!! you really have talent i never ever cried for a story but you just did the impossible XDXDXD
Date: 12/14/08 05:20 pm Title: My gift to you
when they are talking, I can here In die nicht playing. well not really hear it but it would fit perfect. Ill go when you go, Ill go when you go. Its a match. Oh well. great story so far.
Date: 12/06/08 05:08 pm Title: Still standing
Such a beautiful ending :)
do you know how many times i cried while reading this story????
A LOT!!!!! that's how much!
i'm glad it ended happily, so thanx!
Bye Bye!
Date: 11/30/08 03:39 am Title: A stir of new emotions
omg i loved it!! its soooooooo good!! good job :]
Date: 11/22/08 04:53 pm Title: Still standing
what a sweet ending
I really thought billa died ><
gosh
Date: 11/21/08 03:37 pm Title: Still standing
Ohmygad! This story was so good! I cried so many times, because of the sad scenes. Poor Bill!!! O.O .. I feel so sorry for him.. All the things he had to go trough. And his mean dad! Who hurt him so much! .. God, I'm so glad that this story isn't real! .. And I just have to say, that you're a really good author! Not anybody can make other people cry because of their writing! So congratulations.. xD lol .. xD But anyway, your story is fantastic! And I loved the end! I was so scared that Bill might be dead, but he wasn't, and that made me so happy! 'Coz I don't like it when my favourite people die.. xDD Aaaaand.. xD Before I forget.. LOVED THE SEX-SCENES!! xDD
Date: 11/20/08 06:59 am Title: Still standing
OMG.....this was amazing....i spent the last 2-3 hours reading this and i ahv eto say, it was time well spent...this was AMAZING....like, seriously, and you had me on the edge of my seat....woosh. i need to sit back and take a rbeather...im seriously overwhelmed by this story.....good job, like seriously...
Date: 11/17/08 08:18 pm Title: Still standing
omg for a fucking minute i thought bill really died god i love this story why dont u make a mini squeal
Date: 11/08/08 10:41 pm Title: Still standing
d:)
Date: 11/08/08 10:35 pm Title: Confessions
wat tomi gonna do?
Date: 11/08/08 10:32 pm Title: Coming out
he told him.......d:)