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Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 12:52 pm Title: My gift to you

omg Tom is so sweet
hun u are the best...ur characters are so lovely .i bet that u are like this too...
can't wait for THE BIG NIGHT
my hearts beat so fast when i read so much sweetness

lots of kisses

Author's Response: aawwww thank you ^_^ you're sooooo sweet :D

Reviewer: Elle_Chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 12:02 pm Title: My gift to you

“I’m so happy the egg split…" hilarious sentence. *smiles widely* you made me happy again *yay* it's awesome once again.... gaaah i love you
*stares dreamily at the screen* don't get me wrong with that it's because you're so good. it was such a happy chap love all around *wheeeee* giggle Daddy Gordon rocks! cookie for you

Author's Response: aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww thanks i'm glad you loev it :D

Reviewer: TokioParade Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 11:15 am Title: Heartache every moment

AHHHH!!! please update sooon!!!
this is really good!!
Poor Billi!!
xoxox

Reviewer: annie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 04:02 am Title: Heartache every moment

cuuutie!
moreplease.

Author's Response: i'm working on it :D

Reviewer: taschatokio Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 01:22 am Title: Heartache every moment

Oh poor Bill, thats absolutely terrible )': He must be so scared!! This is an amazing story- i can't say it enough!!

Reviewer: taschatokio Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 01:05 am Title: The secret's out

That is so good! I was hoping there would be a story where Simone finaly accepts that its ok because thye love eac other s much and it shouldn't be forbidden.
Love this so much thanks thanks thanks for posting!!

Reviewer: taschatokio Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 12:50 am Title: Don't let them

Love this story!!

Reviewer: UriPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 12:50 am Title: Heartache every moment

Awwww so cute >

Reviewer: DerLetzteHoffnung Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 06:09 pm Title: Emotion sickness

This story has connections to you on a personal level doesnt it? You've experienced something like it i can tell. If not your a very rare talent. Not that your not a good writer anyway, i think your incredible!

Author's Response: well yes it is very personal to me... i've some what gone through abuse... but things are better for me now... thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: lixi05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 05:50 pm Title: Heartache every moment

aww, i love the ending of the chapter! please update soon!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks ^_^ i'm trying my best :D

Reviewer: DerLetzteHoffnung Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 05:27 pm Title: Flash backs...

Omg! I almost cried! It reminds me of robb flynn from machine head. Its so sad. ]: your an AMAZING writer and i dont say that often with real meanin.

Reviewer: lipa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 04:59 pm Title: Heartache every moment

duuhhhh
their father could be a bite more intelligent - he wants to win the case and send more evidence to them?lol
please update soon!!

Author's Response: lol things will clear up :D

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 04:55 pm Title: Heartache every moment

Yet another great chapter!

Author's Response: thank you ^_^

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 04:49 pm Title: Heartache every moment

oh god.. - "Gordon lifted the blanket and Simone gently placed Bill besides his older brother, immediately the two curled into each other.

Bill rested himself against Tom’s chest with his face buried in his neck, and Tom wrapped his arms around him protectively."

aaaaaaawwwww mein gott - that was the most cute think I ever read. ^^ gosh... my heart just melt like chocolate in a hot summer day! *heart eyes* the twins are so perfect together! i cant imagine anything custest than that scene^^
and that son of a bitch..! he's gonna cross in bills way again, isnt he? the bastard! someone gimme my needles, I need to poke someone with it! T.T
oh hun! please update soon like you always do! you really know how to make people happy! ^^ LOVE IT

Author's Response: i'm so happy you loved it :D the next chapter is being worked on...

Reviewer: BlackShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 04:21 pm Title: Heartache every moment

OMG!! MORE PLEASE!! it's so damn good! please more!!!

Author's Response: i'm working on it :D thank you

Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 04:10 pm Title: Let me in

oh god I have to stop reading cause its supper time T__T but thank god theres still 20 chapters to go... I love long GOOD stories ^_^

Author's Response: aawwww thanks... take all the time you need... it'll be here for a long time :D... i really hope you enjoy the rest of it :D

Reviewer: Elle_Chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 04:07 pm Title: Heartache every moment

*wwwaaaaaaaaahhhh* i need a hug, i bloody cried so much my mom came to ask what was wrong O.o hard time explaining this one let me tell you!! but it's a good chap and i just love gordon ::not as much as the TH-guys and Andreas :) just not possible::
but jorg just gets the blood under my nails grrrrr can i teach him "a lesson" *blinks cutely* please???? Prison isn't justice enough for that...that... thing!
cookies all around for you hihi

Author's Response: aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *Hugs Elle* i'm so happy you loved this chapter... things will start to get more intence in the upcoming chapters.... trust me you won't want to miss any of them :D

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 03:50 pm Title: Heartache every moment

Oh finally Simone has someone who entertains her, so she won't put he nosey nose into the boys' business lol what Jorg did was simply disgusting, but he was also stupid because now they have more prof! I'm really worried about that case, but I think they'll win it - I hope it so much. I'm glad you post so much and so soon, I love this story xxx Hope to hear about chap 27 soon :)

Author's Response: yeah i knew you would love that :D i'm so happy you love this story... things will start to get serious in the next upcoming chapters... so keep the look out for them :D

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 03:48 pm Title: Heartache every moment

*sobs* This was an amazing chapter *sobs* I'm all wide eyed right now, I can't believe Jorg! I hate him so much! He should be behind bars already that sick fuck! You write so amazingly good that it actually feels like this is really happening! It's like watching a movie! I can see all the scenes play inside my mind, ok that might have sounded crazy xD But it's like that! Because it's so good! I really love that Gordon is being so nice ! And I really started crying when i read the "I love you" -moment. So beautiful! And so good that he's ok with the twins relationship! And as always I love how Tom protects Bill! It's the sweetest thing ever! ^__^

Author's Response: lol thank you, and as for picturing it in your head, that's not crazy... that's how i do it and then i write it all down... i'm glad you like where it's going... i'm so happy that it's getting goor reviews :D of course i'm going to be doing a sequal after this one... so if you have any ideas you would love me to write about... just go ahead and say them :D

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 03:27 pm Title: Heartache every moment

really good
at first was so hot with that scene and so innocent in the same time
i like the way bill and tom act with each other,especially tom,he's so caring and gentle with bill
it's really a pleasure to read your story
and then that bastard jorg ruined everything,i hope he'll get what he deserves
gordon is such a good man,he's so nice with them,i'm glad that he knows about the twins and that he has nothing against it
i bet simone will marry him
they are such a perfect family

more

Author's Response: aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww thank you soooooo much. i'm so happy you love it :D ^_^ the new chapters will be getting longer so i can finish the story... but their will be a sequal... and i'm open for any ideas of things you would like to happen :D

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