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Reviewer: taschatokio Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/07 05:24 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

LOVED IT!
ALways do!!

I'm sorry that i don't really use other wordds to describe but its ust, i cant find the right ones!!

Please post more soon this is SOOO Good!!

Author's Response: aawww it's alright :D thanks for loving it :D

Reviewer: TokioParade Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/07 02:23 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

this is honestly THE best story i have ever read!!! i love it!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON!!! xoxoxox

Reviewer: Miyu Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/07 12:19 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

This is getting really intense! Its really good, i love the way you write with so much emotion. Its amazing. Simply amazing.

Reviewer: x_nannerl_x Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/07 11:30 am Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

I think I read it for 3 times since last night XD You haven't posted for 2 days and I missed it XDDD

Reviewer: blackeyes91 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/08/07 06:27 am Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

update soon!!!!!!:D:D:D

Reviewer: UriPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/07 12:58 am Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

Awwww yay!!!!!!

It's trial tiimmmeee~~~

Again, Darkshadow97, you are my freaking hero!

You have mad skillz

Author's Response: uummm, thanks so much, but it's deepshadows87... it's an honest mistake... i'm glad you love it! :D

Reviewer: cammii Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 08:54 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

I LOVE the story :')

Reviewer: theyaylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 06:41 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

OMG

O.M.G

MORE MORE

Author's Response: lol working on it :D

Reviewer: vampgurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 06:21 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

I loved it. Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 06:08 pm Title: A stir of new emotions

just popped in to say how much i am adoring this story. it's truly fantastic.
I'm really getting into the story (i do that sometimes)

Author's Response: aaaaawwwwwww thanks... lol don't worry i do it too :D

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 05:49 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

HELL YEAH!!! I swear..if they dont win...I'll suicide. SO THINK OF ME PLEASE! YOU DONT WANT ONE OF YOUR FANS DEAD, DO YOU? ... good. so pleaseeeeeee... let them win!!!!XD

Author's Response: you'll just have to wait and see, and no i want you guys to stay alive :D

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 04:46 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

Ow, the description of the day before the trial was so so perfect! It makes it just so real, the way Bill behaves too. Just.. don't know, Tom seems too calm, I think he will break down one day (if he will, Bill would literally die o.o) add more action like this, maybe a moment of tension when Tom breaks down? *shifty* yea, I'm cruel XD by the way I'm dying to read the real trial with Jorg, questions to Bill and proofs and yeah stuff. Mooooore *totally addicted*

Author's Response: aawwww thanks Silvia :D you're the best :D

Reviewer: aleja_billk07 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 04:07 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

i hope they win!!!
omg!! total suspense here!!!
hehe cant wait!!!
so far soo good!!

Author's Response: lol thank you so much :D

Reviewer: BlackShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 03:45 pm Title: A stir of new emotions

The whole story is amazing!!! everyone thinks so!

Reviewer: SaphiraDeath Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 03:38 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

amazing

Author's Response: aaawwwww thank you ^_^

Reviewer: ashleyjohnson Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 03:37 pm Title: A stir of new emotions

this is outrage! y you say this? you go back to half twinkle stars

Author's Response: dude... i'm sorry you didn't like it... but other people did... that's your opinion... and i'm fine with it... really it's fine...

Reviewer: jaenkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 03:33 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

OMG!! The day it's finally here! I can't wait for more! It's just amazing and I love the way that you write. I'm impatient for that trial. Hope they win and that Jorg going to be in jail, he deserve it for what he've done to Bill. Keep writing, dear, cause I'll be there to read it. Love ya, hun!

Author's Response: lol thank you! i'm working on it :D

Reviewer: ashleyjohnson Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 03:31 pm Title: A stir of new emotions

im understanding the part of you saying you like it but i am still very mis comunicated i dont see y u like it its very unpleasant to read
the brackets had no meaning, it was poorly describbled but i grant u with at least 1 star

Author's Response: um, well whatever... as long as other people liked it i'm fine with it...

Reviewer: ashleyjohnson Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 03:26 pm Title: Something else

“(suck) (suck) mmmm (smack)”


lol y is your adding this part? not very nice

Author's Response: um i like it :D

Reviewer: BlackShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/07 02:38 pm Title: The fire inside, his new weapon

O_o!!! OH MY FREAKIN' GOD!! you are killing me!! it was so damn good!! oooh

Author's Response: lol thank you :D

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