Date: 01/15/08 04:49 pm Title: A stir of new emotions
after... i don't know, some years without crying (haha, that's true), i'm here almost without breath, my shirt really weat xD yeah, you made my heath breake in a lot of little pieces :')
that was like, one of the best things i've ever read. just amazing. i read it in two days, i just couldn't stop haha great fic, congratulations :D
(sorry any english mystakes, i'm brazilian so... xD)
Date: 01/15/08 12:09 pm Title: Still standing
OMG!! no i caont be finished yet!!! this is the best story ever!!! i loved it, i started crying when i thought Bill had died!!
xoxoxoxox
Date: 01/15/08 09:27 am Title: Still standing
I seriously don't get why you haven't been featured?! I mean you write like a real, professional author and you're language is amazing.
I think, though, that it was a little bit nagging and it got a little bit boring with the "do you love me, Tomi?". But I didn't think it ruined the story, it just got a little bit long-drawn.
But I guess that if you live 7 years with a father like that, you probably have some small difficulties with trusting people.
I must say that you seem to know pretty much about court and trials and it made it all so much more realistic.
I think the last two chapters and the first 6 was the best. And I was crying like hell when I thought Bill was dead. I was like "NO NO NO NO!!! That can't happen, not now! Not when they are happy again" And it was such a relief when Bill was knocking at the door. Thank God for that!
10/10, and I still think you should be featured!
Author's Response: I was featured weeks ago, i'm not sure where my ribbion is, but oh well. I'm glad you liked it, and yes living like for someone for 7 years does tend to mess you up, trust me i should know. As for the trials, i did plenty of reasearch and watched alot of crime shows XD Thank you for your review.
Date: 01/15/08 03:12 am Title: Still standing
hehe warm and fuzzy :)
Date: 01/15/08 02:45 am Title: Still standing
YAY! finally a story with happily ever after in the end. gret job thanks so much for writing it. :D
Date: 01/14/08 09:00 pm Title: Still standing
aww its over
its very good
Date: 01/14/08 04:40 pm Title: Still standing
Gahhh you had me there for a second!!!
Fantastic, absolutely fantastic!!!
: claps :
Date: 01/14/08 04:18 pm Title: Still standing
omg i love this fict it is the best story i have read in my life i was serious it made me smile cry giggle and think of stuff i shouldn't be thinking ;) i hope you write more!
Date: 01/14/08 04:03 pm Title: Still standing
wow, this story was amazingggggggggggg!!!
i loved the ending, so cute and so perfect!!!!!!
im gonna be smiling at myself like an idiot for days, still thinking about the ending lool =]
Date: 01/14/08 02:51 pm Title: Still standing
Wow! This was amazing! :O
This whole story is seriously the best fan fic I've EVER read! :D
Really a gripping story from the wery begining all the way to the end... I know a lot of people who thinks the exact same thing.
I kept picturing everything in my head, and it seemed so real! Good it aint though :P
And I'm really glad that you didn't let Bill die in the end, that would just have ruined the whole story... Great work! :D
Date: 01/14/08 01:26 pm Title: Still standing
awe!!
you mede me believe Bill has died eheh...
i cried!!
the bes fan fic ive ever read hehe your going to my favourites!!!
i lovethis fan fic...
looking forward to another one of your wondelful fanfics...
awesome ending!!!:)
^_^
Date: 01/14/08 01:00 pm Title: Still standing
Best story ever! Congratz
Date: 01/14/08 12:59 pm Title: Still standing
oh god this is it ? O_O , wwwowoop.
i actually thought he died, but im in heaven that he didnt, this is just so good. was and is forever.
Date: 01/14/08 12:57 pm Title: Still standing
OMG
u nearly had me crying there... thinking Bill was either dead or crippled or smg =0
don't u ever do that to me again =@
just kidding =p
it was great! XP
Date: 01/14/08 12:51 pm Title: Still standing
omg lmao, happily ever after XDD you scared me so damn much!!! i was seriously sobbing my eyes out!!! i'm so sad it's finished... =] =]
Date: 01/14/08 07:49 am Title: Still standing
Oh my god!! I was beginig to think that you had killd Bill...I'm happy you did't^^)
Love the story hunny^^)
Please write a new one^^D
Hugz from me to you hunny^^)
Date: 01/14/08 06:10 am Title: Still standing
Omg.
that was fucking amazing!
i cryied so much...
that was my favourit fanfiction, im kind of sad that it ends..
good job!
Date: 01/14/08 03:21 am Title: Still standing
Awww.. *cries* The end? Already? ='( That was so so touching. Poor Tomi, he felt guilty and for a moment I thought that Bill was dead! Good job, hunnie, I loved that fic and that chapter =D Keep writting like that, dear. You're so so amazing! I love you so much!
Date: 01/14/08 02:32 am Title: Still standing
Omg I can't belvie it's over !!! *cries* No ! I'm gonna miss this so much ! This story got everything! I can't tell u how much I love it! You're such a good author Kat and the way you write is just perfect! And this last chapter was really great! However, I don't get the fact in my head that this was the last part *cries more* Aww! I love it! Thank you very much for this awesome work I feel honered to have read it!
Date: 01/14/08 12:53 am Title: Still standing
omg i cried because i thought that bill died but when i saw that he didn't i was so happy
i'm glad that they are well and that they are moving together
they deserve to be happy after all the bad things
very nice ending
congrats for this wonderful story!!!