Date: 08/28/10 12:37 pm Title: A stir of new emotions
THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER!! i read it with my best friends :)thanks so much for writing such a fantastic.i'm so happy there inlove.i read the hole story in 5 days i love it so much,i was crying at the last 3 chapters omg i just don't have words to say it's just way to much ,i was up all night and i still am.coz of the story i just had to read more.i'm just happy bill and the kaultz famliy are happy :) this was so happy,hartwarming,cute,sad,it made me cry,happy crying,going aww at the twin love,omg soo hot ,wow i just ,i'm just lost for words.all i can say is,is that i well NEVER and i mean never forget yout story,i think my mum even wants to read it o.0...oh my friend from school that does not know who TOKIO HOTEL is ,well she is reading it and LOVES it :) so it just shows that anyone can read it :)
Date: 08/25/10 07:07 am Title: Still standing
BEST STORY EVERb29;. I can never look at or listen to Bill & Tom ever again. In a good way. ;) b29;
Date: 07/27/10 02:30 am Title: Still standing
Woof. What a story! I loved the character interaction, especially the relationship that built between Simone and Gordon. And I loved the build-up of the love between the twins. And I thought how you portrayed Jorg was brilliant, I'm wondering if the person he promised Bill to was his sleeze-bag lawyer, an that's why he was getting so close to Bill while he was on the stand. A good story, a fantastic read! Thanks for writing it! Now I'm off to discover more storys you may have written! :-)
Date: 07/10/10 04:25 am Title: Still standing
I enjoyed reading this story, even though it wasn't quite up to my tastes, the ending was dramatic, which I enjoyed, and even though I got bored quite a few times, and almost quit the story something would hook me to keep me reading it.
Date: 06/28/10 07:04 am Title: Still standing
Owh damn u!!! Seriously!!! i thought that I should have stopped reading yesterday..... Seriusly! I ALMOST STARTED TO CRY WHEN I REALISED THAT BILL ACTULLY WAS DEAD!! Man u got me there!!! Seriously!! damn.. already said that 3 times O.o' SERIOUSLY I LOVED YOUR FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06/27/10 09:22 pm Title: Better of two evils
OMIFUCKINGGAAAAAD!!!
cant believe that it took me like 6 hours toread to this chapter!! Seriously! You have had me on edge like... 4 of these hours.. ANd i've been so fucking nervous for how it would turn out for Bill! Damn u and your writhing skills!!! ('nd my scary spotify list) seriously!! Now.. when my heart/brain can finally rest with the knowledge of that they are safe.. Iäm turning to bed! GOnna read the rest tomorrow!! THANK YOU ANYWAY!!!
Date: 06/23/10 06:58 pm Title: A stir of new emotions
Awesome! :D 1000 rew xD
Date: 06/19/10 10:26 pm Title: Still standing
okay.....i love this story its pure beauty a riviting love story......truth be told i`ve cried laughed and awwwwd more times in this story than i ever had in any other story.......ever
Date: 06/19/10 10:26 pm Title: Still standing
okay.....i love this story its pure beauty a riviting love story......truth be told i`ve cried laughed and awwwwd more times in this story than i ever had in any other story.......ever
Date: 06/15/10 07:37 pm Title: A stir of new emotions
I stopped reading the story two days ago because I was like totally sure you killed Bill and I got annoyed; I mean you really do write some sick stuff (which I like); seriously, I would never pick a fight with you - I would end up tortured and dead; I think your ideas are pretty good for Saw VII; But yeah I wanted to finish the story today and when I read the last lines I was like o.O - so now the story turned from awful to amazing; It was addictive.
Date: 06/14/10 10:02 pm Title: Comparing scars
For Bill to be so closed off- enough so that he doesn't want even his twin to know something is wrong, he's awfully clingy. Also, seeing as he doesn't eat much at /all/ when he's with Jorg, he should probably eat smaller portions, like he's used to. Somehow, a plate of spaghetti seems like a little too much after so much time without being able to eat normally. I think he should probably be more obviously lethargic for the beginning of his stays.
Maybe a little more detail on the scars and bruises, tell us which are the worst. If he's really the type to use a whip, what kind is it? He seems like more the type to use his belt buckle. That can hurt like a bitch, too.
Bill doesn't seem like the type to look into a mirror to survey his scars, unless they're new and require caring for. Instead, have him, say, walk toward the shower, trying not to think of the scars, but comparing his body with his brother's anyway. Or... something.
Haha, maybe you shouldn't listen to me. =P If I had this idea, I'd make Bill more closed off, leave Tom as cruel as he'd been during Bill's last few visits, and have their relationship slowly develop.
Speaking of, if kid!Bill loved Tom like one would a lover, that idea should be expanded on with flashbacks. First of all, how would he know the difference? How it happened. If you haven't already.
I know I should read more of the story before sending you such a critique, but I'd probably forget to later on. *sweatdrop* I'll come back to this story later on- the idea makes me want to go back and re-read other fan fiction with similar themes. ^_^ I hope my pointers make sense, and that you can make use of them somehow.
Date: 05/15/10 01:46 pm Title: Still standing
awsomeawsomeawsomeawsomeawsome
Date: 05/04/10 06:54 pm Title: Still standing
Wow... I'm just like...speechless... Amazing!! I haven't been able to put my laptop down for a second while reading this story. So beautiful! Thank you so much for writing it!!
Date: 04/19/10 03:45 am Title: Still standing
that was sutch a good story!!!!! wonderful job..
Date: 03/30/10 09:46 pm Title: Changes and special needs
hm...very um intresting. this is probably the most intense twinscest story ive read so far. 5 stars for the story line!!!
Date: 03/30/10 09:27 pm Title: Confessions
this story makes me cry....i have to read it in intervals 10 out of 5 stars for you!!!!
Date: 03/30/10 07:28 pm Title: A stir of new emotions
aww thi is so sweet and im not even getting 2 the good part
Date: 02/14/10 02:35 am Title: Still standing
Geeeze.
This story was intense.
It made me laugh smile cry and everything.
OhMAHGAAAD.
One of the best I've read :')
Date: 02/05/10 05:25 pm Title: Still standing
i cried. TITANIC CAN'T MAKE ME FUCKING CRY, AND RIGHT NOW I'M SOAKING MY HOODIE CRYING MY EYES OUT. fuck, sooo sad! i thought he died, and i was like 'NOOOOOO'! this story was really good C: