Date: 05/04/10 11:54 pm Title: The Arrivle
I like the concept but you have a lot of errors, gramatically.
Date: 05/04/10 11:50 pm Title: The Arrivle
I like the concept but you have a lot of errors, gramatically.
Author's Response:
I know i do, Its an old one i forgot about the grammer >.<;;
Date: 04/11/09 10:29 pm Title: THE END
It killed me inside to read that David and Georg diead
Author's Response: Well I truly needed it to go with a bang cause if not knowing me i would have done something like make it go on fifteen chapters of nothing but horribly written Geost sex. thanks for reading, >.<
Date: 12/04/08 07:31 pm Title: Only hours before
yeah,
no offense, but i would recommend putting correct puncuation, you know?
like when youre listing names it just comes in a huge jumble cause there is nothing to stop it, and also if you do youll probally get more reviews.:)
Author's Response:
>.<;;;;
Trust me on this, I am trying really, really, really hard to do that.. .I am vary bad with it. punctuation isnot my strong suit even my teaches got on my case for it....
Thanks ^__^
Date: 11/21/08 05:38 pm Title: The Present
whoo! ;] sehr gut!
Author's Response: Danke :)
Date: 11/17/08 11:58 pm Title: The Arrivle
ah! torture! D=
but i would probably do the whole gawking at gusti thing though xDDDD
sehr gut!
Author's Response: Danke rnsorry @D I am good at that. rnI believe you!
Date: 11/15/08 06:55 pm Title: Only hours before
I started laughing when I saw that I talked to Georg. LOOOOOOOOL
Author's Response: LOL Great eh? its amazing I am having so much fun with this ....
Date: 11/11/08 08:21 pm Title: Only hours before
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL! OMG! I was so surprised to come on here and see THIS. It's Krank from Gaia. XDDD
Author's Response: OMG OMG OMG I CANT BELIEVE I DID THAT TO YOU. XD I am sorry I think...